I write short stories that generally fall into the adult romance category.

For the book club, Whitney has submitted her story, The Travel Nurse

A young woman beginning her nursing career in 1950's rural Ontario is sent to provide care in the home of a dying woman. Once there, she finds herself thrust into a decade-long dysfunctional relationship between the woman, her sister, and her husband. 

Things to look out for when reviewing my story:

Suggestions on pacing, sentence structure, and overall story structure. Any criticism or feedback would be appreciated.

MATURE: Yes