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Book name: Atlantia:Rose of rebellion
Author: Yanzieyy
Chapters read: (11/12)
Genre: Fantasy/ Adventure
Book status:  Completed

Title: ⅘
The title is really nice and it even catches my attention. Just I feel that ATLANTIA is a bit of a common word and also that it should be Rise of a  Rebellion. 

Cover: 5 /5
The cover is absolutely amazing. It's giving me that fiery and glowing effect which is required and even mysterious. The fonts are also too good. I loved it. 

Book description: ⅗
Before reading the book, I felt that the blurb is going somewhere wrong and why would you say it to be a cliché fantasy drama, but after reading, I realised that it was actually true. In simple words, you gave a nice description. But there's no mention about David anywhere. In all the eleven chapters I read, there is David, so I feel you should write something about him in the blurb and also ATLANTIA requires a bit more description. 

Prologue: ⅘
From the start till the end, the prologue was really interesting. There were no mistakes I could find in it and it gave a perfect mysterious feel. Just it could be more descriptive. 

Grammar: 9.5/10
There were no mistakes. I looked for mistakes all around but couldn't find any except some wrong punctuations. 

Plot: 6 /10
The plot is nice but is getting boring at a few places. And as it was written in the blurb 'This is a story you thought you knew', I am getting exactly those feelings only. Many places, this seems to me like those cliché fantasy books only. But, you can anyway make it interesting by using some creativity. 

Flow of the story: ⅗
The flow is a bit slower than it should be, because of which it gets boring at places. The length of the chapters is also less because you aren't describing things much. Giving a proper description of every single thing in a fantasy book is really important, and it would even make your flow steady. 

Creativity: ⅕
As I said, you are lacking creativity. Atlantia seems to me like some hundreds of year old place, but on earth only. It doesn't give me a feel that it's in a different universe because there are so many similarities between Earth and Atlantia, and differences aren't talked about. Also, the people at Atlantia seem like those on Earth. You can bring different creatures in your book to make it even more interesting and different. Just the 'magic' aspect isn't helping. 

Your interest based on the content: 2.5/5
It was getting a bit boring at places and was lacking creativity. Some new and different elements need to appear in the book. 

Overall opinion: 6 /10
Overall, it's a nice read if someone wants to read something on fantasy and adventure but this book has much more potential. 

Total: 44 /65

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