Short Story Results

Congrats to our winners! And Thank you to our judge Starrynight428


Book Title: Echo in the Wind

 Author: strawberry1D

 Cover: 10/10 

Plot Development: 18/20

 Character Development: 18/20 

Grammar: 6/10

 Blurb: 10/10 

Overall Enjoyment: 9/10

 Title: 10/10 

Story Detail: 8/10

 Overall: 89/100 

Brief Critique: I like this story a lot. It had a unique and complex plot. There were typos with commas, quotation marks, and spaces. It seemed to alternate between present and past tense.

2nd Place: 

Book Title: Bernadette's Diary

 Author: AdrielleReina

 Cover: 10/10 

Plot Development: 15/20

 Character Development: 17/20

 Grammar: 10/10 

Blurb: 9/10 

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10 

Title: 10/10 

Story Detail: 7/10 

Overall: 88/100 

Brief Critique: It went well into the details of Bernadette's dramatic transformation. I like the pictures added to the diary, and the work put into it. For a short piece, there's a lot of detail into the world and plot.

Honorable Mention:

Book Title: Lost and Found

 Author: -poeticsun 

Cover: 10/10

 Plot Development: 15/20 

Character Development: 15/20

 Grammar: 9/10 

Blurb: 8/10

 Overall Enjoyment: 10/10

 Title: 10/10

 Story Detail: 8/10 

Overall: 85/100 

Brief Critique: I like the story and how Fiona and Harlow was the same person. The blurb is vague and mysterious, but fits after completing the story. It took awhile to get used to the all lower case letters. Maybe let Vea change at the end, and spend more time on her relationship with Harlow.

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