@Lo_Lo_Maple

Porshswing

There isn't much to say on this. It's a relatively solid peice, and it's not too active but it's also not to inactive. I'm relatively sure that you used watercolors? They're very good. I can hardly use water colors myself so I'm not going to say anything xD

Proportions are okay. You could work on hands and I also recommend pulling the nose out more. The eye is a little bit too big, but that's just preference.

Shading is very good. Lines are very good. Design is okay. It's a little too colorful for my liking, but you pull it off relatively well.

There's really not much wrong with this. Again, it's very solid. Good work!

My_Name_Is_JM

Hello there ^-^! I was looking through the design and found it very solid. Its well designed in both color and Character.

The only thing I would adjust (This is Just me) I'd the Side Face View, and the eye design ^-^.

Here's A Guide I use Myself!

See what I mean? The Design aspect of your art is very brilliant I love it! Though the eyes seemed a little large for the face.

Here's some Ideas for the Next couple of Side views you have ^-^ (Again a Guide I just Have to help me) Oh! Just one more thing, The hand could be a little better (Though I don't draw them much because all my hands look bad) I would recommend practicing Hands a little more to help adjust the fingers. Hope this helped you out! And also GOOD WORK!

-JM

JM's Second Review!

Hey there ^^; Well apparently we are having trouble finding time to do so many reviews so I'm gonna take it upon myself to do the 3rd review this time I'm thinking out side the box and thinking about expanding for you!

Suggestions:

Colorations and Complementary Colors!

Your art style for color is very good but I suggest looking a bit more to colors that compliment.

The black would be compliment with white :3 Small White Highlights might make the picture pop more than regularly changing the atmosphere and the feel of the art!

Design!:

The checked design with he blue is very nice but maybe try doing a elaborate them of the old Victorian style art an example would be simple swirls with rounded leaves :3

Other than that I honestly Can't think of anything else! Sorry about taking so long to get back to you on this review! And sorry only two people got around to doing it also! I hope we both helped if we did!

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