@sxmmlu
thank you for applying @sxmmlu !
PROFILE PHOTO:
10/10 — this pfp is so cute, i love it!! great choice ;)
PROFILE BACKGROUND:
5/10 — i assume this is better on ipad or computer but most Wattpad users have a phone when looking at accounts. i would go with a solid color instead of an image, maybe. to match your pfp, you can throw it into PicsArt and hit 'fit' and it will give you colors that match.
NAME:
9/10 — sam is such a cute name!! the spacing does seem odd so maybe play around with fonts!
USER:
10/10 — i love this username! i assume that lu is your middle name or a nickname but either way it's very aesthetically pleasing :)
BIO:
6/10 — first, the bad stuff; this is wayyyy too long. i don't think you necessarily need the spelling of your name— it's kinda simple. also put spaces between #blacklivesmatter (you go girl!!) and your community just so it's easier to read. the likes are cute but maybe bunch them into categories like:
fifteen. cancer. july 17.
black. black hair. brown
eyes. she/her.
reading. netflix. food.
sleep. cute boys.
grant gustin. ariana grande.
billie eillish.
and have like cute symbols as bullet points at the beginning of each bunch. also the little bio after that isn't really needed, it makes it look more messy in my opinion but yeah. also, the support thingy could get you in trouble since it could be seen as bribing, just fyi. works aren't needed since the reader can find them easily below. the coming soon is definitely not needed, it takes up wayyyyy too much space and we don't need to know what's coming next until you publish it. this is just my opinion though.
NOW THE GOOD STUFF. everything else is good. i like your best friends list and i like your editor thingy and your goals. i love the mix of fonts but you make it look neat and polished. and contacts are *chef's kiss* splendid.
LOCATION:
10/10 — i love it!!!!
COVERS:
9/10 — these covers are super good, but i would love to see it tie into your theme. maybe make them all one type of covers or put a filter on all of them to make them seem the same? either way, these are beautiful!
READING LISTS:
9/10 — these are great! there's more than one and it shows who you are. don't be afraid to play around with fonts!!!
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TOTAL
68/80 - awesome job!
please do not take your score to heart! these are just my opinions. your account is amazing :)
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