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Giving a warm smile to duggu he sat near him.... With love and affection he started
R- Hello beta mai shrigarh ka raja prem partap singh hu
Before randheer could say anything duggu shot a question on him which shook him to the core ....with scrutinizing gaze and in a grave tone he asked
Du- Aap meri mumma ko kaise jaante ho
Randheer got in a fix and to handle the situation tried to say something
R- Mai
Seeing his expression duggu came to know that he's going to lie... Thus interrupting him in between....he in a threatening tone said
Du- Jhooth nhi bolna "in an accusatory tone" maine dekha tha kaise aap meri mumma ko ghurr rahe the...... "In a demanding tone" Abb jldi jldi bolo kon ho aap aur meri mumma ko kaise jaante ho
Randheer was too shock to say anything... He didn't knew what to answer or how to deal with this but no matter what he tried but Before he could say anything.. Uday came inside the room....saying
U- "in an assuring tone" Oji Mai batata hu aapnu
Both randheer and duggu got shocked listening his voice.... Duggu was the first one to come out of the shock.... Feeling embarrassed as his idol listened his furious tone and also tensed on what he'll think of him... He tried to sit upright and correct his posture.....embarrassed and scared
K- "in an embarrassed tone" Woh kaptaan saahab Mai mai
Sensing his awkwardness uday smiled a little and immediately placing his hands on his back stopped  him from sitting upright in an uncomfortable position... He in an assuring and loving tone said
U- Oji aaraam se baitho aap.....aur mere saamne yun hichkichaane di koi lod nahi hai"taking his hands in his....in an excited tone" aakhir abb aap humare parivaar ka hissa jo banne wale ho "in a cheerful tone" abb toh ji saath hi rehna hai hum sab ne
Duggu got shocked hearing him and confused he asked
D- Matlab
Uday smiled and in a loving tone said
U- Oji matlab yeh ki abb aap apni mumma ke saath humare ghar pe hi rahoge humaare saath "gesturing  towards randheer with eyes" Aakhir aapki mumma ke hone wale pati  hai yeh
Duggu got shocked hearing him....he wasn't understanding anything...it was getting difficult for him to digest this news and flabbergasted he exclaimed or should i say interrogated
Du- Meri mumma ke
Randheer who was afraid like amrit on how he'll react after knowing the truth tried to calm him down.... He could observe the tension on his face.... In a pursuit to share the entire matter with him... To make him understand his point of view....he in a soothing and calm tone started
R- Ji ... "Sitting beside him ....looking at him with honest and longing eyes....in a calm tone" Aur mai aapki mumma ko aaj se nahi balki bohot pehle se jaanta hu...."in a dreamy tone" bohot pyaar karta hu mai aapki mumma se
Duggu's heart got overwhelmed hearing his pure and honest confession...he even got ready to believe him but his mind said otherwise.... Confused...in a fraction of seconds he exclaimed a little furiously and suspiciously
Du- Mai kaise maan lu aapki baat
Feeling that duggu was getting suspicious of randheer .... On which perspective he was right as how can he trust a stranger with the only relation he has.....uday  heaving a deep breathe... in a loving yet determined and honest tone said
U- Meri baat toh maanoge na aakhir yeh uday kishore sahani apni behen ke saath kuch galat thodi na hone dega
Duggu got heavily shocked hearing this new information and immediately turned towards him...the news shook him to the core....his mother being the sister of his idol was something he can't digest that easily.......in a shocked tone he exclaimed
Du- Behen
Nodding his head in a big yes he lovingly said
U- Ji behen "with longing in his voice" aapki mumma meri choti behen hai....."in a grave tone with tears flowing from his eyes while randheer also sat numb in his place sensing what's coming" kuch waqt pehele ek haadsa hoya si ode saath aur usme "he wasn't able to continue more and suppressing a sob he continued but after skipping the details" ... Humne toh ji saari ummeedein hi chod di thi uske waapas aane ki...."gesturing towards randheer with his hands...looking at him with his eyes shining with proud and respect...in a proud tone" par yeh inhone kadee bhi himmat nhi chodi.... Humesha harr koshish ki use dhundhne ki "with the pain he's feeling seeing his best friend in pain..tears flowing from his eyes....in a painful yet proud tone" Yaha tak ki abhi uski nafrat tak bhi chupchaap jhel rahe hai aur bhi aage pata nahi kya kya jhel jaaenge ode vaste

Seeing tears in uday's eyes.... Duggu felt bad...he wanted to wipe them off then and there but the condition was all but messed up for him... although a small child... He could easily perceive the proudness in uday's eyes and tone for randheer... He started trusting randheer a little more but still it was difficult for his tiny mind to digest such news...the fact that his mumma hates the man who loves her so much made him hell confused.... Thousands of questions were roaming around his mind... Trying to get some answers he asked
Du- Par mumma inse nafrat kyu karti hai aur aapne mumma ko bataaya kyu nahi yeh sab"just then an idea clicked in his mind...his face shining with happiness...in an excited tone" mai ek kaam karta hu mai hi abhi mumma ko sab sach bata deta hu .... "Trying to get our of the bed...he exclaimed happilly" Woh toh bohot khush ho jaaengi... Mumma toh kabse intezaar kar rhi thi kisi apne se milne ka
Udheer got shocked listening to him...  A scared Randheer immediately stopped him saying
R- "in a pleading tone" Nhi plss aap aisa mt karna.
Du- "in a shocked yet stubborn tone" Par kyu
Amrit's coldness towards him.the fear of losing his love.. Her condition... The hate with which she speaks to him and most importantly his guilt... The guilt he's carrying from past and the guilt with which he's dealing in present......the weight of this guilt became so heavy inside him that he wasn't able to handle such a small stubborn request of a kid... His feelings dumped deep down in his heart exploded without his consent and the kid in front of him became it's target... In a  furious tone.... Enough to scare duggu
Kyuki yeh jaruri hai....meri amrit ke liye jaruri hai... Aapko kya lagta hai mera mann nhi hota unhe sab kuch bata dene ka...."with tears flowing from his eyes " Unke muh se ek baar apna naam sunne ka... Arre taras gye hai mere kaan unke muh se randheer sunne ko......."gesturing towards his heart painfully and cryingly" meri amrit mere Itne paas hai par phir bhi....."in a frustrated tone" phir bhi na mai unse kuch keh paata hu aur naahi unke muh se apne liye do meethe bol hi sunn paata hu....."crying furiously " Meri woh amrit jo mujhse beintehaa mohabbat karti thi aaj mujhse nafrat karti hai...."sitting on the stool with a thud...in a broken crying tone" Shaayad aage kabhi mujhse pyaar kare hi na woh.... Shayad mai unka pyaar humesha ke liye kho du
After speaking all these... He kind of felt light... But soon he remembered how badly he treated the kid in front of him.... feeling extreme guilty for his behaviour....He lowered his head in shame... He didn't knew how to face the kid while uday who was too shocked to see his furious emotional breakout was sitting numb there.... He could feel his pain.... He could easily comprehend the level of pain he has stored in his heart... He felt a little relief seeing him getting vocal about his feelings but then realising that it was a kid in front of whom he exploded... He felt scared.. Bad and guilty

Although scared at first listening his tone.... Duggu felt his pain with passing seconds... He sensed honesty in his voice.... He could feel his love for his mumma..... finally he believed in him..... Suddenly he in a demanding tone asked
Du- "looking expectantly at randheer" Kya Meri mumma ko humesha khush rakhenge aap??
Randheer got shocked listening him at first... He was not expecting this at all.... But then also chuckling a little and looking in his small innocent eyes with love and honesty and with all the love he has for his amrit he said
R- O ji unki khushi ke liye toh mai sau baar apni zindagi qurbaan kar du.... "In a dreamy tone" Unke chehre ki hasi dekhne ke liye hi toh mai jeeta hu...."looking at him with determined eyes...in a determined tone" Mai waada karta hu..... Ek baar amrit thik ho jaaye...."in a dreamy yet loving tone" Mai unke chehre par dard ki ek lakeer tak nhi aane dunga.....iss duniya ki saari khushiyaan unke kadmon mai laake rakh dunga mai
His words did it's magic on both uday and duggu. . . They both got enchanted with his true love and words.... Duggu was feeling contented and before he could control himself a question from the set of his questions, he made for him, left his mouth
D- "with a light smile playing on his lips...in an enchanted tone he asked" Unka khyaal rakhoge na

R- "in a dreamy yet determined and loving tone" Apni aakhiri saans tak. ...apni aakhiri saans tak mai unka khyaal rakhunga..."slight tears flew from his eyes as he remembered her condition...but then also in a determined tone he said" ha bhale hi filhaal woh mujhe kaise bhi karna pade par rakhunga jarur.... "In such a determined tone...it felt like he's promising his own self" Unke sehat pe koi aanch nahi aane dunga mai kabhi bhi.... Chahe phir kuch bhi ho jaaye
Duggu was enjoying his words now .....he again aksed this time but just to listen his words and also to get more assurance
Unki izzat karenge na aap
Randheer chuckled listening to his question and smilingly he answered in a dreamy tone with respect and proud for her evident in his eyes
R- Ji woh sirf mera pyaar nahi mera rab hai..... Mai sirf unhe izzat nhi dunga balki Mai unhe pujunga bilkul waise jaise ek bhakt apne bhagwaan ko pujta hai..... "In an enchanted tone...his eyes sparkling with love and respect" mai toh waise bhi humesha se unke lekhon ka mureed raha hu.... Unke saahas ka kaayal raha hu aur "giving a bright smile" unki acchai aur maasumiyat pe fida bhalaa mai unki izzat na karu aisa ho sakta hai kya...... "Just then he remembered how badly he disrespected her....how he taunted her almost all the time....how he doubted her....feeling ashamed and guilty ...he lowered his head and in a guilty tone said" Haa par kuch ghalat fehmiyo mai pad ke mai aisa nhi kar paaya......pata nahi kaise ek bohot hi bura aadmi ban gaya tha mai.... Apni amrit ke dard ko mahsus na kar paaya mai...." Amrit's painful stare danced in front of his eyes ...in a painful tone he continued" unki dard se cheekti aankhein na padh paaya mai...
"Chuckling painfully" Jinko iss duniya ki saari khushiyaan dena chahta tha unhe hi itne saare dukh de diye maine..."he faced them and they got shocked seeing his tearful face...they felt so pity and compassionate towards him....taking duggu's hands in his.....looking at his eyes intently....he in a determined tone said or should I say promised" Par mai waada karta hu yeh galti dobara kabhi nahi dohraunga.... Kabhi nhi
Duggu got anxious to know more about them.... He wanted to know the henious crime he did for which he's remorsing so much...in an eager tone he asked
Du- Aisa kya kiya tha aapne
Randheer was expecting this question.... In this short duration only.... He observed that he's a really curious child and was mature than his age.... He had the ability to understand the depth of the situation.. He decided to tell him the truth  ... Taking his hands in his... Looking deep into his eyes with pure honesty and love for his love and their relation... He in a guilty tone started
R- Aapki mumma ko galat samajh baitha tha mai.... Unki qurbaani ko nahi samajh paaya ...."tightening his hold on his hands" Par beta mera yakeen maano mai chah ke bhi kabhi unse nafrat nhi kar paaya......."with silent tears flowing from his eyes....in an honest yet guilty tone" apni galti par bohot sharminda hu mai.....Harr rojj..harr pall unse dil hi dil mai apne kiye ke liye maafi maangta hu....aaj agar amrit thik hoti toh woh harr sajaa bhugatne ko taiyaar rehta mai jo woh mujhe dena chaahti...."not able to control himself more...he lowered his head and kept it on his small hands....in a sobbing tone" . Mai bohot sharminda hu apne kiye pe par Mai unke bina nahi reh sakta....mujhe unki saari nafrat bardaasht hai par "crying like a child...inconsolably" woh meri aankhon se durr jaaye yeh mujhe abb bardaasht nahi hoga... Kabhi nahi hoga
Seeing such a big man crying like child in front of him and feeling their love...in utter astonishment Only one sentence escaped his lips
Du- "in an enchanted tone" Aap itna pyaar karte hai meri mumma se
Before randheer could answer him.... Vashma started giving the answers..... The two of them got shocked and realised that they got too busy in themselves to notice her presence.... She was standing beside uday silently since duggu started questioning randheer and they got busy in themselves
V- "in a loving tone" Ji......vadda pyaar karte hai yeh aapki mumma se...."sitting beside duggu....looking at randheer with proud eyes" Aapki mumma ke liye toh ji apna sabb kuch pehle hi qurbaan kar diya inhone..... Taayaji ki daant.. Beizaattiyon se lekar unka bete banne tak sabb kuch saha hai inhone....
"Taking duggu's hands in hers ...in a loving tone to duggu which felt more like taunting randheer as he again blamed himself for every mishappenings" Beta yeh jo keh rahe hai na ki inse bohot bada gunaah hua hai toh beta inme se koi bhi gunaah "giving randheer a strong glare....seeing which randheer got afraid and averted his eyes" inhone jaan bujh kar nhi kiya. . .."she again looked at duggu and in a loving and calm tone tried to give some answers to his unsaid questions as well as to make him understand easily" Paristhitiya hi kuch aisi ban gayi thi ki aapki mumma khud chahti thi ki randheer usse nafrat kare.... "thinking about her cute antics she chuckled smilingly" Aur mujhe apni pakki saheli par pura bharosa hai usne bohot acche se apne iss mansube mai kaam kiya hoga
Uday and randheer smiled brightly hearing her while Duggu again got shocked hearing this new piece of information, of vashma being his mumma's pakki saheli... Shocked he asked
Du- Pakki saheli??
The three of them smiled listening to his shocked tone and an excited vashma introduced herself
V- "in a cheerful tone...with her eyes glittering like stars" Ji haa pakki saheli mai aapki mumma ki sabse pakki saheli hu.... Jaan hu mai uski aur woh meri.... Uski aankhein padh leti hu mai... "In a dramatic tone evoking curiosity in him" Aur aapko pata hai aapke liye uski aankhon mai kya dekha hai maine
Du- "in a curious tone" Kya
V- "pulling his cheeks lightly and lovingly making him smile" ...in a cheerful and loving tone" Dher saara bohot saara pyaar.... "caressing his hairs...in a longing and loving tone" Saccha pyaar jo ek maa apne bacche se karti hai... "In a loving tone...with maternal affection...her eyes carrying all the love she's feeling for the kid sitting in front of her" Duggu beta hum kabhi mile toh nahi hai pehle parr aap abhi se hi humare parivaar ka humare dilon ka ek atoot hissa ban chuke ho.... Hum aapse bohot pyaar karte hai
Duggu felt overwhelmed listening to her and gave her his best smile... Uday, who wanted to shower world's whole happiness and love on him said
U- "in a loving tone...with paternal affection" Ji bohot pyaar karte hai hum aapse... "In an excited yet loving tone" Abb aap humare iss chote se parivaar ke sehzaade ho... Jinpe hum iss duniya ki saari khushiyaan nyochaavar karna chahte hai
Listening such loving words from his idol duggu couldn't just think anything other than to hug him tightly.... He was feeling too emotional after getting so much love from the people who were stranger for him yesterday and to have your idol as a family was a true blessing for him... They all smiled knowing how he must've felt..... Uday tightened his hold on him enough not to hurt him.... He gave him his own time to adjust to everything..to adapt such life changing truths....... After feeling his warmth for sometime duggu left him.... Uday gave him a big bright smile which he reciprocated with equal fervor...... In silence their relationship grew stronger... Sitting comfortably he looked towards randheer, who was standing in front of the window with a gloomy face, and called him
D- "in a demanding tone" Aap idhar aaiye
Randheer who wasn't expecting this at all didn't believed it at first and thought to clarify before advancing
R- Mai
Duggu looked at him with disbelief
D- "in an impatient tone" Haa aap....."gesturing him to come and sit beside him by his hands" abhi jaldi idhar aaiye
Randheer became perplexed thinking why he'll call him.... He thought that duggu doesn't like him much. . . Going towards him he settled beside him and said
R-"in a perplexed tone" Ji.... Kahiye
The room got filled with an eerie awkward pindrop silence.....Breaking it duggu suddenly..... In a complaining yet cautioning tone said
Du- Meri mumma bohot rotulu hai.... Aur naa apna khyaal rakhna bilkul nhi jaanti...."in a doubtful tone " aap unhe sambhaal toh paaenge na acche se
Without thinking any further... Randheer defended his love by saying
R- "in a defensive tone" Ji woh bilkul rotulu toh nhi hai.... "In a proud and dreamy tone" Balki unse zyada bahaadur maine aaj tak kisi ko nahi paaya hai
The three of them gave a smirk to him and not letting the chance slip from her hands vashma said
V- "in a whimsical yet cautioning tone" Duggu beta ek baat yaad rakhna inke saamne kabhi bhi inki amrit ke liye galat alfaaz na nikaalna.... "In a whimsical tone" Inki na ek aadat hai... Humesha apni amrit ki taareef karne ki
They looked at each other with a mischievous glint in their eyes and excited. ..Duggu in a shushed tone exclaimed... Audible only to vashma
Du- Tab toh hum humesha hi mumma ki complaint inhe hi karenge
They hified at this.... Vashma felt very elated hearing him.... She felt like she's seeing her own self in him... An excited vashma cheerfully exclaimed
V- Waah yeh hui na mere jaisi baat.... "In a mischievous shushed tone...audible only to duggu while randheer and uday tried hard to eavesdrop" Hum na milke inn dono ko chedenge
They giggled at this and feeling darkness near them .....they looked beside each other for the source of it and got annoyed seeing both uday and randheer trying hard to eavesdrop with their ears almost probing inside them.... Not hearing their shushed voices anymore randheer and uday tried to look at each other and their eyes went wide seeing vashma and duggu's "you're caught" Face.... Scared they immediately looked here and there... An Annoyed vashma looked at them with a murderous stare and in an sarcastic interrogative tone asked
Va- kya kar rahe the aap dono abhi
Flabbergasted uday and randheer looked at each other with both of them gesturing each other to handle the matter at hand.... They were having a silent argument as who'll say first and they were looking really cute doing so.... Vashma and duggu started laughing seeing their cute yet funny banter....uday and randheer made a bad face hearing them but eventually joined them and the whole room got filled with innocent laughter.  ... The laughter which bought them more closer the laughter which joined duggu to the whole family this time with whole heart.... The laughter they won't forget in this lifetime........ After sometime when they got out of their laughing spree... Randheer sarcastically remarked them... In a dramatic tone like how much they've hurt him
R-Abhi se team banaake baith gaye tum dono..
Uday in a cribbing yet pleading tone tried to make a deal with vashma
U- Oye vashma sunna randheer ko toh pehle hi apni team mai rakh rakhaa hai ise toh chod de mere vaaste
Vashma got annoyed at this and in a furious annoyed tone said
V- Oye chup kar oye...mai kisiko nahi chodne wali "in a proud tone" yaha pe harr koi mere team mai hai samjha
Uday got furious listening to this and in a furious challenging tone said
U- Harr koi nhi.... Meri behen toh bilkul bhi nhi "in a proud and challenging tone" woh toh meri team mai hi rahegi aur haa jinni teamei banaani hai na bana le kyuki jeetenge toh hum bhai behen hi
Vashma gave him a "bada aaya hero banne" wala look and retorted back saying
V- "in a dramatic yet sarcastic tone" Accha ji....lagta hai ki tu bhul gaya hai "in a proud and sarcastic yet dramatic tone" teri behen yaani ki meri pakki saheli tujhse zyada mujhse pyaar karti hai aur haa woh humesha mere "giving more emphasis on her name" vashma uday kishore sahani ke team mai hi rahegi samjhaa na..."in a mocking tone" Naalaayak kahi ka
They continued their fights while randheer and duggu looked at the fighting couple with disinterested and annoyed look. ... A bored duggu patted randheer's shirt.... He gestured him to tell the matter through his eyes but duggu gestured him to come closer to him through his hands... Randheer immediately followed the orders and came really close to him such that they can easily talk in whispers

D- "in a whispering tone....audible only to randheer....he interrogated cutely saying " Kya yeh dono humesha aise hi ladte rehte hai
Randheer smiled hearing his question and nodded in an affirmative saying
R- Haa humesha se hi
Duggu also smiled seeing the unique couple..... Although feeling annoyed they can't stop falling for their cuteness.... They were looking like super cute bacchaas fighting like two sworn enemies for a chocolate.... Both ready to attack each other at any moment. ... Verbalising his emotions... Duggu in an enchanted tone said
D- Par kitne pyaare lag rahe hai na
Reciprocating his enchanted tone and with the love he has for the couple he said
R- Haa woh toh hai
Duggu looked at him with a smile and a question popped in his mind.... In a mischievous and interrogating tone he asked
D- Accha aap bhi mumma ke saath aise hi ladte ho kya
Randheer got shocked listening this at first but then handling himself he continued
R- "in a stuttering tone" mai ji..ji mai .... "Taking a heavy breath to get out of shock ....in a dreamy tone...with a large smile playing on his lips" Pehle toh hum bilkul nahi ladte the..."just then her furious face played in his mind...correcting himself inmediately he said" matlab ladte the "in a relieved tone" par aise nhi "in a dreamy yet proud tone" bohot hi kam aisi ladaaiyaan hui hai humaari........"with a big pause" Parrr
Duggu who was listening to his every word with deep interest and smile got curious listening the word parr... He wanted to know more after that parr.... In an anxious tone he questioned
D- Parr Kya
Giving him a charming grin as he remembered their recent banters.... In a dramatic teasing tone as he knew that this mumma's boy will get annoyed with him as soon as he'll listen to her mumma's complaints
R- "in a complaining dramatic tone" parr aajkal aapki mumma na ladaai ke mode mai hi rehti hai "in a helpless and dramatic tone" aur naa chahte huye bhi mujhe ladaayi karni hi padti hai
Listening his complaints duggu gave him a suspicious look and in an interrogating tone asked
D- Naa chahte huye bhi sachhi... Aapko unse ladaai karna nhi pasand kya
He looked so cute and adorable while saying this that randheer wasn't able to control his feelings and pulling his cheeks lightly he got close to him and in a shushed tone audible only to him said
R- "in a tone like randheer is sharing a big secret with his best friend....with his eyes shining with mischievousness" Ji sach kahu na toh unka woh gusse se laal chehra mujhe pasand toh bohot hai aur "in a little embarrassed yet dramatic tone"  isiliye mai Bhi unhe pareshaan karne mai koi kami nahi chodd paata  hu...
Randheer expected an angry glare from him but what he heard was totally unexpected to him as duggu giving him a toothy grin answered
D- "in a shushed mischievous tone" Mujhe bhi

They looked at each other and cracked into laughters.... Their laugh attracted the attention of the couple at war.... They looked at them with a "are you allright" Wala look and in an interrogating yet anxious tone asked
U- oye ki ho gya tum dono nu.... Aise kyu hans rahe ho... "Thinking about the conversations he had with vashma while they were fighting" Humne toh koi hansne wali baat na kahi
Randheer immediately answered him in a matter of fact yet jovial tone
R- Lekin humne toh ek dusre se kahi na
Uday got shocked listening to him and in a disbelieving yet accusing tone said
U- Matlab aap dono ka dhyaan humaari ladaai mai nahi tha... Aap dono apne mai hi gappe shappe maar rahe the... "In a sad hurt tone" aur woh bhi Humaare bina
Seeing uday's melodrama.... Vashma became annoyed and making him face herself with a sudden jerk
V- "in a furious annoyed tone" Oye gappe shappe nhi maarenge toh kya teri bakwaas sunke apna dimaag kharaab karenge... Jab dekho tab ladaayi karne baith jaata hai mere naal.
Uday made a haww face and countering her question back said
U- "in a defensive yet furious tone" Oye bol toh tu aise rahi hai jaise saari ladaaiyaan mai hi shuru karta hu
V- "in an accusing tone" Abhi dekh kisne shuru ki
In a cribbing yet dramatic tone as vashma wasn't giving him any chance to defend himself
U- Oye pehle tune kaha ke mai ladaai shuru karta hu isiliye maine bass apni tarafdaari Mai kuch shabd kahe
V- "trying to annoy him more...in an innocent tone" Lekin maine toh bass sachaayi kahi thi
Knowing her well... In an accusing yet cribbing tone
U- Oye sab samajhta hu mai teri sachaayi harr baar aise hi mere naal ladaayi karti hai aur phir saara kasoor mujhpe daalke khud mahaan bann jaati hai... Chit bhi teri aur patt bhi teri
Randheer and duggu looked at his drama with interest and seeing his melodrama they were giggling silently... In a shushed tone randheer told duggu
R- "in a cheerful tone" abhi dekhna kaise vashma iski saari nautanki nikaalti hai.... Aaj aap apne coach saahab ka ek bada hi alag avtaar dekhne wale ho
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D- "in a giggling and jovial tone" haa woh toh dekh hi raha hu.... Maine toh sapne mai bhi nahi socha tha ki yeh itne bhole aur nautanki hai
They giggled at this while vashma listening his cribs threatened him saying
V- Haa woh toh hai aur yaad rakhiyo humesha rahegi bhi... "Pulling uday's cheeks in a teasing manner while the latter was making bad faces...in a cheesy tone" Mera pyaara sa bholaa sa Uday

Releasing his soft cheeks from vashma's holds... Uday joined his hands.... In a melodramatic tone he started complaining... In a dramatic way
U- Galat... Galat jagah phasaa diya mainu rabji bohot galat jagah phasa diyaa..
All of them except Uday laughed hard on this.... Seeing them laughing on him....he made a sad face.... Seeing which vashma in a challenging tone warned him
V- Oye sunn tu Allah se shikaayat kar yaa rabji se..... Mai apni jaal se tujhe aise aazaad nhi karne wali.... Iss janam Mai toh bilkul nahi.
Listening her Uday gave her a shocked look and in a hurt tone asked
U- Oye tu iss janam tak hi mujhe tang karegi...agle chhe janam ka ki??

V- "in an innocent hurt tone" Uske liye kisi aur nu dhundh lena...Mai toh tujhe pareshaan karti hu na
Listening her.... Uday pulled her towards him while randheer and duggu's mouth went wide... They weren't expecting such romance in front of them....while Uday oblivious of everything around them made her look at himself and cupping her face.... In a loving tone... His eyes filled with love for his wife
U- Oye mere jahaan di sabto changi kudi yeh Uday kishore sahani na tujhe khud ke vaaste harr janam rab se cheen ke le aayega lekin pareshaan toh sirf tujhse hi howega
Vashma immediately looked in his eyes which had only love for him and got lost in them...... Randheer and duggu who came out of shock till now fakecoughed to bring them out of their reverie. . .. Straightening themselves and cussing themselves for losing control in front of a kid and randheer they looked here and there to avoid embarrassment
Trying to clear the cloud in the room.... Duggu asked randheer a relevant question
D- Accha mai aapko kya kehke bulaau...
Before they can even process this question duggu self answered this question cutely... In a self mocking tone he said
D- Aree mai bhi kya... Aap mere mumma ke pati ho toh aap toh mere papa hi huye na
All of them except duggu got shocked hearing him especially randheer and Uday.... Although feeling happy for randheer he couldn't control the tinge of jealousy he felt....he thought
U" "Thinking" Kaash yeh shabd kabhi mai bhi apne Kabir ke muh se khud ke liye sun paata... "Smiling lovingly seeing the shocked face of randheer and imagining his happy face" Par mai sach mai bohot khush hu randheer ke liye aakhirkaar unhe koi itna apna mila .... Kisika itna pyaar mila
While here gathering courage duggu in a hopeful tone asked randheer
D- Kya mai aapko papa bulaa sakta hu
Hearing his question Randheer came out of his reverie and overwhelmed he hugged him tightly and started crying like a kid as he never expected this....the day before yesterday only he had nothing and now he has a loving son who just called him papa and his amrit back in his life...he felt like he's the luckiest person alive on this planet....with eyes full of happy tears he in a crying tone said
R- Haa jarur... Aap hume papa jarur bulaa sakte hai...."promising him in a crying yet loving tone" mai humesha aapko aur aapki mumma ko jaan se bhi zyada chaahunga... Humesha
Duggu tightened his hold on him and felt the warmth of a father he always wanted... Tears started rolling out from his eyes too.... He always wanted a family of his own... Having a loving and caring parents.... In amrit he got the love of a mother and now in randheer he got the love of a father and he was sure that his father won't break his trust at all and will love them moon and back.... Trying to change the crying atmosphere he in a dramatic tone started
D- "in a shocked tone" Arre yeh kya
Everyone got shocked listening to him and breaking the hug randheer in a concerned tone asked him
R- Kya hua??
Hearing his question duggu exclaimed
D- Kya hua??? "In a melodramatic tone" Aap bhi rotulu nikle...... Haaye abb mera ki howega..... Mujhe zindagi bhar rotulu maa baap ko jhelna padega...... Mai akela samajhdaar baccha inn dono rotuluo ko kaise sambhaalunga
Seeing his antics randheer and Uday immediately looked at vashma and in a teasing tone randheer said
R- Dekh lo vashma apni carbon copy ko bilkul iski tarah hi nautanki baaj ho tum
Vashma and duggu giggled at this and in a cheerful tone exclaimed
Va and duggu(together) - haa woh toh hai
They all smiled brightly at this... Vashma called for all of them and gaining their attention tried to make them realize their current situation and the things they need to do for making it favourable
V- "in an urgent tone" Accha sab suno abb hume jald se jald inn dono ki shaadi karwaani hogi Kyuki hume amrit ki dawaaiyaan jald se jald shuru karwaane hai
Everyone nodded in approval and duggu too joined her saying
D- "in a loving yet pleading tone" Haa mai bhi aaplog ke saath abb jald se jald aakar rehna chahta hu
Patting his forehead lovingly randheer said
R- Hum bhi aapke saath rehne ke liye bohot utsuk hai
Everyone smiled at this and presenting the final solution Uday said
U- " With determination...in a concluding tone" Accha toh abhi bass kuch hi der mai mogar bua nu aa jaana hai phir wohi sab sambhaal lengi
Hearing mogar's name for the first time duggu asked
D- "in a confused tone" Yeh mogar bua kon hai
Smiling vashma filled in him with a little details
V- "in a loving tone" Aapki mummy ki bua hai woh
As he didn't knew about mogar..he in a doubtful tone  asked
D- Parr kya woh sab sambhaal lengi matlab itne acche se jhuth bolna..."in a proud yet tensed tone" Meri mumma toh woh "he suddenly forgot the name of the person he was going to refer....thinking cutely by tapping his index finger on his forehead...they all looked at him with adoring eyes and after some seconds he remembered some details and sharing it with them in a cute way he said" haa woh jo hai na woh..sher... Shelock
being a small child duggu wasn't able to spell his name correctly while Randheer immediately understood the name and vocalising his thoughts said
R- "smiling ...in a hinting tone" Sherlock Holmes
Duggu got excited hearing the name and exclaimed merrily
D- Haa wahi..."in a proud yet tensed tone" Mumma toh bilkul unki tarah sabke jhuth pakad leti hai...."caressing his ears cutely he mumbled in a sad tone" Bohot kaan khichti hai phir
As randheer was sitting just beside him he heard his mumble and getting shocked as well as excited asked
R- Amrit kaan bhi khichti hai??
D- "in a dramatic painful tone" Haa bohot zorr se
Vashma and Uday didn't bothered about this fact as it was not new for them especially vashma but for randheer it was very new.... He felt like he didn't knew the real amrit and in a complaining tone mumbled
R- mere toh kabhi nahi khiche
Vashma heard him and giving him a teasing smirk asked
V- "in a teasing tone" Aapko khichwaane hai kya randheer???
Randheer got shocked hearing her....not in his worse dreams he wanted her to hear that line...he knew that now she'll tease him like hell... Trying to answer her and dig the topic... He started to say but as he was nervous... It came as stutters
R- Nahi ....nahi toh mujhe kyu kyu khichwaane honge
Seeing his papa's state duggu felt and helping him in changing the topic he said
D- "in an urgent tone" Accha aap mogar bua "immediately correcting himself as he knew about the relations" mera matlab hai mogar dadi ki baat kar rhi thi na "in a doubtful tone" woh yeh kaam kar toh paaengi na
Vashma gave him a papa ko bachaaya jaa raha hai " Wala look while Thanking his son in his heart Randheer immediately started her praises
R- "in a praising and proud tone" Haa ji haa zarur unki acting pe toh mai sau baar khud ko haar jaane ko taiyaar hu.....bade awwal darje ki adaakaara  hai woh.... Haaye hume toh lahore mai kabhi pata hi na chal paaya ki kab woh sahi thi aur kab acting kar rahi thi
V- "vashma chimed in and  continuing with her praises said" Haa badi saaf acting karti hai woh
Duggu didn't got convinced and seeking a confirmation asked
D- Pakka na??
Vashma and randheer- "in an assuring and determined tone" Haa haa pakka
Finally duggu got assured and believed in mogar bua's acting
D- cheerfully " Tab toh bohot hi acchi baat hai
They all smiled brightly at this while oblivious to everything happening here our amrit was standing in a queue to buy medicines with her mother from the medical store as a nurse sent by randheer said her to do so....to get some details from the doctor kaveri said her
K- Amrit Tu yaha rukk mai jaake doctor se baat karke aati hu
A- "nodding in approval" Ji maa
As soon as kaveri left her....the annoying and bitter past memories started to revolve in front of her mind.... She got lost in her own land
A- "thinking...in a furious tone" Yeh aadmi khudko samajhta kya hai
"Snickering" Prem pratap singh...."in a thoughtful tone" Inka naam prem kisne rakh diya mann mai toh bilkul bhi prem nahi hai inke..."just then an idea came up in her mind and in an excited tone she thought" Inki karwaahat dekh ke toh inka naam karela pratap singh hona chahiye patting herself proudly for the accomplishment she achieved...in a self praising tone" Arre waah amrit kya naam nikala hai tune karela pratap singh waah bohot garv hai mujhe tujhpe karela pratap singh unke charitra ke saath bilkul baithta hai..."with hatred and grudge for him clear in her tone" Kitna ghatiya aadmi hai yeh... Matlab hadd hoti hai mere duggu ko bhi istemaal karna chahte hai..... "Although feeling hatred and resentment towards him she can't ignore the fact that all of his traits did helped her....trying hard not to acknowledge it or give him credit he thought" Waise toh accha hai ki mera duggu bhi mere saath jaa raha hai... Mujhe uski chinta nahi hogi bilkul bhi.... "In a furious and determined tone" Bohot shaadi karne ka shauk hai na uss karele ko... Abb toh mai shaadi karungi... Jarur karungi.... "In a cute way she pledged" Hum dono maa bete milke unhe aisa mazaa chakhaaenge na ki agle sau janm tak bhulaa nahi paaenge woh.... "With determination and feeling proud on herself" Agar iss karele ki sabji banaake khud unhe na khilaaya na toh mera bhi naam amrit nahi
She smiled brightly thinking all this... She wanted to dance like an excited kid but then Someone patted her making her come out of her reverie.... She looked at the source and got shocked finding kaveri with confused expressions
K- "in an interrogative yet confused tone"Amrit beta kya kar rhi thi tu yaha....puri line aage badh gayi hai ek tu hi yaha kabse khadi hai
She immediately looked at her surroundings and got shocked seeing that the people who were standing behind her were getting their medicines.... In a guilty tone she said her
A- Sorry maa
K- in a loving tone" Koi baat nahi "amrit smiled at her and again stood in the queue which was smaller this time.... Kaveri who wanted to ask some question from her asked
K- " In an interrogating tone" Waise Kya ho raha tha yaha khade khade kise mann hi mann kos rhi thi
Unknowingly she mumbled in a furious tone
A- Aapke laadle raja saahab ko
Although kaveri heard all of it she pretended like she didn't and trying to act natural asked
K- Haa kuch kaha tune
She got flabbergasted listening her and immediately nodded in a no saying
A- "in a normal tone" Nhi toh
Their turn came... Kaveri handling the medicines over to her said
K- Accha abb chal yeh dawaai le phir chalte hai aakhir "in an excited and loving tone" duggu ko bhi toh tere aur Rajasaahab ke vyaah ki baat bataani hai
Amrit got tensed hearing her and in a concerned yet tensed tone asked
A- Maa use koi dikkat toh nhi hogi na
Understanding her inner turmoil she caressed her hairs and said
K- "in a loving tone" Mujhe nhi lagta beta... Accha soch... Dekhna sab accha hi hoga..
A- Ji
Getting all the medicines kaveri asked her
K- Ab chal
A- hmm
They left the place and started going towards duggu's ward while here a nurse saw them going towards the ward and alerted randheer.... They immediately took their positions... Randheer taking the form of raja prem pratap singh got settled down in front of duggu while vashma and uday settled themselves on the other side of duggu's bed.... As soon as amrit entered the ward she got shocked seeing randheer and duggu talking with each other smilingly.... She ran towards the bed and sitting beside randheer interrupted their talks by caressing duggu's face
A- "in a maternal loving tone" Abhi kaisa lag raha hai tumhe haa
D- "in an assuring tone" Bohot accha
Everyone adored their bond while randheer looked at them with longing and lovefilled eyes..... Soon he heard some whispers from her side.... and paying attention to the voices he heard
A- "in an accusing yet interrogating furious tone" Kya kya bola hai aapne ise
Randheer smiled bright inwardly.... He took a glance of her angry face and got so happy seeing her red face.... She looked so adorable.... He then gestured duggu to see her red face who gave him a big bright smile.... Before he could say anything he felt a strong nudge in his chest.... Courtesy his love
A- "in a furious tone she whispered" Kya hua bolte kyu nahi hai...."in a mumbling furious tone thinking that he didn't heard her but he heard it clearly" aise toh din bhar bass bakwaas chaalu hi rehti hai
Randheer smiled and not showing that he heard her he continued her whispering game
R- "in his usual proud tone " Bass itna hi ki hum inki maa se shaadi karne wale hai.. "In an intriguing tone" Aur aapko pata hai sabse acchi baat kya hai
She got annoyed and mumbled
A- "in an annoyed tone" Aapke saath bhi koi acchi baat ho sakti hai kya
This time also he heard her clearly but trying to tease her said
R- "in a teasing tone" Kuch kaha
She got flabbergasted hearing him and trying to avoid this topic said
A- "trying hard to act as normal as she could but failing badly she stuttered" Nhi toh kuch bhi nahi ...." Trying to change the topic" abb bataiye konsi acchi baat hui
Looking at duggu with a real bright smile....although the words were vocalised by prem pratap singh but the emotions were of randheer... He wanted to share his happiness and excitement with his love.... He wanted her to know how happy he is to have duggu in his life
R- "in a happy and excited tone" Ji toh baat yeh hai ki aapke duggu ne hume apna papa qubool kar liya.... Humse bohot pyaar bhi karne lage hai woh
Amrit got so shocked listening to him that she didn't bothered about the excitement in his voice.... Alas if she would've just listened to his tone once .. Then she would've known how much he loves him .... Shocked amrit went in a panic state and started mumbling in a disbelief tone
A- Nhi aisa nhi ho sakta.. Aise kaise woh
Randheer noticed her condition and not wanting her to get so tensed or make herself sick he tried to divert her attention  saying
R- "in a mocking tone" Aap itni hairaan kyu ho rahi hai aapke liye toh accha hi hai na... Accha abb hume samajh aaya... Aap itni hairaan isiliye ho rahi hai na kyuki abb humare duggu humaare team Mai rahenge... Hume aapse zyada pyaar karenge
Although it hurted him a lot to give her pain but it was necessary and his hard work bore fruits... Soon she retorted him whispering
A- "in a duhh tone" Huh... Mera duggu aur woh bhi aapse pyaar "in a fierce tone" kabhi nahi kabhi sapne mai bhi nhi samjhe aap aur yeh humaara duggu bolna band kare "in a proud tone" kahiye mera uski mumma ka duggu...."in a commanding tone" Aur aap abhi rukiye
Going closer to duggu and Caressing his hairs she asked him in whispers
A- "in a concerned tone" Duggu beta tum thik hona "looking at randheer with a hateful glare.....in a hateful tone" inhone tumhe kuch khilaaya toh nhi naa
Randheer also heard everything and getting furious at her last line he pulled her towards himself by her arm and in a demanding and disbelief tone asked in a whisper
R- Mai aapko baccho ko kuch galat khilaane wala dikhta hu
Giving him a strong glare and freeing herself from his hold she in a fierce tone asked
A- Aapka naam duggu hai
R- "in a matter of fact tone" Nhi
In a strict tone she scolded her
A- Toh duggu ke badle khud kyu bol rahe hai... Baat duggu se ho rhi hai na toh jawaab bhi wahi dega.... Aap apne zubaan ko band rakhiye
This is the second time he got scolded by her like this..... He can't even define how happy he was to get a round of scolding from her. . . But being prem pratap singh he can't express that and giving her a good and befitting reply he said
R- "in a proud and sarcastic tone" Humari zubaan aawaam ki zubaan hai toh woh aapke bolne se toh band hone se rahi aap ek kaam kariye apne kaano ko leke kahi rawaana ho jaaiye
She made a haww face and immediately replied in a cute stubborn tone
A- Mai Mai kyu jaau aap jaaiye... Mera beta hai woh
He went all awe on her cute stubborn face but maintaing a Firm ground.... Randheer replied proudly yet stubbornly
R- "whispering" Lekin abhi unhone hume apna papa maana hai aur woh ab humaare bhi bete hai "in a rude tone" aur aap yeh baar baar hume jaane ko kya keh rahi hai "in a proud tone" bhuliye mat ki yeh hospital humaara hai
Tears came in her eyes hearing his rude tone... She understood that he'll not go from here ....she became hell tensed for her kid as for her randheer was a bad guy
Thus in a crying pleading tone she whispered
A- Dekhiye mai acche se jaanti hoo ki aapko kisi ke dil ki koi parwaah nahi hai.. Par mujhe hai.... "She looked at randheer with tear filled eyes seeing which the latter got shocked as well as hurt .....he wanted to wipe her tears but their situation didn't allowed him...in a hurt tone she said" Mai apne duggu ka dil tootte huye nahi dekh sakti....."looking at duggu from the corner of her eyes with love and admiration " Uss bacche ne bohot kuch saha hai itne se umar Mai... "In a pleading tone..joining her hands secretly so that no one can notice her while randheer's heart broke into million pieces seeing the love of his life in such a state" Mai aapke aage haath jodti hu plss use baksh de... Harr kisiko toh apne naatak ka hissa bana rakhaa hai aapne use chodd de plsss
Randheer wanted to hug her as tightly as possible and say that she didn't have to join his hands in front of him.... That he'll never let a single scratch come on them.... Feeling helpless he turned his face on the other side.... Wiping his tears harshly he prepared himself to face her..but before he could tell her anything they heard a familiar voice

I know that this part doesn't have amdheer scenes.... But trust me it was necessary for future parts.... I promise that the next part will have many amdheer scenes.... I don't know when I'll post the next part but yup I won't stop writing... So plss dont forget my ff and plss comment .... Those who don't have wattpad app... Kindly comment on its post in insta and twitter.... Inspite of really busy days... I write... Plss comment so that it'll motivate me
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