Hey! I know I haven't been very active, so I'd like to apologize. :)

I decided I needed a break from VOS and Warriors, so I created a test story. Just to experiment with imagery and all that. It was a free write so I had no plans or story outline. I published the prologue, so I'd love it if some of you would take a look at it :) I need some constructive criticism. But not just being rude. To explain this, I made some examples:

Ex. 

You write a story on a deer jumping over a log.

Rude Comment: "This sucks, change it!"

Constructive Criticism: "Wow, what an interesting approach! To make it better, maybe you could add [blank], [blank], and [blank]!

See the difference? :3 I have gotten the rude comments, and they aren't very helpful. :/ 

I know none of my wonderful followers would never be rude, but this is for people who have never read my stuff before! :)

Thanks again all of you! I have almost reached 230 followers! That is absolutely insane! Thank you all so much and I hope to see you soon! :D

Badger out, peace!