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This os is not related to naamkaran story..in this there is no dayavanti drama..no juhi drama...its totally different..avneil are married...their marriage was love marriage...neil is Acp and avni is housewife..so lets start

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Avni was getting bored at home as neil was busy in police station and shweta bebe maddy and kareena went to mandir......she thought to call him...but he did'nt pick up her calls which frustrate her more.....she again call him and this time he picked up the call..before she could say anything she hears someone's voice or rather say a girl's voice saying
"Neil I love u soo much baby"

She gets shocked hearing this...she wanted to hear neil's voice but before that the call gets cut....

Avni(controlling her tears):no...neil can't do this...neil mujhse bahot pyaar karta hai...zarur voh ladki hi uske piche padi hogi...mera neil kabhi mujhe dhoka de hi nahi sakta...jab neil aayega tab directly usse puch lungi...

It was 10 in the night still neil was not home yet...she lays on bed closing her eyes...she hears some footsteps...she knows that it was neil still she pretends to sleep...neil sees that avni was sleeping....he goes near her and covers her properly with duvet and pecks her forehead and says

Neil: I love u avni

He goes to fresh n up in washroom and avni wakes up and smiles...

Avni:main bhi na...kitni badi stupid hu...neil pe shaq kar rahi thi...i m sorry neil and i love u too

She smiles widely and sleeps...neil came out of wahsroom and sleeps beside her taking her in his arms...she smiles in sleep breaking his heart...he wanted to tell her something but was not able to do so....

Next morning neil leaves early for work....avni wakes up and frowns as neil was not beside her...she sees letter on side table...
She picks it up and opens it..

Avni aaj meri ek bahot important meeting hai joh ki pure din chalegi...isliye aaj jaldi jaana pada...aur shayad raat ko bhi late aau toh mera wait mat karna...take care
                     Neil

Avni gets upset reading this...she gets ready and goes down

Shweta:are avni beta..aa jao breakfast kar lo..aur tillu kaha hai

Avni:mummy ji voh aaj jaldi police station chala gaya..uski important meeting thi isliye..

Shweta:yeh neil bhi na...accha chal koi baat nahi..tum toh aa jao.....aaj maine bheema se kehkar khaas tumhare liye poha banvaya hai...

Avni:thank u soo much mummy ji lekin mera kuch bhi khaane ka dil nahi kar raha...

Shweta was about to protest but avni runs from there palming her mouth with her hands...she pukes ki washroom...all goes behind her and gets worried..

Bebe:avni puttar...tu theek toh hai na

Avni:pata nahi bebe...subah se kuch achha nahi lag raha...

Shweta:main abhi neil ko call karti hu...

She calls neil but as usual he does'nt pick up..

Shweta:neil phone hi nahi utha raha..

Avni:mummy ji uski aaj bahot important meeting thi...aap tension mat lijiye...main theek hu

Shweta:kya theek hu...chehra dekha hai tumhara kitna peela pad gaya hai...

Bebe:shweta sahi keh rahi hai puttar...tu ek kaam kar tu doctor ko ek baar dikha de..

Avni:lekin bebe

Shweta:lekin vekin kuch nahi...kareena...

Kareena:ji maami

Shweta:tum avni ke saath chali jao...

Kareena:ok...super bhabi chaliye..main aapke saath chalti hu...

Avni nods and both leaves....

At doctor's clinic

Doctor:congratulations Mrs.khanna...u are expecting...

Avni(shocked):what

Doctor:yes...u are 3 weeks pregnant..

Avni's happiness knew no bounds....kareena hugs her

Kareena:congrats super bhabhi...yayy..main bua banne vaali hu...

Avni:neil kitna khush hoga yeh sunkar...

Kareena:haa...neil bhai bahot khush honge..aap unko call karo na..

Avni:abhi nahi kareena..yeh khushkhabri main neil ko aise phone call par nahi batana chahti...

Kareena:toh phir

Avni:tum abhi mere saath market chalo..

Kareena(confused):market?

Avni:haa...chalo abhi..

They leaves for market..

At market

Kareena:super bhabhi..hum yaha kyun aaye hai..

Avni:main neil ko aaj raat surprise dena chahti hu..

Kareena:wow surprise and all haa..

Avni blushes.

Avni buys some necesaary things which are required...she sees a doll in one shop..neil always wanted a baby girl...so assuming this little one in her womb as a girl she buys that doll...

Kareena:bhabhi yeh doll kyun...aapko kaise pata ki ladki hi hogi..

Avni smiles

Avni:neil ko humesha se hi ek ladki chahiye thi...aur jab use pata chalega ki main pregnant hu he will be so happy...mujhse na ab aur wait nahi ho raha..

Suddenly she sees neil in car going somewhere

Avni(in mind):neil yaha kya kar raha hain...uski toh meeting thi na..

Avni:kareena tum ghar jao...aur ha yeh saaman bhi lekar jao...main na mandir hokar aati hu

Kareena:lekin bhabhi..aap akele

Avni:tum meri tension mat lo...i will be fine..tum jao

Kareena nods and leaves...avni immediately follows neil in auto..

Avni:bhaiyaa..uss car ka picha karna..

Neil's car stops in front of huge building....avni gets confused that why is he here...he was supposed to be in some important meeting....

Neil goes inside...avni too goes behind him....but watchman stops her

Watchman:madam..aapko kisse milna hai

Avni:voh neil...neil khanna

Watchman:dekhiye yaha koi neil khanna nahi rehta

Avni:maine abhi unhe yaha se jaate dekha..joh abhi andar gaye vahi toh hai neil khanna

Watchman:accha voh...voh yaha rehte nahi hai lekin pichle kuch dino se roz yaha aate hai

Avni:kyun..i mean kiske liye..

Watchman:soniya madam se milne aate hai...

Avni(in mind):avni...phir se tu stupid jaise neil pe shaq mat kar...shayad kuch important kaam ho..isliye aaya hoga..lekin neil ne toh kaha tha ki meeting main jaa raha hai..

Her trance was broken by watchman's voice

Watchman:aapko bhi milna hai kya soniya madam se

Avni was about to say no but stops in her middle

Avni(in mind):kya karu...jau ya nahi..ek baar dil ki tasalli ke liye chali jaati hu...

Avni:haa..

Watchman:unka flat number hai 302-A

Avni:thanks

Avni moves towards flat...her heartbeat was increasing with each passing second...finally she reached to the door only to find it open...she slightly pushes the door...what she saw next was enough to make her numb....neil was hugging a girl.....

Girl(soniya):I love u neil

Neil:I love u too soniya

That's it she felt betrayed....tears rolled down her cheeks....her hand automatically moves on her belly...a small innocent life is inside her and here her husband is with another girl confessing his love to her...she just wanted to die now...how can she survive without neil....she walks out of building lost in her thoughts...tears were continuously flowing from her eyes....suddenly weather got change...it starts raining heavily....she was walking on road lifelessly...

(Background song-jag suna suna lage)

DIL JUDE BINA HI TUT GAYE
HATH MILE BINA HI CHUT GAYE
KI LIKHE NE LEKH KISMAT NE
BAAR BAAR ROD AKHIYAAN
TENU JO NA VEKH SAKHIYAAN
KHOLE AAYE AAJ KUDRAT NE
KATTA MAIN KI VE DIN
TERI SAU TERE BIN
MAIN TOH JIYA NA MARA

CHAN SE JOH TUTE KOI SAPNA
JAG SOONA SOONA LAGE
JAG SOONA SOONA LAGE
KOI RAHE NA JAB APNA
JAG SOONA SOONA LAGE
JAG SOONA SOONA HAI TOH
YEH KYUN HOTA HAI
JAB YEH DIL ROTA HAI
ROYE SISAK SISAK KE HAWAYEIN JAG SUNA LAGE
CHAN SE JOH TUTE KOI SAPNA
JAG SOONA SOONA LAGE
KOI RAHE NA JAB APNE
JAG SOONA SOONA LAGE
JAG SOONA SOONA LAGE RE

SOONA.....LAGE RE....

Avni(while crying):kyun neil...kyun kiya tumne aisa...kya tumhara mere liye pyaar khatam ho gaya......toh shayad ab mujhe bhi khatam ho jaana chahiye...

She said this and then comes infront of speeding car and

BOOM

On other side

Soniya:neil tum betho main tumhare liye coffee leke aati hu

Neil nods and she leaves

Neil(in mind):yeh achanak mujhe kya ho raha hai...itni bechaini kyun ho rahi hai jaise kuch bura hone vaala ho....uff neil yeh sab chod aur jo tu yaha karne aaya hai voh kar...

He starts searching something and finally he found what he wanted..

He calls someone and next second few mens arrived there...

Soniya comes with coffee but gets shocked after seeing police officers in her house.

Soniya:aap log aise andar kaise aa gaye...

Dd:jaise sabhi log aate hai vaise hi..darvaaje se..

Others laugh..

Soniya:just shut up...aur neil...tum bhi inke saath has rahe ho...

Neil:correction miss soniya...neil nahi...Acp neil khanna

Soniya gets shocked hearing this

Soniya:tum Acp ho

Neil:haa miss soniya...and yes...u are under arrest

Soniya:what(shocked)

Neil:yes...aapko kayi ladkiyon ki zindagi barbaad karne ke jurm main giraftar kiya jaata hai..

Soniya:what the hell...maine kisi ladki ki zindagi barbaad nahi ki hai..

Neil:ohh..toh phir voh kon hai jo MLA Vidyut.R.pandit ke saath milkar human trafficking ka business chalati hai...

Soniya gets shocked and then starts sweating

Soniya(stammering):aap.......aapke paas...paas...kya...kya..sabut hai...

Neil plays the chip which he was finding few minutes ago...

She gets scared as now her truth is out...

Neil:arrest her

One lady officer arrest her

Soniya:neil...tumne mujhe dhoka diya..I loved u soo much and u betrayed me...

Neil:apna yeh pyaar ka puran apne paas hi rakho..u can never love someone..u just love urself .....aur haa..yeh baat humesha yaad rakhna...i never loved u....maine apni zindagi main sirf ek hi ladki se pyaar kiya hai and that is my wife..tumne khud ek ladki hokar dusri ladkiyon ko becha..shame on u..dd take her away from my eyes..

Soniya(while shouting):neil...u will pay for this...u lier....jis tarah maine aaj apne pyar ko yane tumhe khoya hai theek vaise hi tum bhi apne pyaar ko kho doge...dekh lena Mr neil khanna...u will also lose ur love just like me..

Neil(shouts):just take her away

Constables take her to police station...

Dd:sir....kya hua...aap itne pareshaan kyun lag rahe hai...ab toh humara mission successfull ho gaya hai phir aap itni tensed kyun ho

Neil:pata nahi dd..lekin bahot dar lag raha hai...

Dd:sir...aap uss soniya ki baat ko serious mat lijiye...

Neil nods

Watchman watches neil and goes towards him

Watchman:sir...aap police hai

Neil:haa kyun...

Watchman:matlab joh madam aaj yaha aayi thi soniya mam se milne voh bhi police thi

Neil gets confused hearing this

Neil:konsi madam

Watchman:sir voh jab aap aaj yaha aaye the aapke andar jaane ke baad aapke peeche peeche ek madam aayi thi...kya naam liya tha unhone...haa..neil...voh aapko neil kehkar bula rahi thi...phir unhone baadme kaha ki unhe soniya madam se milna hai

Dd:sir...kahi ghar main se koi

Neil:pata nahi dd...ghar jaake hi pata chalega..lets go

He goes till gate but then he sees a payal which is on ground

He picks it up and gets shocked

Neil:yeh...yeh toh avni ki paayal hai...matlab kahi avni toh yaha nahi aayi thi

He immediately goes to watchman and show him avni's pic

Neil:suno...kya yahi ladki aayi thi...

Watchman:haa sir...yahi madam thi...voh andar gayi aur kuch vakt baad bahar bhi aa gayi...maine unhe bahot aawaz lagayi lekin voh toh apne hi duniya main thi....

Neil gets worried listening this...he stumbles back but dd holds him

Dd:neil sir

Neil(worried):dd....voh avni yaha aayi thi...kahi voh mujhe galat na samajh le...mujhe uske paas jaana hoga..use sab sach batana hoga. 

He calls her several time but her phone was unreachable...he rushes to khanna house...he enters inside shouting her name

Neil:Avni...avni kaha ho tum...avni

All comes down hearing him...

Shweta:tillu kya hua..aise chilla kyun raha hai...

Neil:mom...mom avni kaha hai...

Bebe:neil..tu itna pareshaan kyun hai..baat kya hai....

Dd:main batata hu

Dd tells them everything about their mission...and he also tells that avni has misunderstood neil...

Bebe:neil...tujhe avni ko iske baare main pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha..aaj vaise hi uski tabiyat theek nahi thi

Neil:tabiyat theek nahi thi matlab...kya hua tha use

Shweta:uski tabiyat theek nahi thi isliye voh kareena ke saath doctor ke paas gyi thi.....aur phir thodi der baad kareena ka call aaya ki avni mandir gayi hai aur kareena apne friend ke yaha jaa rahi hai...aur ab tak dono ka kuch pata nahi hai....

Maddy:bhabhi...kareena ka call aaya tha...usne kaha ki voh raat tak aa jayegi..

Bebe:phir avni kaha reh gayi....bhagvaan uski raksha kare

Neil now just wanted to kill himself for hiding things from avni...he again call her and this time someone answer the call

Neil:hello...avni..

Person:hello

Neil:aap kon...yeh toh meri wife ka number hai

Person:dekhiye yeh jinka phone hai unka bahot bada accident ho gaya hai...aap plz jaldi se city hospital aa jaiye

Phone fell from neil's hand...tears rolled down his cheeks

Bebe:neil...neil kya hua

Prakash:neil...avni kaha hai...voh theek hai na

Neil:Av...avni...ka...accident

All gets shocked...neil rushes to hospital followed by others...

At hospital

Neil and others reach at hospital...he rushes to reception and ask about avni

Neil:avn...avni....

Receptionist gets confused....dd consoles neil

Dd:sir...sambhaliye apne aap ko

Neil:dd tu inko puch na avni kaha hai..kaisi hai

Dd(to receptionist):yaha abhi ek accident case aaya tha

Receptionist:haa...voh operation theatre main unka operation chal raha hai...

They all goes towards operation theatre...

Operation gets over and doctors came out

Neil:doctor....avni...avni kaisi hai

Doctor:aap kon...

Neil:main...main uska husband..

Doctor:I m sorry lekin

To be continued.....

This idea just came into my mind and thought to pen it down...so just let me know how was it and also plz vote and comment

Love Mamta


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