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The scene start from Abhimaniyu was crying bitterly and feeling very guilty .

Abhimaniyu pov

Yeh kya hogaya maine aapni hi jaan ko kitna hurt kar diya . Tu naa chahate huye bhi unki tarah ban gaya jiski tarah tu nahi baana chahata tha . Jiss cheez se main maa ko bachpan se bachata aaraha hu wahi sab maine akshu ke saath kiya  Shame on me .

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And he start beating himself with belt but harsh came stop him and for the first time abhimaniyu crying in harsh lap . Harsh feel bad for both .

Harsh pov

Main ab aapne bacchon ko aur dukhi nahi dekh sakta mujhe kaise bhi karke aapne bacchon ko milwana hoga . Abhimanyu ko aapni galti ka ehsaas hogaya hai but yeh dono tab ek hoge jab akshara man se iss rishte ko ek aur mauka degi .

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AT SINGHANIA SADAN

AKSHU ROOM

Akshu was seen in her room and sit quietly near the window which is her favourite place after the balcony . Akshu was thinking about all this happened with her from past 1 year . She was very disturbed which happened today and specially with Abhimaniyu 's choice of words .

All the incident revolve in her mind from the day she met him after 1 year till today . She was lost and look at sky toward two shining stars she know that these two stars are her parents . Today she miss her parents alot specially her dad as he was her support system and she know today also he is with her and blessed her but today she wanted him badly. Just then she feel someone touch her shoulder . She came out from the trance and turned behind and saw natik and gayu .

She didn't said anything and smile lightly as she know if whole world will against her but her maternal family his kairav bhaiya and his bade papa always there for her specially gayu and natik .

Natik ( tried to cheer her up ) - choti princess kya aise baithi ho chalo utho ham video game khelte hai .

Akshu ( meekly ) - nahi nanu mera maan nahi hai .

Natik and gayu feel disheartened heard that but they still lift up their mood .

Gayu - haa toh theek hai naa nahi hoga iska maan video game khelene ka meri beti mere saath dance karegi haina .

Akshu didn't said anything and start looking outside toward the sky . Gayu and natik again get sad . Akshu sense it and said .

Akshu - nanu aapki choti princess theek hai baas please usse thoda time dijiye I will be better . Please .

Natik understand her state of mind and nodded .

Natik - choti princess hosake toh thoda aaram kar lena hmm .

Akshu nodded and natik and gayu was about to leave but akshu held gayu hand . Gayu looked at natik and he nodded . Natik went from there . Gayu sit beside akshu . She didn't said anything and lay down and rest her head on her lap . Gayu able to feel her emotions and she just crassed her hair . Akshu feel relax in her mother 's warmth yes gayu is a mother of her after naira . Gayu take her to the bed , she layed her down on the bed and start singing a Lori for her .

Tari rari rari ra ram
Tari rari ra ram
Tari rari rari ra ram
Tari rari ra ram
Sun sun nanhe lori ki dhun
Ho ja meethe sapno mein gum
Sun sun nanhe lori ki dhun
Ho ja meethe sapno mein gum

Tu mera suraj hai
Tu mera chanda hai
Tu meri aankhon ka tara hai sun

Sun sun nanhe lori ki dhun
Ho ja meethe sapno mein gum

Mere ladle tujhko odhaun aanchal
aa thapkiyon se sulaun tujhe

Main taaron ki nagri se nindiya bulaun
Ankhiyon mein teri chhupaun usse
Nindiya kya tere liye taare laun main
Maa ka tu nanha dulara hai sun

Sun sun nanhe lori ki dhun
Ho ja meethe sapno mein gum

Suno ae hawaon na tum shor karna
Tute na nanhe ki nidiya kahin
Bade bhag se hai mili hai aisi raatein
Main gaati rahungi lori yunhi

Sote huye nindiya tujhko hasati hai
Aise hi meethe sapno ko chunn

Sun sun nanhe lori ki dhun
Ho ja meethe sapno mein gum

Tari ra ram tari ra ram
Tari ra ram ra ram

Gayu saw akshu fall asleep . She cover her with blanket and patted her head . Gayu look at naira photo and start crying .

Gayu ( looked at naira 's photo ) - Dekh rahi ho kaisi halat hogayi hai akshu ki ( blame herself ) shayad main hi inn sab ki zimmedar hu . Main aapni beti ke liye kuch nahi kar paayi socha tha teri kami usse aur kairav ko mehasoos nahi hone dungi but Kyaa Karu teri behan fail hogayi . Agar sach main mein unki maa ban pati toh akshu mujhse sab share karti . I am really sorry naira naa main acchi behan baan payi aur naa hi kairav aur akshu ki acchi maasi maa . I am sorry naira .

After spend some time in naira room she went from there .

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5 HOURS PASSED

Everyone was sitting in the hall and was tensed for akshu .

Natik - 5 ghante hogaye hai abhi taak akshu neeche nahi aayi waise abhi bhi so Rahi hai yaa uth gayi hai .

Keerti - uth gayi hai but abhi bhi udaas hi baithi hai . Pata nahi kya hogaya hai meri bacchi ko . Woh hasti khelti akshu toh kahi kho gayi hai. 

Just then voice came from behind .

Voice - radhe krishna .

Everyone turned behind and saw manjari was there . Some were shocked and some were angry to saw her .

Gayu ( shocked )  - aap yaha ??

Manjari - sorry iss waqt yaha aane ke liye but mujhe please ek baar meri beti se milne dijiye .

Keerti - maaf kijiyega but abhi akshu aapse nahi mil sakti woh abhi theek nahi hai . Please aap jaiye yaha se akshu abhi kisi se nahi milna chahati .

Manjari - aap please mujhe akshu se milne do mujhe meri beti se baat karni hai  please main aap sab ke aage haath jodti hu .

Manjari request them to let her meet to akshu saw manjari condition gayu saw toward natik and he nodded .

Gayu - aap yahi rukiye main abhi akshu ko bula kar laati hu .

Vatsal - nahi aayegi woh mumma maine try Kiya tha but kuch respond nahi kara . Maine toh uski ring taak cheen li tab bhi nahi Ladi woh mujhse . She was not our old akshu mumma .

Gayu - koyi nahi main try karke usse lekar aati hu .

After that gayu went from there and take akshu downstairs . When akshu come downstairs she was shocked to saw manjari. Manjari crying silently saw akshu 's condition as she know she is not fine . Manjari went toward Akshu .

Manjari ( crassed her face ) - akshu meri bacchi kaisi hai .

Akshara ( correct her ) - correction aunty Akshu nahi Akshara .

Manjari was shocked as well as feel bad to heard that .

Manjari ( hurt ) - par tu beti hai meri .

Akshu - nahi main beti nahi hu aapki main sirf aapki bahu hu aur ab woh bhi nahi hu kyunki aapke bete aur mera ab talak hone wala hai toh ab saas aur Bahu ka rishta bhi nahi hai Hamra .

Manjari was hurt to heard that but she composed herself .

Manjari -  par main maa hu teri .

Akshu - nahi aap maa nahi ho meri aap sirf abhimanyu aur Neil ki maa ho . Aap sirf mujhe beti kehti ho manti nahi ho .

Manjari ( crying ) - nahi akshu yeh sach nahi hai mera dil jaanta hai ki maine sache dil se tujhe aapni beti maana hai .

Akshu - accha agar aapne sach main mujhe beti maana hota naa toh aise haar baar paraya nahi kar deti . Valentine's day Wale din aapne mujhe beti kaha toh aisa laga I got maa but phir aapne kya Kiya jab jab mujhe aapki zaroorat padi tab tab  aapne mera haath chod diya . Kabhi akshara kabhi akshu . Jab Maan karta hai pyar jatata deti ho jab Maan karta hai mera haath chod deti ho . Aaj ki hi baat dekh lo jab main aise abhimaniyu ko chod ke chali gayi toh aap mujhe hate Karne lag gayi aur jaise aaj aapko sach pata chala toh aap phir se meri akshu meri beti karne lag gayi . You are such a flipper aur please agar aap sirf isliye mujhe beti maan rahi ho ki main bin maa ki bachi hu ( join her hand )toh please maat maniye , Daya karne ki koyi zaroorat nahi hai mujhpe . Nahi hu main bin maa ki mere paas meri naira mumma ka ashirwad hai pyar karne ke liye gayu maa , buami and  mishti masi hai aur bura maat maniye gaa aap se aache toh sir hai atleast ek point pe stick toh rehete hai aapki tarah flipper toh nahi woh . Jab mujhse nafrat karte the toh sirf nafrat hi karte the but jab woh mujhe support kar rahe hai toh unconditionally kar rahe hai aapki tarah kishtoh main nahi kar rahe hai .

Manjari was deeply hurt to heard that but she can't denied the fact that akshu said the truth . Akshu know that manjari is deeply hurt but still she couldn't resist herself to said all this .

Akshu ( tired ) - please aap yaha se chali jaaiye I beg of you . Main thaak chuki hu sabse lad ladke aur nahi ladna chahati main .

She go and hug natik who is her father figure after kartik .

Akshu ( cried bitterly in his arms  ) - nanu please inhe kahiye ki yeh yaha se chali jaye aapki choti princess ab yeh sab bardaash nahi kar sakti . Mujhe naa hi ab kisi se milna hai aur naa hi yaha rehana hai please mujhe yaha se dur le chalo please nanu . I am tired of all this blame game . Mujhe nafrat hogayi hai iss shehar se . Please nanu .

Although akshu trying to be brave till now she finally broke down from which happend with her from morning. She broke down from inside badly . Natik and everyone feel bad for akshu . Manjari was feeling guilty not to trust her daughter . She feel falied as a mother . Natik asked Krish to take akshu upstairs . He went toward manjari .

Natik ( sternly ) - please aap yaha se chale jaiye meri beti ko aur dukh maat dijiye aur agar aapka beta meri choti princess ke aas paas bhi dikha toh mujhse bura koyi nahi hoga . Aur waise bhi main aapni bacchi ko iss shehar main rehene hi nahi dunga woh parso hi Mumbai jayegi mere saath .

Manjari didn't said anything and went from there . She feel she lost her  daughter for forever . Tears continuously came out from her eyes .

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So guys this was the chapter I hope you like it .

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Will akshu go Mumbai or not ?? How will abhimaniyu react when he heard that akshu is going to leave this city .

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