Your book cover is definitely better than a lot of others I've seen. The colour pops and the editing is done in a way which really helps to bring out that superhero look, however, the title isn't very easy to read, especially in the small wattpad previews. Despite having room for improvement, it is far from a bad cover which is why I have given it 3 out of 5 points.

Points for this section - 3/5

Your description is okay. It sets the scene and lets you know what you're getting into but it lacks in oomph, if that makes sense? It is the kind of thing I could read and might give the book a try or add it to my library for later but it just doesn't captivate me enough to want to get reading right away.

Points for this section - 2.5/5

Your writing style has both pros and cons. It is quite easy to read, however, it doesn't flow as well as I'd like it to but that could just be personal preference. I also found a lot of the story, particularly in the first couple of chapters, to be mostly filler and ended up skimming through a lot of what seemed like irrelevant information. The rice cakes being 50% off in the first chapter, for example. It was mentioned so many times but seemed to hold little relevance to the story. Once again, this could be a personal preference or I might be missing something in the bigger picture but I did find reading through all the filler to be quite a chore at times and did end up skimming through a lot of it until I came to a part that actually seemed relevant to read.

I do really like how you switch perspectives, especially in the first chapter, which helps us as readers get to know the characters a little quicker and more intimately as well as letting us know what they think of each other early on in the story. I also enjoyed the humour in your story, it was so silly and fun and definitely helped draw me back in.

Points for this section - 6.5/10

I do actually quite like the plot but then again I am a sucker for a good superhero story. I really like how all of the characters were introduced and enjoyed the little snippets into their lives and the foreshadowing of their importance to the story. Jin, for example, who I assumed had the power of invisibility from the moment he first spoke to Jisoo. There was obviously a lot more to it than this, as I later learned, but it was clear from the first time he entered the story that he would likely have an important role to play.

I definitely am a sucker for a superhero story but this one seems to be quite unique and definitely has a lot more to it than I first expected which was a really nice surprise. If I came across this story when I first joined wattpad back in 2016/17 when I was still really into BTS fanfics I would have definitely really enjoyed reading it!

Points for this section - 12.5/15

When it comes to the technicality of your writing, I was happy to find that there were few errors in the way of punctuation and grammar. Your dialogue was also all correctly formatted from what I can tell which is nice to see on wattpad because a lot of people make mistakes in that area.

The story flow, however, was a little lacking. I found this to be partly hand-in-hand with your writing style as I mentioned previously in that section of the review. Most sentences are quite short and/or don't contain a lot of meaningful information which really did disrupt the flow for me. However, I only read the first five chapters and am aware that as the plot continues to gain after this starting point the flow might get better as there will be more meaningful things happening within the story.

I also noticed some tense issues, although they were minor. The story seems to be written in the present tense but occasionally you use words in the past tense which clashes a little but isn't anything that can't be identified and fixed during editing.

Points for this section - 7/10

Overall, I did really enjoy reading this! There is definitely room for some improvements / tidying up if you ever go through and thoroughly edit but as far as wattpad goes this was a really solid read! Your characterization was fun and the story kept getting more interesting as the plot got going. The inclusion of humour was definitely my favourite part as it actually had me laughing out loud at times. I would definitely recommend this to anyone looking for a good superhero-based BTS fic.

Overall Score - 31.5/45

p.s. I am so sorry this took so long! I've been so busy irl and haven't had enough time to properly sit down and complete my pending reviews. I hope you haven't forgotten about me and apologise once again for how long this review took.