Ravenpaw runshed into the forest moving as fast as he could as Blackfoot high tailed him from behind and started to catch up with him.Rain was starting to fall hard on them as  Ravenpaw swirved to the side between two trees to throw off the the tom who hissed bumping into one of them. Ravenpaw looked back smiling but then turned back toward and run more as Blackfoot got back up and ran to his feet quickly. He snapped as his tail nearly grabbing him but was tugged back. Blackfoot looked behind him to see Lionheart hisses at him and yells
"LEAVE HIM ALONE"
Blackfoot bites his neck and scramppers from under him and runs
"You can't get away so easily!"
Balckfoot yelled catching up to him. Ravenpaw gasped seeing a river but tried to run but the rain made the river strong and high, higher then it usually is. Blackfoot run in and grabs Ravenpaw by his scruff and turned to see Riverclan and Windfall on the other side. Crookedstar hissing at him.
"Is this what Bluestar's talking about!?"
Blackfoot stood in the river and turned on the other side up Thunderclan and Shadowclan stood there. Blackfoot looked at both side frantically Ravenpaw whimpering as Blackfoot puts him down in the water but held him near it the water was up to his neck
"You all going to let me go with him or I'll DROWN him!!!! You hear!? DROWN HIM!!!!"
Everyone froze in their spots. Tallstar and Crookedstar ordered their cats to stand their ground. Brokenstar took a few steps towards him causing Blackfoot to hiss causing him to push Ravenpaw more in the water. Dustpaw and Longtail started to rurn frantic
"DONT DROWN!!!!"
"HOLD YOUR BREATH!!!!"
"FIGHT BACK AGAINST HIM!!!"
Brokenstar glanced back at then worried
"Blackfoot!"
He yelled
"Look at all these cat. Look at your clan! You are their deputy! They need you! Without you we will have to choose another! Do you want that?"
"....."
Blackfoot's breath quicken a bit as he pushed Ravenpaw lower
"No...! I am their rightful deputy and leader! They do need me.... But i need someone else to help me!"
"I'm all ears."
Brokestar says smiling
"Ravenpaw... I need Ravenpaw with me! Let me take him with me!"
A loud boom from thunder came as lighting shot across the sky.
Brokenstar and other look up towards the rain then back to him
"Starclan disappove Blackfoot... They disappove..."
"No! They appove! They WILL appove!!!"
The water rise as Ravenpaw went under causing everyone to freakout in panic. Bluestar jumps into the water to save him but had little skill with swimming struggling you paddle through the water.
"Ravenpaw!"
She yells struggling then was pulled out and looks up cough out water
"Crookedstar... Thank you but Ravenpaw! He's fur is to slick the water can easily pull him under more"
"Enough talking someone save him!!!!!"
Dustpaw yells. Crookedstar heads back to water and dives in causing Blackfoot to hiss
"STAY AWAY FROM HIM YOU MOUSE BRAIN!!!"
Crookedstar lands on the floor of the water, his eyes widen searching then sees a black burr in the water moveing frantically.
'Ravenpaw!'
He thought swimming towards him and yes it was Ravenpaw! Ravenpaw was being pulled away and he could tell he ran out of breath and was trying to hold on. Crookedstar quicken and catches up with him but realized Ravenpaw was unconscious!
'No! Dear Starclan no!!!!!"
He quickly took hold of his next and swimmed as fast as he could. His body being out will start breathing by itself and that will easily cause him to drown. Crookenstar burst aout of the was holding Ravenpaw as high as he could, pulling him towards the land and yells
"MEDIC!!!! WE NEED A MEDIC. PLEASE!!!!!"
...........
Littlepaw comes through. He might not be the age of an apperentice but he has the knowledge of one.
"Quickly push on his stomach! I'm to small to put enough pressure on it!
Crookedstar did so and as hard as he could
"Dont break his bo---"
Water comes pouring out of his mouth and nose. Everybody was horrified and relieved at the same time but.....
"He's not waking up..."
Greypaw said in a shaking voice
"Is he dead?!"
Little cloud puts his ear to Ravenpaw's hear
"No... He heart is still beating and his breathing"
"Then whats going on?"
Crookedstar looks away
"His unconscious..."
"No... In a coma..."
"A coma"
"what's that?"
Cats started muttering
"A coma... It's like your asleep but worse... You dont wake up for awhile... But sometimes you do, other times... You dont wake up at all... It may even take moons!"
"Moons?!"
Tigerclaw yells
"Th-that cant be..."
Bluestar says softly
"I-if only I could swim I could have saved him!"
Crookedstar licks her head
"Dont beat yourself up.."
Bluestar smiled
"I try..."

"How... Dare...you..."
Everyone looks at Blackfoot who climbed out of the water which dripped from his white and black pelt falling onto the hard t see dark grass.
"He... was mine... to have but no. You all didn't listen to me now look at him his knocked out because of you!"
Blackfoot steps sloser to everyone Crookedstar hissed as Blackfoot's claws unhinged
"You better say over there!"
Bluestar snapped.
"He was mine to begin with..."
He hissed stepping closer
"And he should be mine to end with"
He waved his claw in the air as thunder struck down hard as he was tackled to the ground by Brokenstar. His teeth sunk deeply into Blackfoot's neck. Blackfoot struggled and clawed at Brokemstar but his mind started to slip away as dead pulled him in soon his body went limp and the thunder storm in the sky slowed as the sky started to clear.
"Starclan has been relieved of stress..."
Bluestar said with a slite smile then looks down at Ravenpaw
"D-do we bury him?"
Graypaw said with a shaking voice.
"No."
Said Littlepaw
"Keep him in the medicine den and hope he will wake up...."
"And if he doesn't?"
Longtail asked
"....bury him..."
The med cat said slowly shaking.
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Welp that's done... Anyways School started so yeah...