Judged by BreezyMulligan

Rhodoreef by SuVida777

Title:  3/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Presentation: 5/5
Opening chapter: 8/10
Plot: 16/20
Grammar: 10/10
Vocabulary: 10/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Characters: 6/10
Story development: 7/10

Total: 85/100

The First Gift by AziaElga

Title:  4/5
Cover: 4/5
Blurb: 3/5
Presentation: 5/5
Opening chapter: 7/10
Plot: 16/20
Grammar: 8/10
Vocabulary: 9/10
Dialogue: 8/10
Characters: 7/10
Story development: 6/10

Total: 77/100

All Capes Are Bad by Intricist

Title:  5/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 4/5
Presentation: 4/5
Opening chapter: 9/10
Plot: 16/20
Grammar: 10/10
Vocabulary: 10/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Characters: 9/10
Story development: 9/10

Total: 89/100

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Judged by ericathedwarf

Tesser by ASG_JK

Title 4.5/5
I don’t know what Tesser means, but combined with the cover, it’s very intriguing
Cover 4/5
nice
Blurb 3/5
Too much mystery, I have only a very fuzzy sense of the premise or genre
Presentation 3.5/5
Character collages
Opening chapter 7/10
Well, there’s something interesting that happens. Opening with an alarm is a little cliche, but her thoughts kept it fun throughout
Plot 10/20
I have no idea what’s happening. I can’t tell if the cat is real or imaginary or if the amazon man is the cat creature. Everything is chaos.
Grammar 5/10
There’s a good bit of work needed her, just for comprehension’s sake
Vocabulary 8/10
When you work around the grammar, word choice is pretty fun for this one
Dialogue 6/10
Kind of extreme and needs more clear dialog tags
Character 9/10
I like her spirit and fire, but she’s also a little all over the place. Actually I love her. Also Sunoo is perfect with his “aesthetic”
Story Development 6/10
It’s moving too fast an erratically to keep up or more importantly to take meaningful pieces of info with along the way.

Total 67/100

James Knight: Teenage Superhuman by Iskipp_U

Title: 3.5/5
Gets the job done
Cover 4/5
Nice photo, goof composition, text is easy to read and strong
Blurb 3.5/5
It’s fine but it doesn’t differentiate James much from other teenage superheroes.
Presentation 5/5

Opening chapter 6/10
Prologue gave a lot of info but it kind of just dumped it through the narrator’s interpretation instead of through the action in the flashback
Plot 17/20
I can see a foundation for a solid plot being put together. So far, it feels pretty standard for super hero stories though
Grammar 8.5/10

Vocabulary 8/10

Dialogue 8/10
Calling people by their names (especially Mark to James) is a bit too frequent
Character 7/10
Derek is kind of a fun older brother, if not a little irresponsible

I don’t think at this point his dad still wouldn’t know, especially with how loose James is with using and talking about his powers, and that he got them when he was six. It’s hard to get a six year old to keep a secret, and the fact that he did makes me dislike sam even more
Story Development 7.5/10
Introducing mysterious elements early that will shape the conflict and plot

A lot of the information seems to be delivered through telling instead of showing, most through James’ thoughts and observations. I want to have the opportunity to figure some of it out for myself.

Total: 73/100

Oxygen by dalola_k

Title 4/5
Nice and simple, is tied tightly to the premise, maybe a little vague though
Cover 4.5/5
Love love love the cover, so pretty. Not 100% a fan of the title formatting, but I think it’s still working
Blurb 4.5/5
Ooh, nice first line.
Solid blurb.
Presentation 3.5/5
Mood boards.
Opening chapter 8.5/10
Good length, immediately we are thrust into the biggest problems in her life right now. Inklings of unrest/rebellion to come, hints of history with that guy. Good bits of world building throughout
Plot 14/20
I’m not sure where this is going, but it’s going somewhere. I think that the foundation hasn’t had much time to be set and depending on where the story goes, there might not be much to stand on.
Grammar 7/10
Tense inconsistencies, some other small stuff.
Vocabulary 7/10

Dialogue 7/10
Maybe a bit too much consecutive dialogue at times, and doesn’t always match natural speech cadence.
Character 7/10
Adira seems a bit inconsistent and impulsive to me. I don’t understand why she’s such a hardcore rebel now when she was only peripherally involved before. Why does she feel like she can raid this politician’s house and why does she feel like it has to be now? Is she processing her grief this way? She doesn’t seem super sad about her mom dying.
Story Development 7/10
The way the flashbacks are labelled is distracting. I appreciate the fact that they are labeled, but something like a page divider (line or symbols) or even just italics would be less disruptive.

It’s kind of escalating a little fast. We’ve just learned of the rebellion and now she’s trying to throw down the establishment on her own without them. We just learned that her and Ace had a history and that she didn’t want to turn back to him and now she’s just had sex with him to manipulate him into helping her overthrow the corrupt government? It’s just a lot without enough in between to support and buffer the escalation.

Total 74/100

Rogue by withyejide

Title 3.5/5
Bold but unspecific
Cover 4/5
Like the cover but the author name is hard to read.
Blurb 4/5
Solid blurb
Presentation 3/5

Opening chapter 8/10
Long but well written. I really liked how it started out with her mirror speech and benter with her younger brother
Plot 17.5/20
Looks like this is gonna be like a sport championship underdog arc with some teenage rebellion thrown in (and maybe some mystery with SCOPE itself). Good foundations
Grammar 8/10
A few things here and there
Vocabulary 7.5/10
Fine, nothing really standing out either way.

Actually, I do like that rogue is treated like its own entity/character, like rogue is just a person instead of a team
Dialogue 8.5/10
Pretty good. Good distinction between the speech patterns of different characters/types of characters.
Character 8/10
I don’t understand her parents’ intense reaction, but that might be a cultural thing. Although the parents are flat, the kids seems to have some room to grow
Story Development 7.5/10
Chapters are long. For the wattpad/online format I would suggest breaking them up. There’s some lag, like during the race scene, during some of the explanation of the rules, etc)

Total 72.5/100

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Judged by Anunimouse96

Cast Of Heroes by Nightmansid

Title:  3/5
Cover: 3/5
Blurb: 3/5
Presentation: 4/5
Opening chapter: 8/10
Plot: 14/20
Grammar: 8/10
Vocabulary: 9/10
Dialogue: 8/10
Characters: 9/10
Story development: 7/10

Total: 76/100

Seranid by Junypr

Title:  5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 4/5
Presentation: 4/5
Opening chapter: 8/10
Plot: 19/20
Grammar: 10/10
Vocabulary: 9/10
Dialogue: 10/10
Characters: 10/10
Story development: 10/10

Total: 94/100

Runaway Gods by francescopianfetti

Title:  5/5
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Presentation: 4/5
Opening chapter: 6/10
Plot: 16/20
Grammar: 10/10
Vocabulary: 9/10
Dialogue: 8/10
Characters: 7/10
Story development: 7/10

Total: 82/100

Cursed With Power by awesometales

Title 5/5
Cover 4/5
Blurb 4/5
Presentation 3/5
Opening chapter 8/10
Plot 16/20
Grammar 9/10
Vocabulary 9/10
Dialogues 9/10
Characters 8/10
Story development 7/10

Total 82/100

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1st Place goes to Junypr

2nd Place goes to Intricist

3rd Place goes to SuVida777

And for those who didn't win get these stickers.