A forty something, mum of one beautiful daughter. Lived in 4 countries so far. English is not my native language but it's a beautiful one. I started learning it when I was in high school and never stopped since. For me, writing in English is a great way to keep learning.

Things to look out for while reviewing my story:

Would love to know if the first chapter is engaging enough. Does it make you care about Leïla and Edward? If not, what would you recommend to have instead? 

I'm also writing in 3rd POV omniscient and would love to know if it comes through, or not.

And of course, any feedback on anything and everything is always welcome

FMM2310 for the book club submitted her story Ten Years.