Congrats to the winner and thank you to our judge ShockTrooperCorps

  SabastianStefano

Melee Murder; Derek

Grammar/Dialogue: 4/5 

How Relatable Characters Were: 4/5 

How their emotions played: 5/5 

How interesting the character was: 9/10

 Total: 22/25

 Brief Critique: Derek's backstory was very riveting, and the backdrop of the funhouse as the place where the horrors went down really keeps the reader engaged. Only thing I'd advise is an installation of Grammarly to catch things like missing periods, commas, and quotation marks during dialogue. Good work!