Alright welcome to the second Q&A, hosted by a 16-year-old girl stuck in quarantine! Let's get this started!

1. I adopted it for two reasons. First, I liked the original story and wanted to continue it. I loved the concept. And second, I was an edgy fan with too much time on her grubby, 14-year
-old hands.
2. Yes, absolutely. The entire ending got remodeled in a sense. Michael never visited his mother's grave, for instance. Also, there was a lot more added that made this story darker than needed.
3. There's a lot of things I would change, but my biggest pet peeve is putting "William moaned as he climbed out of bed." Gave off a huge innuendo that wasn't intentional.
4. Oh thank you, I'm trying to improve it!
5. The rewrite will omit a lot of parts that were unnecessary. However, there was some confusion around the ending hat I was to clarify now. Michael NEVER learned of Chris's suicide, despite half of his soul being Akumu. Michael became the dominant entity, therefore most of Akumu's memories were lost. Therefore, he believes Chris ended up in Heaven where he could rest with his family by his side.....excluding his father, of course. I find it better that Michael didn't know Chris went to Hell for ending his own life. Ignorance is bliss, as people have said.

So anyway the rewrite will have its first chapter published later today! Be sure to check it out as the entire story has taken a turn for the better. I also chose to incorporate a lot more backstory into the chapter to set a preface for the story ahead! Thank you for following this story to its conclusion and rebirth!