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Aragons
By earlfangs

Reviewer: The_Scarlet_Writer

Cover/title: 9/10

- The title is very catchy and interesting. I think it's a really great choice.

- The cover is also very pretty and mysterious.

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Blurb: 9/10

- I like the blurb, especially these lines in bold and italic; they were the ones that mostly caught my attention.

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First chapter: 9/10

- Amazing start to the book.
You included the information in a very smooth way, without dumping it on us awkwardly.

- The characterization, the plot and all of these things are on point. I'll be talking about them later on.

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Grammar/punctuation: 9/10

- There's nothing to say here other than great job.

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Vocabulary: 10 /10

- You've got this one in the pocket too; using relative vocabulary and blessing us with incredible descriptions all throughout the chapters.

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Plot/Pacing: 9/10

- I admire the fact that you used the third point of view, I like it far more in this genre; and even though it's more challenging than the character's own point of view, you've made it look easy.

- I like the pacing, always keeping us on our toes with sudden unexpected twists without overdoing it.
The plot line is so satisfying in my opinion.

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Characters/character development: 9/10

- You did a great job on Raia, she's a complicated character with an even more complicated past. I can't wait to figure her out.

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Originality: 10/10

The creativity and originality in your book are a *chef's kiss*. Keep going.

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World building: 9/10

- I feel like this is the trickiest part for all of us, especially for fantasy writers, but you've succeeded in it.

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Imagery: 9/10

- It's only right that after all these great things that we are able to imagine the scenes in front of us.

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Overall: I really enjoyed reading your book, keep going.

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