I re-read this and finally don't think it's bad!

Will's POV

Annabeth is so nice to me. But... she's crying. "Thalia is a tree, Luke went away, my Dad and step-mum don't care. I don't even know if Athena cares..." I should go comfort her... She is my best friend after all.

Annabeth's POV

A tear slid down my cheek. Someone tapped my shoulder. Reluctantly, I turned around to see a helpful, kind boy. "Hey Will," I muttered. "Hey Annabeth. You ok?" He asked. "Yes..." I said, trying not to cry. Apparently it failed. "Annabeth. I just saw you crying and... and listing bad things that happened to you..." he explained. "Let me ask again. Are you ok?" He said. "N-no... and I think you know why..." I said. "I do," he said gently.

Ok, this is my favourite chapter so far. I love it!!! <3 <3 <3

This made me be in a good mood Chicken Nuggets!

~Cristal