FANTASY WINNERS ANNOUNCED

Congratulations to all the place winners. Please let me know if you want your score sheet. Thank you to all who participated and Happy Fall Y'all!!!


Thank you so much to our judges @ShockTrooperCorps & @addiewrites7 for their hard work!!! 


Winner!!! @Mariya_Evans with Scars & Secrets! Congratulations!!!

Brief critique: Right from SYNOPSIS...yes, the SYNOPSIS, I knew I was getting into something intense! The banter between characters and the action scenes are nail biting. Only thing I have is characters such as the Duke could've stood to be developed a little more. Other than than that, this is my pick for first place

 Cover: 9/10 

Plot Development: 20/20 

Character Development: 18/20 

Grammar: 10/10 

Blurb: 10/10 

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10 

Title: 10/10 

Story Detail: 20/20 

 Overall: 98/100

2nd Place @AdrielleReina with A Realm Of Magic & Mayhem

I really loved the name Arabella! It is super creative and cute! You did a great job at capturing the element of a true fantasy world. Some grammar errors but overall really good plot, storyline and development!!!


Cover: 8/10

Plot Development: 20/20

Character Development: 18/20

Grammar: 9/10

Blurb: 10/10

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10

Title: 10/10

Story Detail: 20/20

Overall: 96/100


Honorable Mention: @lorainejd  The Avallon Chronicles (Book I) 

Brief critique: Obviously the artwork on this one is absolutely stellar and hooks the reader. Grammar and sentence structure is pretty good for the most part. However, some of the action is paced WAY too fast, and it seems like scenes that got only one chapter should've had two. Additionally, a lot of new lore and characters kind of just get thrown in abruptly as opposed to slow, gradual world-building. Overall a solid read, just needs some polishing. 

 Cover: 10/10 

Plot Development: 16/20 

Character Development: 16/20

 Grammar: 10/10 

Blurb: 10/10 

Overall Enjoyment: 10/10 

Title: 10/10

 Story Detail: 20/20

 Overall: 92/100

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