I drew two of these in two different styles which one do you guys like more?

What is says: I know my sister like I know my own Mind,
You will never find,
Anyone as trusting or as kind!
I love my sister more than anything in this life!
(I'm erasing myself from the narrative! Let future historians)
I will chose her happiness over mine every Time!
(Wonder how Eliza reacted when you broke)
Put what we had aside! I'm standing at her side you can never be satisfied!
(Her heart!)
God I hope you're satisfied!