Your current cover is very simple and although the title does stand out, it seems a little out of place. It gets the job done but isn't really eye-catching or something that would draw me in to read the story if I were to scroll past it. I'd recommend going to a good cover shop here on wattpad. There don't seem to be too many open at the moment as this site is slowly getting quieter and quieter but there are a few around that offer excellent services and would be able to make you an eye-catching cover for your story.

Points for this section - 1.5/5

The story description is okay. It tells you what the story is about and gives a little background information but it isn't too exciting. It just didn't captivate me or draw me in. Spicing it up a little and using more exaggerated or descriptive words might help it make more of an impact to potential readers.

Points for this section - 2/5

When it comes to the writing style everything flows very nicely. I particularly liked the descriptions of the characters. They brought life into them and really helped me picture how they looked or how they behaved.

There is also this attention to detail that can often go unnoticed. Just small little details that may not mean much in comparison to the ongoing story but really add something to the whole atmosphere of the setting.

Points for this section - 8/10

The first paragraph is great! It really sets the scene and has some excellent descriptive writing. I also really liked how the characters were all introduced and interacted with one another throughout the story. 

The story overall may not be something that has not been done before but it has an interesting plot that reminds me of the CW show The 100. It's a very similar concept and the sci-fi/dystopian theme in media and literature is very popular so I see no reason why this story wouldn't get eaten up by fans of such things when given the right exposure. 

Points for this section - 13/15

When it comes to technicality I don't really have much to say. Nothing in particular caught my eye and there seemed to be very few mistakes. It's very rare to come across writing that isn't technically flawed on wattpad so it was really nice to read through your chapters and not see anything distinctively popping out.

Points for this section - 10/10

Overall, I really did enjoy reading this story! The writing was great and the plot was interesting enough to keep my attention. I definitely think any fans of the dystopian sci-fi genre should give this story a read because I'm sure they'd enjoy it as much as I did. I honestly don't have much else to say, it's just very well done and definitely a high-tier wattpad story.

The main drawbacks aren't within the story itself but with the cover and description which I think could be improved to draw in more potential readers. The main factor is getting a new eye-catching cover because, although we try not too, we do all judge a book by its cover.

Overall Score - 34.5/45

p.s. I am so sorry this took so long! I've been so busy irl and haven't had enough time to properly sit down and complete my pending reviews. I hope you haven't forgotten about me and apologise once again for how long this review took.