I have a bit of a problem. I feel as if this story moves a little too fast. Also, I don't want the mother and daughters story to be so similar but right now that's the direction the story is heading. I have two options 1 I can edit this story and add more to Snow's life and write a completely separate story for her daughter or 2 make it all one story? Add more to Snows story and then do a part one part 2 which will focus on her daughter's life. Please let me which choice you want.