This is by feedthewalkers I think lol!

Writing - this story was written well with some very short chapters near the end.

Plot/Characters - 6.5/10
the characters were great except for two things.
1)Giovanni, I mean where the #*^% did he come from
2)ash goes through a huge change at the Semi-beginning of the story that is impossible fore someone of his dense-ness
I like the plot at the main beg ending of the story, but then the Giovanni  arc thing just is not even close to as well developed the beginning is.

Enjoyment - 8.5/10
I enjoyed this story, at least the first part. It was one of the first fanfics that I really liked, and I just ignore the end.

Age - there is one time something is hinted at, but this just flys by younger readers, so I think this is a 11 or older story. I mean it does have some violence.

Overall - 8/10
This is a good fanfic, and the only thing holding it back is the ending and ash's unrealistic change.