Short Story Results
Congrats to our winners! And Thank you to our judge Starrynight428
Book Title: Echo in the Wind
Author: strawberry1D
Cover: 10/10
Plot Development: 18/20
Character Development: 18/20
Grammar: 6/10
Blurb: 10/10
Overall Enjoyment: 9/10
Title: 10/10
Story Detail: 8/10
Overall: 89/100
Brief Critique: I like this story a lot. It had a unique and complex plot. There were typos with commas, quotation marks, and spaces. It seemed to alternate between present and past tense.
2nd Place:
Book Title: Bernadette's Diary
Author: AdrielleReina
Cover: 10/10
Plot Development: 15/20
Character Development: 17/20
Grammar: 10/10
Blurb: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Title: 10/10
Story Detail: 7/10
Overall: 88/100
Brief Critique: It went well into the details of Bernadette's dramatic transformation. I like the pictures added to the diary, and the work put into it. For a short piece, there's a lot of detail into the world and plot.
Honorable Mention:
Book Title: Lost and Found
Author: -poeticsun
Cover: 10/10
Plot Development: 15/20
Character Development: 15/20
Grammar: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Overall Enjoyment: 10/10
Title: 10/10
Story Detail: 8/10
Overall: 85/100
Brief Critique: I like the story and how Fiona and Harlow was the same person. The blurb is vague and mysterious, but fits after completing the story. It took awhile to get used to the all lower case letters. Maybe let Vea change at the end, and spend more time on her relationship with Harlow.
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