Chapter 39
I'm not giving any explanation why this story is ending.... I will only give you three reason why am I Ending this....
First one is very obvious one.... the vote.... every chapters votes are less.... I didn't complain as I knew that I was heading towards end of it story.... I did say it few updates but still remained Same..... votes would be like 113 or 114....
Look yourself the votes and viewers... I really appreciate you read but at least press the button... it won't take time... I will understand if there exams reason but if there is 500 to 600 viewers then why only 120 or 134 votes.... I'm not going to complain about votes anymore.... I appreciate comments too... I have no problem regarding comments.... I would even be happy when the votes around 150+....
The second reason why am I ending this story the main reason of why this that the storyline is over.... I am not going to drag the story when it is not needed... there is no point of me dragging or writing similar scene every time......
Third and finally reason.... this reason would be pathetic but it's true..... studies.... my studies my progress.... somewhere I know because of wattpad i am not able to progress as I'm so addicted to this..... I really need to be away from this.....
I gave you all my opinion.... what I think about.... three months back I have made decisions and I don't think I will be going away from that.... as the times pass I will be completing few more stories.... that's my opinion.... you can hate or pass negative comments... I don't mind but for my true readers and friends will be writing stories and completing them.....
Anyway starts with the update.....
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Neil was sitting in balcony and going through some website on his laptop... his legs were crossed and laptop was on his lap... with his one hand he was typing and while with other hand he was holding a cup of coffee and sipping....
He was scrolling down the page when he heard avni calling his name..... he kept the cup down and called stood up... he went to in room and saw avni looking around the room..... he called her name....
Neil: Jaan....
Avni turned hearing his voice and ran and hugged him tightly... he balanced himself while holding her tightly..... he caressed her hair....
Neil : Jaan......
Avni : Neil.....
Neil : yes Jaan... I'm listening..... what happened?
Avni : Neil...... woh.......
Neil broke hug and looked at while cupping her face.....
Neil : you worrying me..... what happened?
Avni : woh....... Manik Bhai......
Neil : what happened to Manik.....
Avni: hospital......
Neil : hospital..... how.... Jaan.... did something happened.....
Avni : hospital......
She was shivering which he felt.... he hugged her again holding her tightly in his arms... he caressed her hair while pecking every time..... he gave her time to clam down..... soon as he felt she was calming down he again broken the hug and took her to bed... he made her sit and moved to table side... he filled the glass and came back to avni and gave it to her.... she looked at him....
Neil : drink some... you will feel better....
Avni gulped the entire glass within second.... Neil was scared seeing her like this... some fears starts forming in his head....... she gave him the glass back and looked at him.... Neil kept the glass on bed and bend down on his knees and held her both hand in his....
Neil : Jaan..... what happened to Manik...... where is here......
Avni : woh....... I was coming...... from work..... when I got call..... from Nandini..... she said...... Manik is...... in hospital..........
Tears welled up..... Neil immediately pulled her in hug.....
Neil : sshh Jaan..... nothing will happen to Manik Jaan.....
Avni : I want...... to see him...... please....
Neil : Jaan you won't be going....... You need to sleep......
Avni : no...... I'm going.......
She pushed him and ran out of the room.... Neil ran behind her.... both were on road....... avni was running without caring about anything..... her breath was fast......
Neil was running behind her when he saw truck coming towards her..... before he could push her or call her...... he heard big boom.......
Neil : jaaaaaaaannnnnnn.......
He screamed while his body shivering and sweating...... he looked beside him and saw himself alone in bed.....
Neil : Jaan.... was it dream..... where is avni.......
He throw the duvet over him and ran to balcony and saw avni sitting completely lost..... he took deep breath before running to her and pulling her into tight hug.....
Avni who was sitting in balcony and lost was started with sudden hug..... she got more scared feeling tears on shoulder.... she tried pulling him from hug but he tightened.... she was worried for him now... he was never like this till he sees very bad dream..... he cried hiding his face in crook of her neck....
Avni : Shona......
She called him while rubbing his back...... Neil was hugging her only and shedding his tears breaking her heart.....
Avni : Shona...... won't you tell your Jaan..... please baby stop crying....... look if you cry then Jaan will cry too.....
Soon as she said he distanced himself and looked at her..... seeing his red eye her heart broke she immediately cupped his face and wiped his tears.... she planted a soft kiss on his forehead....
She then kept his head on her lap and ruffled his hair.... either he or she spoke anything... she wanted to comfort him while he was still scared..... the fear losing was scarring him.... he felt like his heart was dying seeing her getting hit by truck..... through it was dream but seeing your love dying front of you breaks you to core.... Neil closed his eyes.....
While avni kept thinking about him along with ruffling his hair... she bend down and kissed his hair and saw him sleeping with frown of his face.... she caressed his forehead to remove those frown from his face......
She stared his face thought what could he saw.... his behaviour was scaring her too..... she then looked at him before pecking his hair again..... she caressed his hair when she heard Bebe voice......
She saw Bebe coming into balcony.... she passed smile to Bebe....
Bebe : avni what happened to Neil..... is he okay....
Avni : yes Bebe... he is fine.... you were calling me.... do you need something....
Bebe : oh yeah.... I was asking did you see my phone charger.... I can't find it....
Avni : no Bebe i didn't see your charger.... why don't you plugged it in this room......
Bebe: okay..... avni puttur you sure Neil is fine.... he doesn't sleep this time....
Avni : yes Bebe he fine.... just little tried....
Bebe nods and leaves while avni got lost in her thought......
Avni povs : what happened to Neil suddenly.... is it something related to me......
She was lost in her thought when Neil stirred in his sleep... he moved his head and slept clutching Avni's belly tightly..... Avni's tranche broke and saw him clutching her belly.....
Avni : I love you Shona..... nothing will happen....
She gave kiss on his head and covered his face with her pallu....
Neil was woken up and standing front under shower.... he was having shower....... his eyes were red... he was crying under shower.... his dream didn't leave his mind yet.... those memory of avni getting hit by truck was revolving around his mind.... he was so busy thinking that he didn't realise when Avni was knocking the door.....
Avni was standing near washroom and was knocking the the door but she didn't get any respond... then she saw it was little open.... she pushed the door and saw him standing under shower.... she moved to him and turned off the shower...... she looked at him who was standing not being affected.... she was getting sacred every moment seeing him like this...... she cupped his face and made him look into her eyes..... soon as his eyes met hers his eyes become more teary... he crashed into her arms and cried hugging her.......
Three days later Neil was changing himself..... he was talking less.... he would be lost himself.... everyone in the house noticed this and thought something has happened but kept quiet thinking to give couple their privacy..... while avni was thinking how to bring her Neil back....
She was sitting in room with Neil sleeping in her laps... she was careering his hair when when her phone rang.... she took her phone and saw Manik's Numeber.....
Avni : hello Bhai.....
Manik : hello doll.... is Neil fine.....
Avni : no.... Bhai I don't know what has happened to him.... he is behaving strange..... Bhai do something....
Manik : listen I have booked yours and Neil's ticket for goa..... the flight is today in middle night.... maybe Neil will feel better when he is in different environment...... I'll be there after a week.... I'm sorry to I am not there when you need me.....
Avni : Bhai it's not your fault.... you do your work..... I'll call you later.....
Manik : okay bye.... take care of yourself and Neil too....
Avni : hmm!
She kept the phone and see Neil sleeping.....
She his head on pillow and then got off bed and walked to cupboard.... she packed hers and Neil's Clothes........
Middle of night avneil bid their family and left to airport.... Neil asked her many time where they are going but avni didn't tell him.....
Neil : avni where are we going? Please tell me.....
Avni : Neil you know will when we reach there.... and stop asking me same question.....
Neil kept quiet hearing her....
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