First of all a big thanks to all the readers who supported my idea.

I read all the comments and most of you want me to write a dark story. Well, let's be honest I am not very good in writing dark stories and the reason is I get confused while handling characters when it comes to dark stories. If you guys read In love with a criminal, then you may have an idea of Neil's character. Now I am confused if I will try to make this story dark then  his character may get spoil. So I will try to write a dark story but need a promise from you guys that you will give reviews regarding my work. As your reviews will help me in shaping the story.

I thought of updating the 1st chapter today itself in order to get your initial reviews regarding the plot  and when my exams will get over I will plan a proper track for the story.

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In an isolated place which is away from the city two gangs are standing opposite to each other. Aggression was evident on their faces, eyes showed no mercy. They all were ruthless and were shooting daggers to each other.

The leaders of the group were standing In front of their respective gangs pointing guns at each other.

Leader 1 - Release all the girls you have trapped. ( He says sternly.)

Leader 2 - You will say and I will follow your orders. ( He laughs sarcastically ).

Leader 1 - See I am dealing with you all patiently. Release all the girls as they belong to my men.

Leader 2 - You are saying as if your men love those girls. Those girls are only used for satisfying the physical desires of your men. Nothing else.

Leader 1 - Whatever it is. Release them.

Leader 2 - I won't, their families are waiting for their daughters, so I will not send them back to you assholes.

Leader 1 - Then let the battle begin.

Leader 2 - I am in. ( smirks ).

With that they all hovered upon each other like hungry beasts. They all were fighting for dominance.

Gunshots, screams, pool of blood these all things are very common in criminal world. If some other person will witness this scene then it will really give them goosebumps but here no one is ready to back off.

The leaders also started fighting with each other. In this fight Leader 2 managed to beat the hell out of leader 1.

The fight was going with full force and when leader 1 fell on the ground unconscious, some of his gang members comes to his rescue and take him in the car.

The leader 2 drove towards his mansion and released all the girls whom he hid in one of his secret passage. He made them sit in his car and started driving. The girls were very scared and were crying.

Leader 2 - Stop crying or else I won't spare you all. ( yelled on them )

The girls stopped crying and the man continued his driving.

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In an orphanage

A girl was dancing with the children. All were enjoying the rain and were smiling goofily.

A lady came from behind.

Lady - Oh god Avni, again you started your rain dance along with these naughty munchkins.

Avni - What's wrong in that ? Can't we dance ? Dance is an art, it's a soul, a person is incomplete without dance. ( She says dramatically )

Lady - Enough!! ( sighs ) come inside or else you all will get sick.

Avni - No, we won't. What say my gang ? ( excitedly )

Gang - Noooooooo ... ( they all teased the lady ).

Lady pouts and Avni giggles with the entire gang.

Lady - Okay then I will tell Neela about this.

Avni - No, you can't do this Neha aunty. I will come with you in fact we all will come. Come guys.

Gang - No.. ( pouts )

Avni - That means you guys don't want to have pancakes especially made by me.

Gang - We are going inside. ( excitedly )

Avni and Neha laughs and they all went inside.

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In car

Leader 2 - Damm !! This fucking rain. ( frustrated ).

Finally he stopped his car after sometime and saw a person who is standing there waiting for him. He blindfolded the five girls present with him and tied their hands with a rope and after that he locked the car and went outside for meeting the person waiting for him.

Leader - I did what you said. Now just let me be in peace DD.

DD -  Come on Neil, don't you feel good after rescuing these girls from your rival gang.

Neil - Are you serious ? You know cos of these girls my men have to fight those bastards. Two men have lost their lives and more then 10 men are injured. In case of emergency we need man power more than anything else and you are saying as if rescuing these girls from their den was an easy task. ( frustrated ).

DD - Neil, their families are really worried for them and when I got to know about them then I thought about you as only you can help me with this case and you did. Thanks bro. ( smilingly ).

Neil - Its okay DD, you always help me while coping up woth police matters so I can do this for you.

DD - What a friendship we both have dude. We both are childhood friends you are mafia king and I am policeman.

Neil - ( smirks ) Helpful friends you see.

DD chuckles. Neil took out the girls from his car and helped DD in making them sit in his car. They close the door of his car.

Neil - Don't let them see your face at this moment or else you will be in trouble as they will get to know that you are having contacts with mafia.

DD - Don't worry, I will manage the rest.

Neil goes from here and starts driving.

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Avni - Come on kids have your pancakes and milkshakes.

The kids were enjoying their delicacies as their favourite Avni di never disappoints them when it comes to enjoyment and food.

Neha - Stay here for tonight Avni.

Avni -  No aunty tomorrow I am having college, so I have to go.

Neha - But Avni, it is raining and how will you drive in night ? It's unsafe bacha.

Avni - Don't behave like Neela maa Aunty. I can manage after all I am a big girl.

Neha chuckles.

Avni - Okay then my naughty gang, I have to leave now.

Kids - ( together ) No di. ( pouts )

Avni - I will come here again, that too very soon. Don't worry. Come and give me your magical hug.

They all hugged her and she left for her home.

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Neil was driving and received a call.

Neil - Everything going well ?

Man - Sir, we managed to dominate but some of their men are missing and we tried our best to find them but are unable to do so.

Neil - No problem, keep a check on their action, I am coming back soon and provide proper treatment to the injured men.

Man - Yes sir.

The call ends.

Neil applied sudden breaks to his car when he saw the troop of goons  standing in the middle of the road with their weapons all ready to attack someone. He knew that they were the men of opposite gang. Neil took his gun and came out.

It was raining heavily and the criminals standing in the middle of an empty road were ready to fight for their lives.

Five men came forward and attacked Neil with chains and knives but Neil dodged them and caught hold of 2 men, he started beating them and then he killed them. He was fighting with a group of 20 goons alone and was giving a tough fight. Almost every man was bleeding profusely due to his brutal attacks but he showed no mercy on them. When all the men fell unconscious on the floor, Neil threw them all in a valley beside the road, a goon came from behind and hit Neil's head with an iron rod, Neil's head was spinning badly due to the attack but he somehow managed to straighten himself and shot the goon with his gun, the goon fell into the valley but Neil was in very bad state. His bleeding wasn't stopping and he can't call anyone from his gang as he is not in the condition to do so. He fell on the road unconscious while his head was bleeding badly.

After sometime a car came there and the person driving the car applied breaks as she saw someone  lying on the road. She came outside and saw a person who was bleeding badly was lying unconscious on the road.

( No brownie points for guessing that the girl is Avni.)

Avni - Oh god !! Who is he ? ( scared ).

She went near him...

( Here comes the first update. Do drop your views.)

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