Hey, guys, sorry for the late update. I have been so tired, so I am running a bit behind. I will have the short story results as soon as I get some time to type the reviews. I am really busy, so you guys can check back at a later date for the promised reviews of the winning book and the one with the lowest score.

Before we get the fanfiction results let us shout a big thank you to our lovely judge, birdeyze for her sugary-sweet reviews.

Let's gooooooo!

🍌BOOK: You Don't Belong To Me
WRITER:  world_of_fiction_24

Genre:5/5
Title: 4/5
Blurb:4/5
First Chapter/Prologue:7/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 10/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:16/20
Literary Devices: 8/10
Plot:24/30
Character:6/10
Description:8/10
Originality:6/10
Connection: 6/10
Overall Impression:6 /10
TOTAL: 112/155

REVIEW: I just want to start by saying your book's trailer is 👌🏾, well done.

I found You Don't Belong To Me to be a typical novel with all the cliché of an overused plot, I wish you had created characters that were not so commonplace. I wanted them to be far from the arrogant, brutal mafia lord and the damsel in distress.

I must however applaud you on your descriptions of your characters. I can tell you are keen on physical appearances.

I also see you like writing but to make your readers believe what is taking place you have to step outside of what is happening in your mind; bring it across the same way you have for your characters' appearances so that your readers can relate to what your characters are feeling.

A story must pull you in, grab you and make you want to love as the characters love, cry with them, and fight their battles with them.

You have to give it to them with the right amount of drama and realistic emotions.

Please note the use of open and closed quotations when writing a direct speech for your characters. Also, I happen to see where you place the (?) sign before the sentence and not after this made your work seem unprepared and take away from your chapters being refined in its presentation. I hope you take the time to go over your chapters and look over your sentence constructions and grammar and take your story to a Mafiarific read that has your readers going BANANAS the way BTS fans normally do.

All the best.

🍌BOOK: Wisdom's Daughter
WRITER: booklover311921 

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:5/5
First Chapter/Prologue:7/10
Grammar/Punctuation:17 /20
Spelling/Vocabulary:17/20
Literary Devices: 7.5/10
Plot:27/30
Character:8/10
Description:8/10
Originality:7/10
Connection: 8/10
Overall Impression: 8/10
TOTAL: 129.5/155

REVIEW: Your blurb made me want to find out all the things that make our protagonist so spunky and vibrant seeing she has had her share of misfortune.

However, I found the chapters to be rather cliché and was hoping to see the fire in Brianna that was depicted in the blurb. I believe with the right diction this would have manifested that person.

Fanfictions for me are a writers outpouring of adoration as they use their ability to twist an already created story and produce their magnificent take on it. I wanted more intensity and a more dramatic build-up befitting that of a Percy Jackson fanfic.

It was a good read but with the right diction, I believe your story would showcase drama, exciting plot twists, and enticing characterization of Booklover31192 and not a Rick Riordan remake.

I do hope you edit soon and give Wisdom's Daughter the indispensable plot that brings to life your title.

🍌BOOK: The Killers Love
WRITER: dracosnuteater

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:4/5
First Chapter/Prologue:8/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 18/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:18/20
Literary Devices: 8/10
P

lot:28/30

Character:10/10
Description:8/10
Originality:9/10
Connection: 8/10
Overall Impression: 8/10
TOTAL: 137/150

REVIEW: A fairly good job! I have to say this is clear and concise prose of an MC who knows where her intentions lie and will stop at nothing to get it.

You made characters that were your own, and even though they were already created by JK Rowling they were not overshadowed by their original creation thus making them genuinely draconuteater.

I was, pleased by your use of literary devices and description but still felt you could have stepped up your game. I was able to feel what your characters were feeling but more could be added to get the readers on par with how things are outside of their feelings. For example, how did their marriage got rid of the wretched, disrespectful ogre of a chief?

My issue was with your sentence construction. In some aspects of your wording, I found what was being said overworded, ie- 'returning back' if you use return there is no need for back and often your grammar came off a bit confusing with your choice of adverbs. Ensure that what is being said does not lose the effect you are trying to bring across to your readers.

Nonetheless, The Killer's Love is a rather relatable fanfiction that pays homage to its characters' feelings, emotions, and desires.

🍌BOOK: When His Heart Felt Love
WRITER: ViniShah2

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:4/5
First Chapter/Prologue:8/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 18/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:18/20
Literary Devices: 8/10
P

lot:28/30
Character:10/10

Description:8/10
Originality:8/10
Connection: 10/10
Overall Impression: 8/10
TOTAL: 138/155

REVIEW: A nice engaging romance with the right touch of heartbreak, rivalry and I hate you and I love you in the same breath.

I must applaud the writer for taking a widely use plot and offering a nice splice of life and fanfiction. I was able to feel the love, the hate, and the brokenness, and as I read all I wanted to know was why and what.

Our heartthrob messed up his head-over-heels romance with Jia and he is also blind to who his biggest fan is. Typical scenarios but they were crafted to provide the reader with what the characters are facing and what it all boils down to.

Relatable and adorable characters walk right into your heart and provide you with a pleasant read.

🏆CHEERS TO OUR HONORARY MENTIONS;

🍌BOOK: Son of Krypton, Daughter of Earth
WRITER: JaneQuill28

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:5/5
First Chapter/Prologue:9/10
Grammar/Punctuation:19/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:18/20
Literary Devices: 10/10
Plot:30/30
Character:10/10
Description:8/10
Originality:10/10
Connection: 10/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
TOTAL: 149/155

REVIEW: BANANATICING!!!!!!!!

Thank you for stepping out of the box and stamping JaneQuill28 all over this Superman Fanfiction. I was not prepared for your plot twist☞︎︎︎ Lois Lane is not Clark Kent's heartthrob but Lexy Logan is! You took this DC Comic creation and made it into your own.

This is what I think fanfictions should be, a work of dedication mixed with adoration and laced with originality and for me, you did just that.

You did not follow anyone's script but yours thus creating your own work of art that showcases main characters that gives what they were created to offer.

I laud your creativity as you were not afraid to step outside the box. I can tell you truly love Superman and to step away from the normal storyline and give a new romance as well as that other juicy tidbit of drama (no spoiler alert 🤐) was a nice plus for me.

🍌BOOK: Aftermath: Life Debt
WRITER: -xaurora

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:4/5
First Chapter/Prologue:10/10
Grammar/Punctuation:20/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:20/20
Literary Devices:10/10
Plot:30/30
Character:10/10
Description:6/10
Originality:9/10
Connection:10/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
TOTAL: 149/155

REVIEW: Wow!!! I was enthralled by the writer's captivating ability to create characters that showcase a delicious mix of friendship, trials, and being true to one's self as they showcase their very own mesmerizing characteristics.

I was by no means left confused, perplexed, or lost in what was taking place as this was an easy-to-read story. Everything just flowed perfectly.

Masterfully written, superbly displayed, and carefully crafted to give an epic Fanfiction. Even though it's more prose nothing is left lacking. You are given pain, laughter, friendship, and brotherly compadre which was fun and engaging as our five misfits try to survive after Kamino as they navigate a persistent enemy and work to save Omega.

I was pleased to journey with Echo, Wrecker, Omega, Hunter, and Tech as they were brought face to face with their conflicts and trials. They are a well-prepared package of fun and drama from a dedicated writer.

Totally BANANARIFIC!!!

🍌BOOK: Redemption
WRITER: AdrielleReina

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:5/5
First Chapter/Prologue:9/10
Grammar/Punctuation:20/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:20/20
Literary Devices: 10/10
Plot: 30/30
Character: 10/10
Description:9/10
Originality:8/10
Connection: 8/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
TOTAL: 149/155

REVIEW: I will start by saying BANANARIFIC!!! A beautifully written and emotionally detailed fanfiction that pays superb homage to JK Rowling Harry Potter characters Hermoine Granger and Draco Malfoy.

I was a little thrown by your opening and wanted to get more of the intensity that should be felt from Draco's nightmare, it felt rushed and thus came across as just bits of information.

However, as you read along the characters compel you to scroll through the chapters wanting to reach the moment when our rivals find their way to the romance that's slowly but surely blossoming out of the ashes of their bitter past.

This is a novel that shows dedication, devotion, and adoration for its characters and fits well with its title. This is my first (Dramione) fanfiction and I am pleased to see that they were not overshadowed by the supporting characters.

Redemption for me is masterfully written, superbly displayed, and carefully crafted to give you an epic fanfiction that displays the writer's love, hard work, and dedication.

🏆OUR THIRD-PLACE WINNER IS;

🥉BOOK: Star Wars Episode IX: The Descendant of Evil Novella #1
WRITER:CroodsGirl

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:5/5
F

irst Chapter/Prologue:9/10

Grammar/Punctuation: 20/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:19/20
L

iterary Devices: 10/10

Plot:28/30
C

haracter:10/10
Description:10/10
Originality:9/10
Connection: 10/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
TOTAL: 150/155

REVIEW: A writer who takes pride in her work thus ensuring that a great read is created for any reader that decides to give her book a chance.

I am always captivated by her ability to create a world that is imaginative and makes it so realistic you forget that monsters, spaceships, and creatures are not a part of our daily existence.

I found Star Wars Episode IX: The Descendant of Evil Novella #1 to be no exception from her other work, it sits right on the top shelf with all her other captivating works.

I am not really a Star Wars fan but I must say I found myself wanting to get my lightsaber and go clashing through all the woes, fears, and doubts that Rey evoked through the writer's ability to take emotions, feelings, and desires and make them call out to you through great use of literary devices and characters that are far more 𝒉𝒖𝒎𝒂𝒏 than most humans.

This is truly a book of dedication from a devoted writer.

🏆OUR SECOND-PLACE WINNER IS;

🥈BOOK:Yadavi: The Name Of Yearning
WRITER: dwarkaratna

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:4/5
First Chapter/Prologue:10/10
Grammar/Punctuation:18/20
Spelling/Vocabulary:19/20
Literary Devices: 10/10
Plot:30/30
Character:10/10
Description:10/10
Originality:10/10
Connection: 10/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
TOTAL: 151/155

REVIEW: I must say this is a well-thought-out story filled with the necessary details to take you on a monumental journey of what yearning for something/someone can lead to.

I have had the pleasure of reading other stories centered around Mahabharat but I appreciate you taking the time to give your readers a synopsis so that those who are ignorant to the storyline won't be confused. This for me shows care and respect for your readers.

Your story showcases positivity and the impact family love has on our lives. I just wish however the plot started to unfold early so I got to see the meeting of Prince Ajun and Subhadra that your prologue had me salivating over.

Overall a great book from a devoted writer who took the time to give you an engaging fanfiction that showcases how the yearning of one's heart can lead to finding something fundamental.

BANANATASTIC!

🏆AND OUR FIRST-PLACE WINNER IS;

🥇BOOK: Villains Don't Cry
WRITER: Yeong_fictions

Genre:5/5
Title: 5/5
Blurb:5/5
First Chapter/Prologue:10/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 19/20
S

pelling/Vocabulary:19/20
Literary Devices: 10/10
Plot:30/30
Character:10/10
Description:10/10
Originality:10/10
Connection: 10/10
Overall Impression: 10/10
TOTAL: 153/155

REVIEW: Totally love your cover!

Blurb-😘K.I.S.S😘- Keep It Short and Sweet.

First Chapter/Prologue:Beautifully executed!

You have taken me on an emotional journey that provokes all the right feel that the concept you have created should evoke.

I was thoroughly engaged by your ability to have your readers partake in all that your characters are feeling, truly sensational. Thanks for taking something that could have been just another BTS character story and making it into a splendid read with great descriptions and a superb plot.

Your characters were entirely Yeong_fiction and this was indeed breathtaking it was a villainous delight and I applaud you for creating a storyline both captivating and original and not cliche.

BANANARIFIC, Well Done!!!

🍌CONGRATULATIONS, I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE THE STICKERS, THEY ARE MY FAVORITES THUS FAR🍌