Participants, here are the scores and feedback given by your judge. (This is placed in no specific order. Just find your book and username 😊)

Please use this to make your work better. If you didn't win, strive better next time.

Your book will be an Aurum someday. Just work on it 😉

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AgustDs_Shadow's Tomorrow

Judged on: June 28, 2021

Judged by: ASG_JK

Cover:4/7

Title: 4/5

Synopsis: 7/8

Grammar: 15/15

Flow: 28/30

Concept: 25/25

Enjoyment: 8/10

Total: 90/100

Review: So I hadn't read many JHS FFs because they weren't really my taste but this book's concept is just massive. I don't know the story of Hunger games and I saw many say it's similar but even if it is, the execution of the scenes were just perfect.

The grammar and vocabulary needs not to be talked of for that's all good. The Flow was kinda fast but since that's not changing the impression of the book,it's okay.

The synopsis gave me a good insight of what the book could be like. It's well descriptive. I didn't spot any errors there.

Now for the Cover, ig it could have been better. The tittle is also fine, not a very attractive one but it's connection with the book is just right.

I enjoyed the book, I must say. I'm sorry to k ow it's discontinued but I'll love to read it as SKZ FF.

All the Best. 

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AyameAlucard's Starcrossed

Judged on: June 22, 2021

Judged by: ASG_JK

Cover: 4/7

Title: 3/5

Synopsis: 2/8

Grammar: 10/15

Flow: 10/30

Concept: 15/35

Enjoyment: 4/10

Total: 48/100

Review: The author needs a lot of improvement. It's always okay to make mistakes and learn from them so I'd state the weaknesses I noticed throughout the book. I'm unaware if it was your first book or if you're new to writing, but the concept of the story was too cliché.

There are many stories with a similar storyline and although it is okay, I don't think it'll attract many readers. The grammar is very poor. There are several places where tenses have been intermixed and I must say, there isn't a variety of vocabulary.

The flow of the story is too fast. Take it practically, even if it's a love at first sight, do you go on a walk with any random man? Or does any random man comes and confesses to you right after you meet? I don't know if that's how it works in the west but in Asia, throughout the huge continent, you don't do this. You give some time for hinting the other.

Synopsis was not at all what I thought the story would be based on. The Question was if he could hide his identity but it changed throughout the book that I lost my interest after Chapter 30.

Title was okay, not really unique but okay. I really think you should change the cover. It's not at all attractive. Although it's said, "Don't judge a book by it's cover", people judge a book by it's cover. So I suggest you to change it. You can apply to a designer.

I wouldn't say I enjoyed the story. I might sound harsh but that's me, I'm sorry. It wasn't very exciting. I just read it because I had to and that's why I left no votes or comments. I generally tend to do that during the judging period only if the book really keeps me engaged.

Sometimes the grammar is low but the plot is perfect so it's okay, you can be pardoned for that.

Now I would end this with one suggestion, When you write a book with the members representing their real lives, as idols, I suggest you to make the story an open ended one because You Never Know it.

Anyways, the author needs improvement and I believe they can. It's okay to make mistakes, don't be disheartened. You'll make it someday.

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With the lack of participants, I really appreciated the participants here on the Jung Hoseok Category. Our Sunshine really needs love.

Thanks for participating!