How to Write a Tri-Dodeca and the Tempoem
Tri-Dodeca
tri ... 3
dodeca ... 12
The tri-dodeca is a simple but challenging poetry form that consists of three stanzas of four lines each.
The unique thing about the tri-dodeca is that each line is exactly three syllables long.
There is no rhyming scheme and the style can be adapted to any format, as long as it follows the
three stanza
four lines
three syllable per line
format.
Therein comes the challenge to writing this style.
There are no restrictions on subject with this poetry form, so it can be pretty much about anything.
I created this style while completing the 200 Poem Challenge, sponsored by the Poets Pub.
Here is the first official tri-dodeca that I wrote.
I hope you enjoy this new style.
Bill
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40 proof
the whiskey
in my hand
bitter taste
desert sand
watered down
tears i cry
bloodied red
a heart died
40 proof
prison bars
life sentence
deeper scars
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Tempoem
The Tempoem is a poetry style created by Bill Temple in December of 2012.
It is a very simple style that consists of 28 words, divided into 7 lines, that all rhyme.
Constructing a Tempoem
The layout of a Tempoem is very simple.
Line one consists of 7 words.
Line two consists of 6 words.
Line three consists of 5 words.
Line four consists of 4 words.
Line five consists of 3 words.
Line six consists of 2 words.
Line seven consists of 1 word.
The last word of line one must be rhymed with lines 2 - 6.
The seventh line (one word) is the same as the end of line one.
The last word of line one is also the title of the Tempoem.
When reading a Tempoem, it should read easily from top to bottom (lines 1 - 7), as well as from bottom to top (lines 1 - 7).
By this, it means the Tempoem should make sense both ways.
To complete the process of a Tempoem and to create the perfect Tempoem, it should be ascetically visual.
This is not an absolute, but it does offer a visual excellence.
(Sometimes using double spacing can add to the effect of the Tempoem)
EXAMPLES
Fight
Never give up, keep up the fight
Walk the dark tunnel, to light
Keep the goal in sight
Ignore the dark night
Reach that height
Victory delight
Fight
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Variations ...
The Double Tempoem
A Conversation about Caring
"Put down that blade, please for me."
"Why should I, what do you care?"
"I've made mistakes, that I see."
"Mistakes.You were just never there."
"It's not too late, please."
"I need you to hear."
"I'm listening sweetie, honestly."
"This is no dare."
"I understand completely."
"I am sincere."
"I agree."
"Be aware."
"Me?"
"Care."
(A double Tempoem. A conversation between a parent and a child.)
As you can see by this example, it is every second line that rhymes.
The Double Tempoem follows the same format as the single, but it combines two in one.
This form is especially effective in comparing things and for conversations.
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The Mirror Tempoem
Red
Sails in the sunset, glowing magnificent red
Signs of a glorious day ahead
Honeymoon spot for the newlyweds
Fireworks exploding, inside heads
Passions ignite, bed
Silence spreads
Red
Volcano's head
Molten lava bed
Fiery balls, flying overhead
Nightmare spot, dreams now dead
Glorious morning, now full of dread
Sails in the sunset, now burning red
The Mirror Tempoem is actually two Tempoems, connected by a central keyword (in the above case Red).
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Another variation of the Tempoem was first conceived by ScottArroy for a competition at the Poets Pub. It follows the same basic structure as the Tempoem, only each of the 7 lines start with the same word.
Scott's Tempoem is below.
Please (ScottArroy)
Please believe the absolute power of bees
Please allow trees to prevent disease
Please cease the thawing freeze
Please ease those degrees
Please some expertise
Please appease
Please
Thank you Scott for this new and unique take on my poetry style.
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