Any critics?
This is the first page of the manga I am making for the story "Yandere Spotted" by SadlyImNotNormal

UPDATE: Actually, I'm leaving it as before since a am a real *beep* when drawing buildings and so on. I am deeply sorry, SadlyImNotNormal... I'll try to avoid these mistakes later on... But I'll improve one day surely!

I did the drawing traditionally and the rest digitally. So I need your help to grow as an "artist"! Comment everything that can improve it!

(Procrastination for studies in progess....)

Btw for Yumii's request, I've done outlining it some days back, I have to hand it to Mya (tomorrow) for coloring!

And also thank you so much for the 6.1K+ views, 900 votes and 600+ comments! I am eternally grateful to all of you.... (ToT)

~Lyrica