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Be with you never
By Po_writing1

Reviewer: @Tumi771

Cover/Title: 10/10

- Just like a love that's not meant forever, I believe the candle represents that and I think it fits perfectly.

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Blurb: 8/10

- It's mysterious you would think it's a book about lovers who are named etc and they lose each other but it's actually like letters.

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First Chapter: 9/10

- It's an amazing book about love or lost love. What I found intriguing about the first chapter/letter was when it explained that it's not someone specific writing these letters, it's someone who you the reader wants it to be from.

- It's the day you meet the person and because everyone you meet is for a reason they change your life forever.

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Grammar/Punctuation: 9/10

- I didn't find any errors with her grammar and punctuation.

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Plot/Pacing: 10/10

- It is not like a book, it's more like letters so it did not need a plot. However, it was a great, emotional rollercoaster, it made me feel things I've buried so I'm pretty sure a lot of people will relate to it.

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Originality: 10/10

- It's very original I loved it.

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World Building: 10/10

- It didn't only me take me to a place I got lost in. I relived a lot of emotions and feelings I haven't had a chance to unpack so I saw and felt a lot and remembered a love I had and lost...

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Imagery: 10/10

- You just have a way with words. You have the power of evoking some feelings at the end. I felt the part when the anonymous writer couldn't remember who they were writing to so  the writer took over and said: "Not anything lasts forever, not a single moment in sight. We shall always be betrayed in the end. After all Love is strong but not forever". Anyone who has loved and lost can relate to that, I think I cried a bit not sure if it was dust or the book, aha.

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Overall: 10/10

I feel it was simply amazing! Kudos to you!

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