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Uday and vashma holding amdheer respectively reached the hall from two opposite doors.... Amdheer being numbed didn't notice each other....
Vashmay got shocked as well as happy seiing a lots of partition victims sitting and waiting for the show to start and soon they noticed rajpariwaar coming and settling in a different row made especially for them... The sarpanchs were also invited..... A stage was made but is covered with curtains.... Mogar bua and papaji were standing near the stage
Veer came out of the curtains and signalled them to come to him
They went towards him settling amdheer in seats of far opposite corners....
They got shocked seeing Veer nervous.... Soon mogar bua and papaji also joined them
Ve- "folding his hands and in a guilt tone" hume maaf kar dijiye ek bohot badi dikkat ho gayi hai woh kahaani sunane wala nhi aaya... "In a tensed tone" Ab bina kahani sunane wale ke kaise yeh play shuru kare hum... Kaise hoga yeh sab kuch ab
Va- "in an assuring tone" o ji chinta ki koi baat nhi hai... Mai hu na Mai sunaungi
U- "in a disapproving tone" Oye tu akele kyu sunaegi hum sab milke sunaenge unki kahaani..."dreamily" Yaad dilaenge unhe unki beeti zindagi..unke woh khubsurat din.."sadly" Bohot seh liya dono ne ...haalat dekh rahe hai aaplog inki... Jarur Kuch vada hoya hai dono ke beech hum aur intezaar nahi kar sakte.....chaliye chaalu karte hai
Everyone- Thik hai

Soon Vashma sat in front of the mic
V- oji namaste, sastriakaal.. Aadaab
Mai vashma uday kishore sahani aap sab ka yaha tahe dil se swaagat karti hu
The audience clapped loudly in response
Va- O ji aap sb yahi soch rhe honge na ki  humne aaj aap sab ko yaha kyu bulwaya hai
Audience-"enthusiastically " Ha
V- Ji humne aaj aap sab ko yaha ek khubsurat si kahaani dikhane aur sunane bulaya hai
Audience- "in a confused tone" Par yeh kahaani hai kiski??
V- O ji yeh kahaani ek editor ki hai jo dhundhne toh ek fankaara ko chala tha par dil ek sidhi saadi nek dil kudi ko de baitha ya yu bhi keh sakte hai ki yeh kahaani ek sapno ki bediyon mai bandh lahore ki ek kudi ki aur karachi ke ek munde ki hai jo uske sapnon ke kuch tukde uske hatheli vich rakhne karachi se lahore tak aa gya"hearing her lines amdheer lifted their eyes in shock"
Aur ji iss kahani ke kirdaaro ke naam bhi shayad aap logo ne kayi baar sune honge
Audience- "in a confused tone" Matlab ji
She smiled and looked at amdheer one by one while hearing her words they got some doubt that it concerns them only
Va- oji Nav hind bharat samachar ke editor randheer raizada ka naam toh suna hi hoga na aap mai se bohot logo ne
Amdheer got shocked as their doubts got confirmed
Audience-"excitedly"  Arre wahi na jo ullulal chaapta tha
Va- Ji
A lady in Audience- "excitedly" Ha unka naam kisne nhi suna hoga.. "Dreamily" Sunte the bada gabru, jawaan munda hai aur karachi ke sabse rayees khandan ka ek lauta beta bhi hai... O ji sach kahu na toh bada mann tha ek vaari usse milne "angrily" par yeh mua batwara
Va- "happily" Toh ji bas yeh kahaani usi randheer raizada ki hai jispe Pura Punjab marta tha aur woh sirf ek kudi pe
Au- "confused" Kudi Kon?
Va- "looking at amrit lovingly" Raanjhan
While amrit's lips curved into a smile listening raanjhan as it's decades now that somebody introduced her as raanjhan. ... Earlier vashma used to tease her and compliment her writings with this name and then randheer used to always compliment or used to tag this name in their talks..... But after losing both of them she lost her raanjhan self
Audience- O ji yeh toh wahi hai na jo badi acchi prem kahaaniyaan likha karta tha
Audience- Maine toh uski saari kahaaniyaan pachaas se sau baar padhi hai par woh toh ek munda hai humne radio mai suna tha
Amrit got a little angry while randheer got a little embarrassed as it is he only who started this confusion..... Vashma smiled seeing their expressions and decided to clear this misunderstanding
Va- Ji nahi raanjhan ek ladki hai....
ek aisi ladki jo sirf bandh aankhon se hi nahi balki khuli aankhon se bhi sapne dekhne ki kuwwat rakhti thi.....par apne sapnon ko hakeekat mai badalne ki himmat nhi thi bechari mai isiliye nhi ki use duniya ya samaaj se darr lagta tha balki isiliye kyuki woh apne bauji ko kabhi dukh nhi pohochana chahti thi... Apne bauji ki jaan jo thi aur unki pag ki shaan bhi.... "Amrit felt so lucky to have vashma in her life as she understands her so well"
Par raanjhan uski asli pehchaan nahi thi.... O ji asal mai toh woh "in an extravagant tone" lahore ke ek bade janemaane raees....Masale aur mewo ke baadshah... Laaleya di hatti ke maalik.... lala ratan kishore sahani ki ek lauti beti thi
Amrit's eyes started flowing as she remembered her bauji.... How she used to felt proud while saying this and how her bauji used to give his moochon ko taav
Audience- Arre humne toh bohot naam suna hai inka bhi....vada rasuk tha bhayi inka saade lahore vich.....inki kotthi toh sabse badi thi saade lahore vich ....vada bhala parivaar tha ji inka...oji Inki kudi ki toh shaadi thi na azaadi wale din.... Bade charche the iss shaadi ke lahore ki sabse acchi shaadi hone wali thi... Vada dil khol ke kharcha karne wale the ji yeh toh shaadi vich
Amdheer's heart started beating faster just by the mention of their shaadi and goosebumps arose in their body
Va-"with moist eyes and a little heavy voice" Ji ha sahi samjha aapne aur yeh kahaani uss munde aur kudi ki hi hai jo dulha dulhan toh ban gaye par kabhi pati patni na bann paaye
Amdheer's hearts broke listening her words and fresh tears started flowing from their eyes. . .. Everyone felt bad for amdheer
Au- "excitedly" o kudiye suna suna shuruaat se suna inki kahaani ko.... Humaari bhi yaadein taaza ho jaengi

Vashma wiped her tears and again excitedly said
Va- ji Toh suniye amrit ek bohot hi acchi lekhika thi.. Prem kahaniyan likhti thi ji woh..... Par uske bauji bohot hi purani khayalat ke the unko yeh sab bilkul bhi nhi pasand tha... Aur amrit jo apne bauji se itna pyaar karti thi ke unke liye apni koi bhi pyaari cheez chodne ke liye jhat se taiyaar ho jati thi... Usne apne sapne ka gala ghotna chaha par "in a self praising tone" maine use raanjhan k naam se lekh chapwane ke liye mana liya... Aur humne sabse pehle unn lekho ko nav hind samachar ke office main bheje uske lekh ko chaapne ki manzoori ke liye aur usi din se kahaani shuru huyi ji inki..."a beautiful smile got pasted on amdheer's faces" Randheer ko raanjhan urf amrit ki kahaaniyaan bohot pasand aayi. ..aaegi bhi kyu na dono ki ankhein ek hi toh sapna dekha karti thi aazaad hindustan ke saath saath auraton ki aazaadi ke sapne.....deewana ho gya tha ji woh uski lekho ka pehli baar padhte hi......aur agle din jb unka jawaab aaya toh woh sirf ek aupchaarik khat hi nhi tha balki usme humare Randheer raizada ne amrit ke lekho ki tareefon ke pool baandhe the, itni pasand aa gyi thi lekh use uski ki ji rubaroo milna chahta tha woh usse
Randheer blushed a little while amrit got lost in those moments when she used to wait for his letters and read it with vashma.... Lost in those beautiful days
Au- "queried" Toh kya amrit mili unse
Va- Ji nhi apne bauji ko dukh na pohocha dene ke darr se woh mili toh nhi unse kabhi.....par ha uss ek khat ne dil jarur jeet liya tha amrit ka ..."eyeing amrit with a teasing smile" Kabhi akhbaar na padhne wali humari ladki pehle ke saare akhbaar khoj khoj ke padhne lagi thi sirf aur sirf Randheer ki soch ko, uski kala ko aur kareeb se janne ke liye.,..aakhir uske sapnon ka rajkumaar jo ban gaya tha woh.... Uss din ke baad se amrit ka koi bhi sapna uski dastak ke bina pura nhi hota "amrit got embarrassed as her best frnd is revealing all her secrets...pls remember amdheer hasn't seen each other till now....she'sjust thanking God that randheer is not here or else what he'll think about her while randheer got excited hearing such unknown tales about his beloved".......har mahine ek lekh chapta tha uska aur usi din humare Randheer sahab ek chitthi bhejte the post box no. Ek ek ek yaani ke ek sau gyarah mai raanjhan ki tareefon se bhare aur usse milne ki iccha jaahir karte huye....
Waqt bita aur Bechare ne puri gyarah chithttiyan bhej di amrit ko par amrit kabhi himmat juta ke uski ek chitti ka jawab tak na de paayi
Aur waha humare Randheer babu apni raanjhan ke ek jawab ke liye taraste rahe aur unki besabri itni badh gayi ki karaachi ka saara kaarobar chodh chaad ke lahore chale aaye apni raanjhan ki talaash mai.
Randheer got embarrassed this time as his secrets are also getting revealed in front of so many people
Woh basant panchami ka din tha jb pehli baar mulaakat huyi burqewali ya yun kahu bracelet wali aur ullulal ki
Amdheer gave their best smiles listening her and their first meet flashed in front of their eyes
Au- ji Yeh burqewali aur ullulal kon the?
Va- Amrit aur Randheer
Au- Ha?? Phir ek nayi pehchaan??
The curtains were raised by some workers and everyone present there got mesmerized seeing the set up of the beautiful market of lahore....and in the right corner stood a man in the disguise of ullulal....the lights then got shifted to two figures dressed in burqa who were walking in the market
Amdheer got shocked seeing it...nostalgia hit them hard..... Their first meet flashed in front of their eyes
Guys pls imagine the drama while listening vashma.... The characters will do whatever vashma will say while narrating the story and the setting will also change with the change in scenes
Va- Ji.... Uss din main aur amrit dono burqa pehne huye Randheer ki chitthi laa rahe the jab humaari nazar Randheer ke cartoon ullulal ke putle par padi..... Jo ki cardboard pe likhe ek lekh ki taraf ishaara kar raha tha woh lekh hubahoo amrit ke uss din dekhe gaye sapne se milta tha ladkiyon ke khule aam bhangra paane ki aazadi ke sapne se.... Amrit use dekh bohot khush ho gyi par ghar jane ki jaldi ki wajah se hum waha se nikal hi rahe the ki amrit ke haath se chitthi udd kar uss putle k pairon par atak gayi.... Amrit bohot mushqil se uss putle tak pohochi par usne jo dekha use dekhkar toh bechari ke hosh hi udd gaye
Aisa kya dekh liya tha usne?
Usne yeh dekha ki woh ullulal koi putla nhi balki ek jita jaagta insaan hai...darasal woh Randheer khud tha jo apne cartoon ullulal ke jariye apni soch duniya ko batana chahta tha..... Unn dono ki ankhein pehli baar mili waha aur bas kya tha kho gaye ji dono ek dusre ki aankhon mai
A beautiful smile played on their lips the entire time and their eyes were shining with light happy tears
Au- Baatein huyi kya??
Va- Nhi ji kaha?? Hume dair ho rhi thi aur uss putle ko "eyeing randheer teasingly" dekhne ke liye bohot bhid khadi huyi thi?
A kid amid audience- "in a thoughtful tone" Par kya logo ko chhalna galat baat nhi thi uss Randheer ki
randheer made a guilty face while Vashma and amrit smiled remembering that time..... and eyeing amrit she said
Va- Mere bhi mann mai wahi baat aayi thi jab amrit ne mujhe bataya iske baare mai...."in a self appreciating tone"aur mai toh ji jaa kr sabke saamne uska asli chehra dikhane hi wali thi ki "eyeing amrit with complaining as well as teasing eyes" meri pakki saheli ne mujhe rok liya aur kehne lagi ki "mimicking her" ho skta hai iska bhi koi sapna ho aur hume kisi ka sapna nahi todna chaiye "coming to her original state" aur phir jaate jaate apne haatho se yun "making all the best sign with her fingers while randheer put his hands on his heart and amrit blushed" aakaar banake dikhaya ki woh jo kuch bhi kar rha hai accha kar raha hai uske haathon ke aakaar ne Randheer ko rubaru karaaya unke pyaar ki pehli nishaani yaani amrit ke bracelet se
Amrit and randheer smiled brightly while amrit brought forward her bracelet and tinkled it... Vashma saw her antics and smiled profusely

A lady amid audience- "in a confused tone" Bracelet.......pyaar ki nishani... Kaise
Vashma smiled and said enthusiastically
Va- Ji ha bracelet kyuki ab yeh kahaani bracelet se hi aage badhegi par usse pehle ek shayari sunana chahungi aap sab ko mai jo Randheer ke ajiz dost sharfu miyan "listening sharfu miya's name a beautiful smiling picture of sharfu miyan flashed infront of his eyes and a tear dropped from his eye as he's now far from his life...so far that howsoever he want he won't be able to listen janaab from his mouth...to console him whenever he falls weak...to make him smile in the difficult of times...that day in riots he not only lost a human but his best friend also who in his last breath also cared about him" ne hume batayi thi jisme humare shayar sahab ne badi hi pyaar se apne dil ka haal bataya hai

Audience together- Irshaad hai!!
Vashma in a poetic tone said
Agar badalon mai chupe chaand ka deedar ho jaata
Toh roshan humara bhi jahaan ho jaata.
Nazaron nazaron mai kuch aagaz toh hua hai
Chehra dekh lete toh shayad pyaar ho jaata
Randheer came back in his senses hearing his own shaayari while amrit got excited as she didn't knew that randheer made shaayaris for her that time also
The audience clapped hard for such a beautiful shaayari and randheer blushed a little
Audience- Waah waah waah badi hi khub shayari padhi thi iss Randheer ne toh
Va- Ajji abhi toh shayari ka silsila shuru huya hai aage aage dekhiye kitni shaayariyan sunate hai "eyeing randheer" humare shaayar Randheer babu
The kid amid Audience- "excitedly" Didi jaldi aage ki kahaani sunao
Va- Ji ha jarur
Toh agle din mujhe mere abbajaan se pata chala ke Randheer sahab lahore aaye huye hai aur sultaan sarai mai ruke huye hai... Aur yahi baat jab maine amrit ko bataayi toh badi hi betaab ho gyi thi ji
"Amrit got embarrassed and nodded in no eyeing vashma and begged her folding her hands while our vashma smiled but royally ignored her" humari raanjhan usse milne ke liye par usne faisla kiya tha ki woh use apne raanjhan hone ke baare mai nhi bataegi aur baaki ladkiyon ki tarah milegi bas ek prasanshak ke roop mai....Aur phir kya tha hum dono amrit ke bauji ki car mai school ke liye nikal pade
Waise mujhe sharfu miyan ne bataya tha ke randheer ne amrit ke woh bracelet pehne huye haath dekhe the jb humari gaadi sultan sarai se hoke guzar rahi thi
Randheer got embarassed as he knew what's coming and just like amrit begged vashma folding his hands to not disclose his doings while vashma got shocked and smiled teasingly as both amdheer are doing the same antics.... Deciding to tease them later she continued the story" Aur badi hi dhuk dhuk si hone lagi thi unhe waise ji tadap gaadi k andar bhi kuch kam na thi "eyeing amrit teasingly"... Amrit ka bas na chala kyuki tayaji saath the warna toh woh bas gaadi se kud ke sidha editor sahab se milne chali jaati.
Amrit made a haww face and hid her face in between her palms... Vashma smiled seeing her antics" ....waise uss din kismat ne ek aur bada pyaara khel khela tha in dono ke saath
Audience- Kaisa khel
Va-  O ji dil thaam ke baith jaiye kyuki ab hum sab rubaru hone wale hai raibahadur taangewale se "the audience clapped hard and randheer got confused listening his name while amrit admired the tangewala in the play" oo ji naam toh hume bhi nhi pata tha uska par yeh naam uski shakshiyat dekh kr humari amrit ne rakha tha
As soon as randheer heard that his amrit has given him this name his happiness knew no bounds and he kept his palms on his heart showing his likeness for this name
Audience- "confused" Par iss taangewale ka amrit aur Randheer ki kahani se kya vaasta?
Amrit and randheer smiled brightly
Va- vaasta hai ji kyuki woh taangewala koi aur nahi balki khud Randheer tha jisne uss din taangewala ban kar lahore ki galliyon ko chaanne ka faisla kiya tha taaki raanjhan ke baare mai kuch pata laga sake
Au- "excited" Toh kya mili use raanjhan ki koi khabar
Seeing their excitement she said
Va- Ajji ab sabar rakhiye aur aage dekhiye aur suniye.. Toh mai aur amrit apne school se burqa pehen Randheer se milne nikle par kismat ka khel dekhiye hume Randheer raizada se milane khud Randheer raizada hi taangewale ke roop mai apne taange par baithake le jaane wala tha.. "with an urgent voice...trying to grab their attention " Ab gaur farmaiega aap sab kyuki humare unke taange mai baithne se pehle Randheer sahab ne apni shayari ke jariye khuda se ek dua bhi maangi thi
Randheer made a haww face as he didn't expected this at all... If sharfu miyan has been there he would've given him a good round of scolding as all his secrets are revealing bit by bit only because of him while amrit got excited and seeing them vashma smiled
Audience- "exclaiming" Ji Irshaad hai
Vashma in a poetic tone
Kaash koi kashti kinare se takra jaaye
Chaand badli se nikle aur dil main sama jaaye
Karishmein hote hai suna toh tha bohot
Raanjhan naamo ek hasina ka aur woh humare taange mai aa jaaye
Audience-"applauded" waaah waah!! Waah waah!!

Va- Aur ji aisi dua qubool ki khuda ne ki shayari khatm hone se pehle hi unki raanjhan aur mai uss taange mai baith gye "amrit and randheer got lost in those beautiful memories as the whole scene played in their mind like a blissful movie"
Bechaara hume khud apne aap se milane sultan sarai leke jaa raha tha aur waha pohoch kr chori pakdi na jaye isiliye "eyeing randheer with accusing and teasing eyes while randheer was feeling embarassed to the core" khud ko randheer ka khaas aadmi batane laga... Bada phaink raha tha... Khud ko buddha bata raha tha... Humne jab pucha ki kya woh hume randheer raizada se milwa sakta hai toh kehne laga ki woh hume milwa toh sakta hai par uske badle mai hume use raanjhan ka pata batana padega... "Dreamily" Kitni ajeeb baat thi na...raanjhan aur randheer khud ek dusre se ek dusre ka pata puche jaa rahe the....par uss din humaare haath toh kuch na laga par randheer sahab ko phirse uss bracelet ki aur burqe wali ki jhalak jarroor mil gayi... "Eyeing both of them with a beautiful smile" Bade hi pyaar se ek dusre ki aankhon mai doobe huye the dono aakhir aankhon hi aankhon mai pyaar jo hona shuru ho gaya tha dono ke beech.....waise ek aur cheez mili thi humare randheer sahab ko
Audience- Kya?
Raanjhan ki diary jisme uske saare lekh likhe the... Amrit ke baste se galti se taange par gir gyi thi aur humaare randheer sahab ke haath lag gyi bechari amrit jb ghar pohochi aur diary bohot dhundhne par bhi na mili toh darr ke maare haalat kharab ho gyi thi ji uski pata nhi "eyeing amrit with disbelief eyes" uss diary ke jal jaane ke, beh jaane ke kitni duaayen maangi thi usne... Aur dusri taraf humare randheer babu bas uss diary ko ek tak dekhe hi jaa rahe the jaise ke woh ek diary na ho balki koi tijori mai gada khajana ho "randheer blushed hard at this statement" aur aakhir dekhe bhi kyu na ji diary ke pehle panne par likhe kuch baaton ne unka dil jo jeet liya tha jise padhkar aage padhne ki himmat hi nhi hui unme
Au- Aisa kya likha tha usme
Va- Batate hai batate hai pehle uss diary ke thode kisse sun lijiye
Hearing the term uss diary ke kisse sun lijiye randheer and amrit got embarassed and scared as hell as both of theirs most khufiya secrets will get revealed in the process not just in front of the family but in front of so many strangers
Va- Agle din subah subah dono hi nikal gye .....ek diary lene toh dusra wapas dene ke liye....burqewali aur tongewale ke roop mai hi......Bechaaro ne bohot dhundha ek dusre ko par kuch haath na aaya par ha.....jb hum taange pe baithe the tab randheer ne mere muh se mera pata sun liya tha aur woh diary wapas krne ke liye mere ghar ke illake mai aa gye..... Subah se shaam ho gyi par bechare ko uss burqewali ke darshan na huye par haa apne hone wale sasur se acchi khaasi daant aur puchtaach zaroor mil gyi use "randheer caressed his nape as the dreadful and funny memories concerning lalaji flashed infront of his eyes"..... Lalaji ko darr tha ke kahi woh tongawala ek dangaai na ho aur isiliye unhone police ko bulana chaha par ain waqt par amrit ki nazar pad gyi aur woh burqa pehen apni diary lene aa gyi...Vada siyappa ho jaata uss din par rab ka lakh lakh shukr hai ke baat sambhal gayi "in a self appreciating tone" Mai aa gayi aur maine badi chaalaki se amrit ko wapas tonge mai baitha ke rawaana kiya
The kid amid audience- "interrogatively" Par woh kaha gayi.. matlab woh toh apne ghar se hi nikli thi na
Va- ji chote sarkaar woh apne ghar se hi nikli thi aur der na ho jaaye isiliye paas Mai hi utar gyi waise jab woh utri aur
Use paise dene chahe toh randheer ne badi saadgi se use paise ke bajaaye uske liye dua maangne ko kaha "dreamily" O ji uss din pata chala hume ki duaaon mai kitna asar hota hai
The kid amid audience- Aisi konsi dua maangi
Amrit and randheer got lost in that moment of theirs while Vashma said
Va- Aisi "mimicking randheer's tongewala tone" Oji aap bas itni dua de dijiye ki humaare janab randheer raizada ko uss raanjhan ka pata mil jaaye aur aapko randheer raizada mil jaaye
Randheer and amrit were smiling brightly all the time
Va- Uss tongewale ki soch aur khuddari ne amrit ka dil jeet liya tha
Bechaari bohot dukhi ho gyi thi aur apne sapno ko jalaane bhatti par chod diya par "in a self praising voice" iss vashma baig ke rehte uski amrit aisa kuch kre aisa ho skta hai kya "amrit smiled amidst happy tears and nodded in a big no to which her vashma gave her a bright smile"
Bechaari badi dukhi thi par mere bas ek baar uss taangewale ke naam ko lene ki hi dair thi ke ji amrit ne toh saare dukh bhulakar uske tareefon ke gaath khol diye aur tabhi usse naam bhi diya raibahaadur tongewala
Randheer got really happy listening that his amrit has praised him so much and felt blessed that only his name was enough for her to forget all her miseries
Waise uss raat ko amrit ko ek bohot badi khushi mili thi
Audience- "excitedly" Kya?
Va- Uday ne tayaji aur taiji ki baatein sun li thi aur aake hume bataya ki randheer raizada ka rishta aaya hai humari amrit de vaaste "amrit felt shy just like the first time and seeing her shyness vashma continued eyeing her with teasing smile" ......uss samay uske chehre ki khushi dekhne laayak thi aur ho bhi kyu na uske sapno ke raajkumaar ka rishta khud chal ke jo aaya tha uske liye, bada mann tha uska randheer ko shaadi ke pehle dekhne ka ....... "Amrit wanted to strangle vashma till death for revealing all her secrets and gestured vashma that she'll slap her if she won't stop now...while vashma royally ignored her....amrit made a haww face" agle din Mandir jaa kar bhole baba se badi guhaar bhi lagayi par use kya pata tha ke bhole baba uski mannat ko pehle hi puri karne mai puri tarah joot gaye hai
Audience-"confused " Matlab
Va- Oji matlab yeh ki jab amrit mandir gayi thi puja karne "the mandir moments flashed in front of amdheer moments making them nostalgic" usi samay humare randheer sahaab bhi waha pohoch gaye the.... Chehra toh nahi dekh paaye the amrit ka par uski baatein sun kar bohot khush ho gya the bechaare... Koshish bhi ki par dekh na paaye use....waise accha hi hua uss din ek dusre ko dekh nhi paaye toh
The raj parivaar were also so engrossed in the play that bindu chachi suddenly asked
Bindu chachi- Aisa kyu lekin
Va- Woh isiliye kyuki kismat inn dono ko aaram se akele milwana chahti thi.... Uss din amrit ko panditji ne bataaya ki randheer waha hai aur shaayad library mai hoga.... Usne khushi se aisi daud lagaayi library ke liye ki pucho mat "amrit got so embarrassed that she wished the ground to swallow her whole" aur mai aur uday mil gaye waha par.... Hum sab randheer ko dhundh rahe the ki ek bada hi accha parihaas hua hum sab ke saath..... Humne galti se sharfu miyan ko randheer samajh liya.."randheer got shocked having this new piece of information and thought to tease her later while amrit slapped her own forehead thinking how stupid she was as those funny moments flashed in front of her eyes".. Bechaari amrit ke toh saare sapne hi toot gye the jaise......upar se uss tongewale ne bhi randheer ko bhuddha bataya tha..... Usne faisla kar liya ki woh iss baare mai tayaji se baat karegi aur yeh vyaah hargij nhi karegi.... Par uss din uday ke pita brij chachaji ek 19 saal ki kudi, radha chachi ko vyah ke le aaye.... Aur gharwalo ka iss baat pe nazariya dekh amrit bohot darr gyi
Randheer felt bad for his amrit as he can feel how hard it would've been for her
Au- Aisa bhi kya nazariya tha
Va- "in a little sad tone" Uske bauji ka maanna tha ki mundo ki umar nhi dekhi jaati unka hausla dekha jaata hai.. Khaandan dekha jaata hai.... Phir kya tha bechaari bohot royi aur jab pata chala ke agle din radha chachi ke muh dikhayi ke jashn mai randheer apne bauji ke saath aane wala hai amrit ko dekhne toh woh toh bechaari aur toot gayi "tears dropped from both of their eyes as amrit reminisced everything while randheer felt her pain".... Pura mann bana liya tha isne ki woh uss randheer ke saamne hi nhi jaegi
Au- uss din bhi nhi mile kya
Va- " Looking heavenward...in a loving voice" O ji woh rab na jab jisko jaise milwana chahta hai milwa ke rehta hai.... Humare randheer sahab maan toh gaye apne bauji ke ladki dekhne jaane wale farmaan ko par unke dimaag mai wohi bracelet wali ladki hi ghum rahi thi....
"Amrit and randheer blushed" Par ji jab mohalle pe pohoche aur lalaji ko dekha na swaagat karte huye bechare ki haalat bigad gyi "randheer was utterly embaraased as Sare aam izzat uchal rahi hai bechaare ki" aur bigde bhi kyu na.... Ek din pehele hi bechaare ne itni daant suni unse aur police mai bhi bhejne wale the aur aaj unke hi ghar mai unka rishta tay hone wala tha.... Taayaaji unhe pehchaan toh nhi paaye par upar khadi amrit ne phir se sharfu miyan ko randheer raizada samajh liya..... Waise randheer saahab bada khush ho gye the kyuki unhe vishwas hone laga tha ki unki woh bracelet wali jashn mai bhi shaamil huyi hogi... Sharfu miyan ke bohot kehne par bhi ki jis ladki ko dekhne aaye ho unpe dhyaan de woh nhi maane... Unki nazar sirf ladkiyo ke haath par gadi thi taaki ek baar unki uss bracelet wali ka deedar ho jaaye par ji unhe kya pata tha ki amrit ke haath se uska bracelet hi gir gaya hai aur ji dekhiye zameen pe gire huye bracelet pe nazar pad gayi par bracelet wali tk unki nazar pade usse pehle hi kisi ne unhe bula liya
"Audience were so engrossed that a disappointed sigh left all of their mouths
Amrit and randheer listened their sighs and blushed hard"
"With a little clenched jaws" Phir kisi ke jaan bujh ke galti karne par humaari amrit ke aankhon mai roli aur haldi chali gayi.....bechaari aankho ko pallu se dhake chhat pe jaa rhi thi aur waha humare randheer sahab raanjhan ko dhundhne phir se nikle aur inn dono ki takkar ho gayi..."amrit and randheer felt goosebumps arising in their body as those memories flashed in front of their eyes..the day they saw each others face was the most beautiful day of their life and every moment of that day is imprinted in their hearts and listening about this day after such a long time they can't control their feelings...they wanted to hug each other tightly but to their dismay they aren't together now but the drama didnt let them feel sad...they had the most beautiful smile ever" Randheer ne uski haalat dekh uski madad karni chahi.... Randheer use chhat pe leke gaye aur bechaari ko unn tange huye khubsurat dupatto se bachaate huye uske haatho main paani diya taki woh apne aankh dho sake par bechaare ko kya pata tha ki kisi ki madad karne ka aisa nek inaam mil jaega ki jis bracelet wali ko janaab pure ghar mai dhundh rahe hai woh uske saamne khadi mil jaegi.... Dekhte hi reh gaye use aakhir baadalon mai chupe chaand ka deedar jo ho gya tha inhe aur chehra aisa jise dekhte hi ek pal mai dil de baithe janaab
The audience got all awe on this scene playing right in front of their eyes
Waha jab amrit ne aankh kholi toh itne gabru jawaan munde ko dekhti hi reh gayi.... Par humare randheer kuch kam nhi the chupaye rakhi apni asli pehchaan khud ko tongewala hi kehne lage.... Kehne lage ki agar logo ko pata chala ki ek tongawala mehenge kapde pehenkar jalse mai shaamil hua hai toh use beizzat karke baahar nikal denge....amrit ko mana kiya uski pehchaan kisi ko bataane se par ji tabhi waha sharfu miyan aaye aur unke saare raaz se parda utha diya.... Amrit ke mann mai toh jaise khushi se laddoo phootne lage..aakhir uske sapnon ke rajkumaar ko ek khubsurat chehra jo mil gaya tha uss pal aur phir rishta aaya tha bhai uska humari amru ke liye
The curtains were dropped and amrit and randheer came back to their senses but the beautiful smile never left their face
Niche jashn par ek bada bakheda hone hi wala tha ki humare randheer sahab ne apni shaayari se uss baat ko bilkul shaant kar diya.....waise apne dil ka haal e bayan karne ka isse accha tareeka bhi nahi tha unke paas aakhir mauka bhi tha aur dastur bhi

Audience- Hume bhi sunni hai woh shayari
Va- Ji jarur toh apne pehele pyaar ki aankhon mai khoke kuch yun shaayari padhi thi unhone
In a poetic tone
Irshaad hai
Randheer and amrit smiled remembering the moment and respectively at their places murmured the shaayari along with vashma
Milaawat hai tere ishq mai itr aur sharaab ki
Kabhi hum mehek jaate hai
Kabhi behek jaate hai
Audience- "applauding" Waah waah
The kid amid audience- accha toh uske baad unn dono ke beech uss raat ko baatein hui
Vashma- "eyeing amdheer with teasing eyes" hui na par hothon se nahi aankhon se....dono bas ek dusre ko dekhe hi jaa rahe the... Aankhon se sau baatein kar li thi ji inn dono ne......humaari amrit toh bas ek takk taake jaa rhi thi apne randheer ko aur uske jawaab ka besabri se intezaar kar rahi thi
Amrit felt extremely shy and vashma noticed it so to tease her more she said
Va- Waise na humaari amrit ki raashi ne bhi kuch kam sahyog nahi diya hai inki prem kahaani mai
Bindu chachi- Raashi kaise sahyog de skti hai bhalaa
Va- O ji agle din subah 7:55 pe humari amrit ne apni raashi mai padha tha ki subah 8 bje uska saccha pyaar uske darwaaze par dastak dega......chatt se toh mai aate huyi dikhi use par niche aane tak koi aur hi khada tha waha aur woh bhi chaadar mai lipte huye bechaari mujhe samajhkar usse baatein karne lagi .....apni raashi waali baat kehne lagi aur afsos bhi jataaya ke ek lambe chaude gabru jawaan ke jagah mera palla pakadna pad raha hai use par chaadar hati toh uske hosh udd gaye
The kid amid audience- "excitedly" aisa bhi kya dekh liya unhone ki hosh udd gaye
Va- ab ji hosh toh udenge hi na aakhir sach mai uska sachha pyaar jo khada tha uske ghar ke saamne... "Giggling as she reminisced those moments when amrit explained this moment to her" aur ji Amrit mujhe samajh ke unpe paani daalna chaah rahi thi par jab abdul bhaijaan ke kehne par piche mudi toh dekhti hi reh gayi bina palak jhapkaaye "amrit felt shy"..... Aur jab humare randheer sahab " Emphasizing- ne bade hi pyaar aur adab se" kaha ki "mimicking randheer" itni buri bhi kismat nahi hai ji aapki toh bechaari sharam se puri laal peeli ho gayi aur chaadar abdul bhaijaan ke haath mai pakdaaye khud ghar ke andar daud gayi aur uske piche uske randheer
Both amrit and randheer blushed hard but were feeling bliss after reminiscing those old golden days and their memories
With teasing eyes vashma teased amrit
Ji humaari amrit na badi chupi rustam hai saamne se toh sunn nhi sakti thi Randheer ki baatein par kisi na kisi kaam ke bahaane Randheer ki bauji ke saath ho rahi baaton ko badi gaur se sunti aur khud ko humesha apne Randheer ke aur kareeb paati thi
Aur ji jab ise pata chala na ke randheer unke yaha mehmaan ban kar kuch din rukne wala hai toh ji humari amrit ki khushi ka koi Thikana hi nahi raha
Amrit blushed hard on this
Va- ji ab sab apne dil ko thaam lijiye
The kid amid audience - par kyu
Va- kyuki Ji ab inki prem kahaani ka sabse khubsurat adhyaay shuru hone jaa raha hai aur iski shuruaat huyi thi paayal se
The kid- "astonished" Paayal
Va- Ji amrit ki paayal
The kid amid audience- "confused" Par Paayal kaise
Va- Ji woh hua yun ki randheer ke kamre Mai paani ka jug rakhne amrit gyi thi "in a shushed voice" ji jug toh bas ek banaana tha asal mai randheer ke baare mai aur jaannaa tha use....."in her original tone" .uske cartoons... Uske photos ko dhyaan se dekh hi rhi thi woh ke janaab randheer aa gye apni shir... "Randheer and amrit made pleading face and folded their hands nodding in no to vashma.... Our vashma smiled seeing them and changed the topic"
O ji apni shirt lene vaaste aaye the "amdheer took a sigh of relief seeing it vashma gave them a teasing smile" Amrit almaari ke piche chup gayi uske aate hi aur jaise hi woh nikla jaldi se bhaagi par bhaagte bhaagte uski paayal waha khul ke gir gayi aur humare randheer ke haath lag gayi.... Unki jhankaar sunke "forwarding their hand which held the respective paayals they tinkled it and smiled brightly hearing it's sound" bada khush ho gye the humaare randheer babu..... Dopahar ko amrit ko ghar ke baahar ek purani kitaab kaamayni padhte dekh apni amrit ke mutaasir ho gye the ji aur ji usi samay pehli baar baatcheet huyi dono ke beech....
"Amrit and Randheer got lost in those memories smiling brightly"
Randheer ne jab uski paayal dikhate huye use bataaya ki use pata hai ki woh uske kamre mai aayi thi toh bechaari toh sharam ke maare paani paani ho gayi... Aur jaise hi usne apni paayal wapas maangi randheer ne kaha ki ji mai aapki paayal toh lauta dunga par aapko mujhe raanjhan ke baare mai bataana hoga..."in an amused tone" Ji khud raanjhan se raanjhan ka pata puch rahe the janaab.......kitni ajeeb baat thi na ki ek apni pehchaan chupane mai laga tha toh dusra uss pehchan ke piche chupe insaan ko dhundhne....
A lady amid audience- "in an aww tone" Kinni sohni kahaani hai inki bilkul kisi khubsurat sapne ki tarah
Listening her vashma got happy as well as sad as now their happiness will be short lived.... In a sad as well as grim tone
Va- ji jinni sohni hai utni hi Trasadiyo se bhari bhi hui hai.... Bade hi kam pal ke liye khushiyaan inke darwaaze pe aayi hai abhi dekhiye na uss samay unki baatein aur ho paati usse pehle hi amrit ki saari khushiyon ko khatm krne ke liye mummy ji ne use apne kamre vich bulaaya.... Unki sirf ek baat ne amrit ke saare sapno ko tod ke rakh diya
Amrit and randher knew what was coming.... Slight tears came in Randheer's eyes as he can imagine the pain amrit has gone through while amrit was in tears as she Reminscised those dreadful moments

A lady amid audience- "confused" Aisa bhi kya ho gya tha
Va- O ji asal mai jiss rishte ke sapne amrit apni aankho mai din raat saja rhi thi woh rishta asal Mai uske liye kabhi aaya hi nahi tha woh toh uski bua ki beti ke liye, aaya tha... Bechaari bohot royi socha randheer ko bhul jaegi par uske andar ki raanjhan ne use aisa krne nhi diya...pehli baar amrit aur raanjhan ki ladaayi mai jeet raanjhan ki huyi thi amrit ne faisla kar liya tha ki woh agle din randheer ko apne raanjhan hone ki sacchai bata degi
Randheer got astonished as he never thought that his amrit wanted to confess the truth of her being raanjhan back then only.... He never shared it with anyone but a part of him always had this complaint that his amrit never wanted to disclose her real identity in front of him although she was well aware of how much he desired to meet the real raanjhan.... He felt out of the world getting this piece of information"
Audience - "in an elated voice" Aree waah toh kya bata diya usne
Va- "in a little dull voice" Ji kaha agle din subah hi "eyeing Randheer with accusing eyes " hamaare janaab randheer ne radio mai ailaan krwa diya ki raanjhan apni kahaaniyaan radio mai sunaega "Randheer caressed his nape feeling utterly embarrassed " aap sab ko toh yaad hi hoga
A lady amid audience- "enthusiastically" Are haa bhai hum sab toh 8 bajne ke pehle hi intezaar mai baith gaye the uski kahaaniyaan sunne ke liye
Va- "agreeing with her" Ji woh toh hum bhi baithe the par pehle uss din subah ki thodi baatein sun le jo unhe ek dusre ke aur kareeb le aayi thi.....toh hua yoon ki Amrit apni bachi hui ek paayal ko baahar daraaz mai rakh randheer ke kamre mai nakli raanjhan ka pata lagane pohochi....
"Amrit bit her tongue reminiscing her old doings"woh Chitthiyan padh hi rahi thi ki randheer aa gaye...amrit toh ek pal ke liye darr hi gayi thi unhe waha dekh kar par phir himmat jutta kar unse raanjhan ke baare mai puchne lagi...
The kid amid audience- waah kya baat hai matlab raanjhan khud apne baare mai randheer se pooch rahi thi.. Hume milna hai unse sach mai badi chuparustum hai woh
Amrit and Randheer went all awe on the kid and hearing such compliments amrit felt a little embarrassed
Va- ji jarur milwaenge hum aap sab ko unse par abhi aage ki kahaani suniye......toh ji Amrit ne jab apni paayal Randheer se maangi toh unhone ek paayal toh bade hi aaram se de di ji use par jo paayal use pehle mili thi woh na de paaya aur bade hi pyaar aur haq se kaha ke "mimicking randheer" Ek paayal toh mere paas hi rehti hai na humesha....."randheer got flustered at this" "Eyeing amrit with teasing eyes vashma said" Humari pyaar mai ghum Amrit aur kuch keh na paayi aur apni ek paayal liye waha se chali gayi aur "dreamily" ji iss pal ka aisa asar hua unki jindagi mai ki ji aaj tak amrit ki ek paayal randheer ke paas rehti hai...."both randheer and amrit looked at the paayals in their respective hands lovingly....and seeing them looking at their paayals vashma smiled brightly and continued" Yeh payal kehne ko toh bas ek sajne ka saaman hai par inke prem kahaani mai yeh randheer ka saathi bhi hai toh humdard bhi aur amrit...."chuckling" amrit ke liye toh yeh randheer se judi sabse pyaari yaadon mai se ek hai.... Aapko pata hai uss din ke baad se amrit ne keval apne woh ek hi paayal pehne aur randheer humesha uski dusri paayal apne jeb mai liye ghumte the
Amdheer smiled brightly at this
Va- Randheer ki soch.. Uske aadhunik vichaar aur ladkiyon ke liye izzat ne amrit ke dil mai toh pehle hi apni jagah bana li thi par jab hamaare randheer saahab ne bina kisi laalach ke amrit ki madad ki uska saath diya..uska hausla badhaaya..... Uske liye uske khud ke bauji ke khilaaf gaye toh amrit ke nazaron mai unki izzat aur bhi zyada badh gayi
With moist eyes amrit nodded in yes
Audience- o ji hume bhi toh bataaiye zaraa aise do chaar kisse
Va- ji zarur toh hua yun ke mai aur amrit mere ghar pe aap sab ki tarah hi nakli raanjhan ki kahaani sunne baithe the...
"Eyeing randheer with teasing eyes" Amrit toh itna gussa huyi hui thi na ki kya hi batau uska bas na chala warna woh radio ke andar ghus ke uss nakli raanjhan ko maar daalti "randheer made a scared face seeing which a giggle left vashma's lips" Hum sunn hi rahe the ki "in a dramatic tone" tayaji tilmilaate huye waha aa gaye.... "In a little scared voice" uss din ko yaad karti hu na toh aaj bhi rongte khade ho jaate hai ji
Audience- par woh gussa kyu huye
Va- o ji maine bataaya tha na ki tayaji ko raanjhan ki kahaaniyan bilkul pasand nhi hai aur yeh baat ki unki khud ki beti woh kahaaniyan sun rahi hai unhe bardaasht nahi hui "eyeing amrit in an amusing tone" haalaki woh alag baat hai ki unki khud ki beti hi woh raanjhan thi "in her original tone" par iss baat se woh bohot gussa ho gaye the yaha tak ki amrit par pehli baar haath bhi utha dete agar mere abba jaan ne na roka hota toh... "In a sad tone" Bechaari bohot darr gayi thi...tayaji ne toh yeh tak bhi bol diya ki woh amrit se na baat karenge aur na uske haath se kuch lenge hi par usi samay randheer aa gaye aur amrit ka paksh lete huye bauji ko bohot samjhaaya....."eyeing randheer with appreciating eyes" woh pehli baar tha ki humne kisi ko tayaji ke saamne zubaan kholte huye dekha tha.... Uss din ek chiz toh hum sab ko acche se pata chal gayi thi ji "eyeing randheer with teasing eyes" ki tayaji ko randheer ki soch bilkul nahi pasand aur inki jaldi jamne wali nahi....
Audience- "in a curious tone" toh kya randheer mana paaye amrit ke bauji ko
Va- ji koshish toh puri ki thi unhone par tayaji ne badi hi vinamrata se haath jode unhe ek mehmaan ke daayre tak rehne ke liye keh diya aur phir ji iske aage woh kuch keh na paaye...."few tears rolled down from her eyes as those scenes flashed infront of her eyes....she can forget the insensitive behavior of her bauji towards her but till date she's unable to forget the manner in which her bauji spoke with her randheer while here randheer's eyes also got moist as those painful tear stricken eyes of his beloved flashed infront of his eyes"Bechaari amrit toh bohot hi buri tarah toot gayi thi yaha tak ki agle din ho rahe shivaratri ki puja mai bhi tayaji usse rookhe rookhe hi rahe
Audience- "sympathetically" haaye ram bechaari bacchi....toh kya woh aise hi dukhi rahi shivratri jaise mahaparv pe bhi
Va- "enthusiastically" ji humare randheer ke rehte unki amrit dukhi reh sakti hai kya bhalaa....woh tayaji ko toh nahi samjha sakte the par unhone amrit ko bohot hi acchi tarah ehsaas karaaya ki humaare dil ki baat zubaan par laana galat nahi hai aur yeh bhi samjhaaya ke agar woh apne dil ki baat apno se nahi kahegi toh kisse kahegi....ji bade hi samajhdaari aur pyaar se use tayaji se baat karne ke liye raaji kar liya tha unhone
Amdheer remembered that beautiful mandir moment.... How easily randheer made her understand her own value and gave her the desired confidence
The kid amid audience- toh kya woh maan gaye
Va- maante kaise nahi "lovingly" humaari amrit ke laad ke saamne toh bhagwaan bhi maan jaaye yeh toh phir bhi uske bauji the... Apne banaaye gaye bhog aur baaton ka usne aisa jaadu chalaaya tayaji par ki naa toh woh sirf maane hi balki waada bhi kiya usse ki aage se kabhi uspe gussa nahi karenge aur aapko pata hai iss pure waqt randheer kya kar rahe the
Audience- "in a thrilled tone" Kya
Va- "looking at randheer with teasing eyes" woh piche khade hokar humari amrit ki hausla afzaayi kar rahe the .... "In an appreciative tone" Unke diye jaa rhe hausle ki wajah se hi toh woh bol paayi warna toh shaayad uske muh se bol hi na nikalte
Amrit smiled brightly as that scene flashed in front of her eyes where randheer, hiding behind the gates, was encouraging her and was telling her to smile.... That was the first time someone made her feel that her smile is precious to someone.... That she's so important to someone... Her heart fluttured with those beautiful raw emotions while here randheer also got lost in those moments where for the very first time he saw a girl with such commendable guts and values.... Randheer that time got shocked seeing her handling her father's anger with such ease...with just her beautiful and loving words...the reality is he fell head over heels in love with her at that instance only.....that was for the first time he was desperate to see someone's smile
Audience- "in an appreciating tone" Arre waah kamaal ka munda hai yeh randheer toh jitna guni utna hi accha aur samajhdaar
Va- ji baat toh bilkul sahi hai aur randheer ki inhi baaton ki wajah se
Amrit ka randheer ke liye khichaav badh hi raha tha ki "eyeing randheer with accusing eyes" randheer ki ek galti ne amrit ka unpar se bharosa hi utha diya
Randheer felt guilty
Audience- "curiously" konsi galti
Va- ji jhootha raanjhan bankar radio mai raanjhan ki kahaaniyaan sunane ki galti
Audience- "in a shocked tone" haii woh jhutha raanjhan randheer tha... Humne toh kabhi sapne mai bhi nahi socheya tha
Randheer lowered his head feeling guilty for playing with so many emotions..... seeing her guilt ridden face vashma felt bad and immediately said
Va- ji tha toh par usne aisa kisi ki bhaavnaao ko thesh pohochaane ke liye nahi kiya tha balki raanjhan ka pata lagane ke liye kiya tha taaki woh raanjhan ko aap sab ke saamne laa sake aur aap sab ke andar uski himmat bhar sake
A lady in audience- "heaving a sigh of relief" tab thik hai warna toh mainu lageya tha woh koi jhutha farebi hai

Va- oji bilkul aisa hi lageya tha humari amrit nu bhi jab woh khud radio station pohochi nakli ranjhan da pata lagaane vaaste......Dil toot gaya tha bechaari ka Randheer ko kahaani sunaate dekh..... Apni aankhon par vishwas nhi ho raha tha ji use toh aur toote dil ke saath woh radio station se nikal padi bina iss baat pe dhyaan diye ki baahar dange chid chuke hai aur woh bhi bohot hi bhayanak wale....jab use iss baat ka hosh aaya tab tak bohot der ho chuki thi aur uss par ek aadmi ki nazar pad chuki thi ....woh jaise taise waha se bhaag kar ek jagah chupp gayi aur waha radio station mai randheer ko kismat se uski bracelet mil gayi.... Bina soche samjhe woh dango ke beech nikal pade ek pal ke liye bhi apni jaan ki parwaah nahi ki unhone....."shiver ran down amrit's body as those dreadful and scary moments flashed infront of her eyes while randheer was burning in guilt as his amrit had to suffer so much because of him" Amrit jo ki chupi hui thi usne ek buddhi aurat ki jaan bachaayi par woh dono hi dangaaiyo ke haath lag gaye unme se ek dangaai toh amrit ko maarne hi wala tha ki randheer aa pohoche aur apni amrit ko bachaa liya.."randheer trembled with fear as that dreadful scene flashed infront of his eyes....if he would've been late by a minute more.......he would've lost his love for forever....his eyes filled with tears while amrit felt the same as she experienced death that time....if not for randheer she would've died a barbarous death" .. Uss buddhi aurat aur unke pati ne inn dono ko humesha saath rehne ka aashirvaad diya aur woh waha se chale gaye shaayad unhi ka aashirvaad hai ki woh kabhi alag nahi huye... Door hokar bhi humesha saath rahe woh ek dusre ke dil mai
Amdheer smiled amidst tears listening the last lines
Audience- Toh kya bach nikle woh dono
Va- ji unhe waha kuch dangaaiyon ne dekh toh liya tha aur unhe maarne ki bohot koshishen bhi ki thi par woh dono wahaan se bhaag nikle aur sahi salaamat ghar pohoch gaye
Amdheer got lost in that moment when hands in hands they escaped death.... Goosebumps arose in their bodies as they remembered their closenesss when randheer rolled her body to a safe distance from fire.... That was the first time they were so close to each other....now also they can feel each other's breathe on their faces.... They came back to their senses hearing the kid's curious words
The kid amid audience- "in a curious tone" amrit ne baat ki Randheer se woh toh bohot gussa thi na unse
Amdheer smiled sheepishly on this
Va- ji nahi ki bilkul nahi ki bas shukriya kaha aur jab Randheer saahab ne bracelet lautaate waqt amrit ke radio station jaane ki wajah puchi toh amrit bohot gussa ho gayi aur kaha ki woh kabhi unki shakal dobara nahi dekhna chahti aur na unse baat karna chahti hai... Apni safaayi pesh karne ka ek mauka tak na diya amrit ne Randheer ko.
Amdheer smiled brightly reminiscing their first ever fight.... Randheer remembered her angry red nose face and went all awe on her...... Although that time those moments were not so happy for them but now it's added to their golden memories which will always bring smile on their faces..... Woh kehte hai na ajeeb aur aise hi ladai ke kisse hi yaadon ki potli khulte waqt sabse pehle yaad aate hai
Audience- "curiously" kitne dino tak gussa rahi amrit randheer se
Va- "she exclaimed loudly" kitne din?? "In a cheerful tone" Ji raat tak hi sulah ho gayi thi unke beech toh aur "in a hush tone....whispering like she's unravelling a big secret" usi raat randheer ko yeh bhi pata chal gaya ki raanjhan ek ladka nahi balki ek ladki hai... "Looking at randheer with admiring and proud eyes" unhone badi hi sachaayi se apni safaayi amrit ke saamne pesh ki "enthusiastically" aur bass kya tha ji amrit ka saara gussa utar gaya aur agle din amrit ne randheer ko waada kiya ki woh use raanjhan se milwaegi.....dono hi bade khush ho gaye the "in a sad tone" par yeh khushi bhi amrit se chin li gayi ji kyuki usi din  tayaji ne uss par apna bharosa dikhate huye kaha ki meri beti kabhi bhi mere faisle ke upar nahi jaegi use pata hai ki uske bauji aur uske bujurgo ki izzat judi huyi hai iss rishte se "Amdheer got sad hearing this and painful tears made their way in those beautiful eyes" Amrit ne ussi samay faisla kar liya ki woh randheer se ab nahi milegi....uski saari yaadein mita degi aur kabhi apne kalam ko haath nahi lagaayegi aur aisa karte huye usne randheer ki di gyi saari chitthiyaan unke mez pe rakh di taaki woh aaye aur unhe padh le aur ji saath mai ek aisi chithi bhi rakhi jisme usne likha tha ki ab raanjhan kabhi kalam nhi uthaaegi
Painful tears started falling from amrit's eyes as she reminisced those days when she had to choose between her love and her bauji... Vashma felt bad seeing her tear stricken and gestured her in a no.... Amrit smiled and wiped those tears... Vashma smiled a little and continued
Va- Phir shuru hui ji dil aur dimaag ki ek badi jung dimaag jaanta tha ki yeh sab galat hai par dil ji kaha maanta hai aur phir inke dil toh ek dusre ke liye hi dhadkaa karte the "randheer and amrit smiled at this"... Yaha tak ki kiranbaala ne randheer ko yeh tak saabit kar diya ki woh hi raanjhan hai par yeh jaan kar bhi randheer amrit ko apne mann se na nikal paaya aur waha amrit bas yahi kashmakash mai thi ki randheer ko apne dil se kaise nikaale kyuki pal pal woh sirf uske pyaar mai aur padti jaa rhi thi...."slight tears started flowing from her beautiful eyes as she reminisced those dreadful moments where loving him felt like a crime to her while the same was the condition with randheer"...... Usne toh faisla kar liya tha ki woh randheer se durr rahegi par ji kismat pe kiska jor chalta hai.... Amrit jitna usse durr jaati kaaynaat... Parivaar use randheer ke aur paas le aate.... Baar baar aisi parishthitiyan aati ki amrit ko randheer ke paas jaana hi padta... Aur agar woh na jaati toh randheer aa jaata
"Amrit and randheer got lost in those painful but beautiful memories"
Aakhir unn dono ne apne pyaar ko bhul jaane ka faisla kar liya ek ne taki uske bauji ki shaan ko thes na pohoche toh dusre ne taake uske pyaar ko uske aur apne bauji mai se kisiko chunna na pade
Par ji inhe jodne wali sabse badi kadi ya yun kahu ki inn dono ki pehchaan ne inhe kabhi alag na hone diya
Amdheer's eyes sparkled as they understood what was coming... The most beautiful phase of their life
Audience- "curiously" ajji aisi bhi kya chiz thi hume bhi toh bataiye
The kid amid audience- "guessing" Kahi kalam toh nhi??
Amdheer and vashma went all awe on the child's brilliance and appreciating him vashma said
Va- ji bilkul sahi pakda ji aapne woh kalam hi thi
Audience- "in a confused tone" Par kalam kaise
V- ajii yeh kalam hi toh thi jisse yeh dono jude huye the humesha se.... Aakhir editor aur writer ki jodi hai bhai
Amdheer smiled blissfully hearing her
Audience- "confused" Par mainu yeh samajh nahi aaya ki kiranbala ne khudko raanjhan kaise saabit kar liya
V- "in an apologizing tone" ohoo hoo mai toh yeh bataana bhul hi gayi ji mainu maaf kardo
Audience- koi nhi ji...."excitedly" abb tussi chetti chetti aage ki kahani sunao

Vashma smiled seeing their excitement and continued

Guys the pre partition period of amdheer is divided in two parts.... I'll surely upload the next part by tomorrow or the day after it

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