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The Man in the Woods
By DiamondWingz

Reviewer: savvysoul_37

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Cover/Title: 7/10

> The cover is nice! It's simple. I like it.

> The name is alright. It doesn't really catch my attention to be honest.

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Blurb: 8/10

> The blurb is good! It makes me curious and I feel like I wanna know what happens in the story!

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First Chapter: 8/10

> The first chapter is very nice! I love the bond that the family has, it made me very happy! It made me want to read more.

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Grammar/Punctuation: 9/10

> The grammar is great! I couldn't really point out any mistakes, and that's amazing. It's really hard to get everything right, so great job!

> Same goes with the punctuation. But please remove the "...." it doesn't really look proper.

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Vocabulary: 10/10

> I love the vocabulary! The words are used properly at their places. Great work!

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Plot/Pacing: 8/10

> The pacing is very good! I love that it's not just Spike's POV we're experiencing. The other characters got the chance too.

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Characters/Character Development: 7/10

> I like the characters, they are nice.

> I think the character development is very good too!

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Originality: 8/10

> It is very original. I haven't really read something like this!

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World Building: 8/10

> I love the world that you've built. I felt like I was a part of the story, not to mention Spike's emotions and thoughts were projected very nicely.

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Imagery: 8/10

> It would be nice if you add more about how the characters look. And the overall image of the place.

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Overall:
I really like your writing style. Everything is placed properly, and I love how detailed everything is. Great job!!

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