Editing Update!


Hello! 

I Finished Editing and I just wanted to let you know the big changes I have made.

You could go back and re-read the whole book, but if you don't want to do that, There is a short summary for what I have changed for each Chapter 

I HIGHLY SUGGEST RE-READING CHAPTER 10!! THIS PART WAS COMPLETELY RE-WRITTEN!

As Radiant As The Sun begins in chapter 1, set in early November.

Chapter 1: There were no changes made. 

Chapter 2: There were no changes made.

Chapter 3: There were no changes made.

Chapter 4: I took out the part where Katniss saw Peeta get beat up on the way out of the hob, because I say later in the book that Katniss has just found out then and I thought the time later in the book, was a more appropriate time for that information to be released. 

Chapter 5: There were no changes made.

Chapter 6:  BIG CHANGE THIS CHAPTER Katniss, Peeta, and their friends are sophomores, and not seniors like I had originally said, because I had wanted them to be younger then that. Katniss, Peeta, and their friends are now 16-17 years old instead of 18-19

Chapter 7: There were no changes made.

Chapter 8: There were no changes made.

Chapter 9: I changed the time Katniss was staying with Peeta from 3 months to 2 months. So she stayed with Peeta for two months before she found him in the basement. It would end up being early February during this chapter:)

Chapter 10: This chapter was completely rewritten. I needed to change the fact that it was Katniss' birthday, because her birthday Is in early May, not early February. I put her birthday in there as a dream. I suggest going to re-read this chapter so you won't be confused if I reference this chapter  later.

Chapter 11: There were no changes made.

Chapter 12: There were no changes made.

Chapter 13: There were no changes made.

Chapter 14: There were no changes made.

Chapter 15: There were no changes made.

Chapter 16: There were no changes made.

Chapter 17: There were no changes made.

Chapter 18: There were no changes made.

Chapter 19: There were no changes made.

New Chapter Soon!!

Thanks for reading!

~BECCA

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