Editor's note:

Hi bozos. Remember how Snips mentioned how they had an irl that she didn't want to read her book? Yeah that's me, and apparently I'm their editor for this shit now. Shitty explanations aside, my name is Sam im non binary and go by all pronouns, and I fucking love sour patch kids. I'll usually make my presence known with "Sam's note:'' now that y'all know who the hell I am. My discord is D0NUTW4T3R#6972 if any of you little shits need me. Furthermore, enjoy the story. See you in the near future.

P.S - I hope Snips is paying me in Sour Patch Kids for this.

HEAVEN are you [WATCHING]

Sam

(Yes that was a spamton reference)

So I hope all of you enjoyed their note. Ok on to the point, this is a remake for the story. I first started that story when I first started writing so I was completely dog water. Also I did not have an editor before and now I have Sam. (SAM'S NOTE: Yeah ik i'm so cool.) So I am going to start publishing a chapter in 1-2 weeks. I will always try to be 2 chapters a head, so that will solve my 'not publishing anything for over 10 weeks' problem. Ok on now to the book. Also when you see anything parenthese intaliced that is a SAM'S NOTE, we will have arguments in notes so just be prepared for that:D.

-Snips🔪

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Chapter 1

"Okay, do you all understand the plan?" General Anakin Skywalker, was giving the plan to get into the Separatists underground bunker. That bunker holds important hyperspace routes. Routes that could lead right into the heart of the Republic, Coruscant.

"Sir, yes sir." Some clones all said it simultaneously.

"Good. Get ready. We touch down by day break." The holotable turns offAnakin and his padawan Ahsoka Tano walk side by side in the hallways. "Is everything alright Ahsoka? I sense uneasiness?"

"I don't know master. I sense something bad will happen on this mission.I have a bad feeling " Anakin knew something was wrong his padawan very told him if she was unsure . "If you feel as if something is wrong you should meditate on it, then you should get some sleep. We need to areat"

"Yes, master." Ahsoka soon walked off into the distance

As Ahsoka goes into meditation she feels a cold presence, not like a person but something dark.

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It was dark, and there was nothing around Ahsoka. There was a sound, a voice. Then Ahsoka felt a pain like blades were being slashed against her skin. Where was this pain coming from? There was that sound again, this time she could understand it. "Commander!" What? Why was someone calling her? Why did she feel more pain?

The next time she heard the voice it was all muffled and fuzzy. All she could make out was, "Get the rubble off...Commander!...She is not picking up." Not picking up? Was this all just because she was not answering her com? That can't be all the voices were...panicked.

Ahsoka came back to her senses gasping for breath. What did that all mean? She decided to walk over to the mess and get some caf. Maybe Rex or Echo would be there, or maybe Fives was getting a late night snack. She could use her vod right now.

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The mess doors opened with a nostalgic hiss. The sound caused a small few clones that were in the mess to turn their heads in curiosity. They were all surprised to see their young Commander up at such a late hour. Even though it was not uncommon to stay up this late in war, sometimes they would be up for days on end. Normally their Commander would try to get as much sleep as she could.

At first look Ahsoka did not see anyone but then her eyes landed on Kix. Not so uncommon for the medic to tell everyone to get sleep to be up late not getting sleep. As Ahsoka walked over she got hit with a wave of a cold feeling. What was going on?

"Hey Commander." Kix greeted with a smile. "Hey Kix. Mind if I take a seat?" "Not at all Kid." She let out a sigh as she sat down across from Kix. "So, mind telling me why you are up so late." She hesitated for a moment trying to figure out the right words to say, knowing full well that if she said the wrong thing Kix would go into 'I am the medic and I know what is best for your health' mode. "I just...can't sleep, I had a vision that something is going to happen on this mission."

Kix may not know a lot about the jedi or understand everything that happens, but he did know when his vod'ika was unsettled. And he had an idea on how to help her. "Trust me kid, as long as you have us nothing really bad can happen." With that he gave a small smile. "Come on do you want to sleep in the barracks again." Ahsoka smiled at the thought of being with her vod. Though it may not be prodigal they still did it, and hey when was the 501st ever going to follow the rules.

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flash back

This was one of the most gruesome battles Kix has ever seen. So many of their brethren were severely injured or dead.

"Kix, what can I do to help!" Ahsoka came running up to him. "There is nothing we can do. I am low on everything." Kix's voice was filled with sorrow.

Ahsoka bowed her head, a common thing Jedi do, just as she did she got an idea. "Kix there is nothing you can do, but there is something I can do. It is an older jedi healing trick. Stand back I don't really know what is going to happen.""

Kix went back a couple of inches as Ahsoka walked to the injured soldier. Putting a hand on their chest and forehead. Kix started to feel something in the tent. He heard the commander whisper something over and over but it was too quiet to be comprehensive.

It only lasted 1 minute and most but after the trooper started to show strong life signs. When Ahsoka came back to the senses she put a hand on her head. It must have really taken a lot out of her. "Easy there Coma- Ahsoka." He corrected himself knowing that she likes to be called her name then her rank. "Thanks Kix, that should help." Ahsoka said sleepy."Come on kid, you should get some sleep." "No, I am fine Kix, don't worry." She was tired but she did not want to leave them, especially after a hard battle like that last one. Kix lightly sighed, then he have an idea. "Come on, I have an idea." He motioned for her to follow him.

"Kix why are we at the barreks?" "Well kid, if you say your fine, which we both know is a lie, I thought it would be a good idea for you to be here."

As they walked in they saw most of the boys were passed out sleeping. Fives was on top of a bed and Echo was on the bottom. Rex and Jessie shared a bunk, and by kix's there was an empty one. "You can sleep under mine Ahsoka." Kix said as climbed up the ladder to get up.

"Thank you Kix." "Anytime kid." They both smiled. "Hey Kix, what does vod mean?" "Vod means brother.....or sister." (Sam's note: I didn't know what that meant either so Snips sent me a google doc titled "Sam stop being a fucking idot." with info on everything I would need to know.) (A/N yeah well Sam that is what you get for working with a dyslexic writer) "Good night Kix" "Good night little 'un"

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There was a cold feeling again. When Ahsoka felt it she woke up, but when she did she was not in the barreks...she was at the temple in the trial room. Why was she there in the center? Was she on trial? The council was there. What was going on? "Hens forth Padawan Ahsoka Tano will be expelled from the Jedi order." She was expelled! She needs Anakin. Where is Anakin?

She woke up by being shaken by Kix and she bolted up. "Oh easy there Ahsoka." "Kix?" Ahsoka was breathing heavily. "Yeah Kid, are you ok? You were talking in your sleep and moving around a lot." Was it all just a dream? "Yeah yeah Kix I am fine just uh- bad dream." Trying to put his mind at ease and he let out a small sigh, again. "Come on, we have to get ready for the mission." •·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·•·

"Remember get in, get the hyperspace routes and get out before we blow it." Anakin was rembeing in padawan one last time before the mission. "I understand master." Ahsoka said as they both walked to the hangor.

Rex, Jessie, Fives, and Echo were getting ready close to the corner. "Ready boys." Ahsoka said, still trying to get the vision or dream out of her head. It felt so real. She kept thinking about how everyone in her life could abandon her and expel her.

"Commander?" Echo asked with just a little worry in his voice. "Oh sorry, yes Echo?" "Commander, are you ok? You seem...off." "I am fine Echo thank you. We better not be left behind." They both walk over to the ship that will bring them into the atmosphere, and from there they jump.

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"Rex Fives you with me getting the routes, Jessie Echo I need you to distract the seppies." Ahsoka was given orders as fast as her master. "Sir yes sir." They all said as they started to run off.

"Remember we are short on time so no time to say hi." She talked into his com making sure her teams know what to do.

As Ahsoka ran to the side of Rex she felt the cold again. She thought nothing of it because there was a mission to finish. They turned a corner and found the room with the routes in them. "Boys, I think we found the place. Get to work on this door. I will cover you if any tin cans come." Hopefully Jessie's and Fives's destraction is working. And it was the boys where sneaking in the vents setting off small bombs making all the droids go to it.

"Can you hurry up, the bomber should be here soon." This was taking too long. "Oh no" And just as if it was timed 3 destroyers came rolling up.How did she not sense that. "New plans, get the routes and get the hell out of here! I will cover you." "Commander..." Rex tried to protest but she stopped him before he started. "That is an order! I will be right behind you vod." They both look at eachother and nod. It was saying a thousand things with one simple gesture from each of them simplified down to, "Be safe" and "I will". So much without saying a word.

All of the clones were out of the building. "Jessie! Where is Commander Tano '' They have been waiting for her for 2 standard minutes. "Not with me. I thought she was with you." "Oh! Kriff, she is still in the bunker."(Sam's note: At this point I am misspelling things in the google doc to piss her off.) (A/N: I will hold ur sour patch kid hostage SAM don't forget who gave you the job.) (Sam's note: OH FUCK OFF YOU GREMLIN) (A/N love you 2 dumb ass🥰) (Sam's Note: DUMBASS IS ONE WORD DIPSHIT) (A/N EDITOR IT WILL NOT LET ME DO THAT ON MY PHONE DUMBASS) (Sam's note: SNIPS I SWEAR WE ARE ONLY IN MATH CLASS AND YOUVE BEEN REFERING TO ME AS EDITOR ALL DAY, I HAVE A NAME) "KRIFF, the bombers is here." Fives screamed as they flew overhead. "Commander, you need to get out of there now!" Jessie said into his com. "I am trying. There are a lot more clankers than I thought." She sounded panicked, they all knew that was not good. "Damn it kid! You have to get out of there before the whole place is blown-" Rex never got to finish. They saw the bombs drop, the explosion a beautiful burst of rex and orange.

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Fuck yeah first chapter. And that is it and just so you all know me and Sam talk like this all the time, and don't take offence to what we say to each other. 

-Snips

I can second that

THANKS TO YOUR [Jackass] STUNTS, I HAVE BEC0MED [Neo].

Hope yall like deltarune references

- Sam