Hi again! OK, so, I realize that I made Nico open up to Will way to fast. I mean, in the two chapter in BOO where Nico meets Will, Nico smiles twice! But still. . . I also feel like I made Nico seem weak. . . . I want to change it, but I would have to rewrite the entire thing, so in the upcoming chapters he will be more like he was in the series: Cold(ish, except for to Hazel), hard to get to know, and another difference will be he's depressed. . . . Sooooo, yeah! Anyways, have a good day and make sure to comment any suggestions!