Members of Unit 13 and Changes to Revelation story

A/N - (Suggested by dcraus123 ) Okay. I will start with the introduction of my version for Unit 13, using the characters I made for the game. I'll start with the characters I'm using, and then talk about the changes.)

Name: Takao Yamamoto
Voice actor: Yuri Lowenthal (Eng) and Ryota Osaka (Jp)
Ethnicity/Race: Japanese/Human
Appearance

Class: Samurai
Bio: The leader of Unit 13 and the heir of the Yamamoto industry. An cocky and over the top young man who dreams of becoming a hero since he was a child and hates being bound by the responsibility of being an heir. Most likely to make a fool out of himself.
Born on 3/12. (12th of March)

Name: Hansuke Tsosie
Voice actor: Joe Zieja (Eng) and Yuki Kaji (Jp)
Ethnicity: Half Japanese-Half American/Human
Appearance

Class: Agent
Bio: Takao's best friend and the team's reliable hacker. He is a laid back and extremely sociable with others and very good with technologies, though extremely sensitive about comments of his appearance. Has monophobia (Phobia of loneliness).
Born on 9/16 (16th of September)

Name: Greta Schmidt
Voice actress: Cherami Leigh (Eng) and Miyuki Sawashiro (Jp)
Ethnicity: German/Human
Appearance

Class: God Hand
Bio: Maid who works for the Yamamoto industry and serves both Takao, and Yoshio. Has an air of mysteriousness about her despite her social nature and doesn't like talking about her past. Has a habit of putting sleeping pills into foods.
Born on 12/25 (25th of December)

Name: Albert Clarke
Voice actor: Doug Stone (Eng) and Tomokazu Sugita (Jp)
Ethnicity: English/Human
Appearance

Class: God Hand
Bio: Butler of the Yamamoto industry and an retired war veteran. Has a calm and loyal demeanour, but has a strong sense of a commander who has the most capable of leading, but let's his master lead the team. The best chef of the group.
Born on 8/7 (7th of August)

Name: Yoshio Yamamoto
Voice actor: Tara Strong (Eng) and Daiki Yamashita (Jp)
Ethnicity: Japanese/Human
Appearance

Class: Duelist
Bio: The younger brother of Takao. He is a joyful and hyperactive young boy who loves monsters and fighting alongside with others despite their protests due to his young age. The most likely to break things.
Born on 5/18 (18th of May)

Name: Namma
Voice actress: Xanthe Huynh (Eng) and Aki Toyosaki (Jp)
Ethnicity: Atlantean/Lucier
Appearance

Class: Fortuner
Bio: A former resident from the private militia who joined Unit 13. She is extremely quiet and doesn't enjoy meaningless conversation, but has a heart of gold and deeply cares for her allies. Easily emotionally attached to others.
Born on 2/17 (17th of February)

Name: Lei
Voice actor: Liam O'Brien (Eng) and Hiroshi Kamiya (Jp)
Ethnicity: Atlantean/Lucier
Appearance

Class: Rune-knight
Bio: A minor noble who moved to the private militia. He is a high maintenance and posh young man who strongly believes it is a noble's duty to protect the commoners, even though he is rather flirtatious at times. Hates dragons the most out of the team.
Born on 6/20 (20th of June)

Name: Kayi
Voice actress: Janice Kawaye (Eng) and Nao Toyama (Jp)
Ethnicity/Race: Myloian/Human
Appearance

Class: Mage
Bio: A mage from the Federated states of Mylo in Eden. She is rather rude and snarky, but also extremely intelligent and serious about her role as a mage, as well as the situation in hand. The workaholic of the team.
Born on 4/10 (10th of April)

Name: Mischa
Voice actress: Edel Riegal (Eng) and Maaya Uchida (Jp)
Ethnicity: Aizhenian/Lucier
Appearance

Class: Banisher
Bio: A novice soldier from the Aizhen Empire. She is rather naive and cheery, but a bit shy young woman who is loyal to a fault, but acts harsh and serious when necessary. The worst at handwriting.
Born on 10/30 (30th of October)

That's all I could say. As for the changes in the Revelations story.

- The characters has a somewhat different personality in the story. Their core personalities are the same, but added more to give a bit more depth. I also change Corrin's hair to black to match with her mother (Corrin is female in this)

- Azura doesn't know anything about Valla. In fact, they jump out of the bridge because they were surrounded by both soldiers who were chasing after them and didn't have a choice in the situation. She thought she was just a Nohrian princess kidnapped by the Hoshidians, just like Corrin thought she's an Hoshidian princess kidnapped by Nohrians.

- The one to guide the heroes isn't some random kid (Forgot his name). It would be the human side of Anankos, meaning Selena, Laslow and Odin would have a bigger part of the story.

- NO CHILD UNITS OR DEEPREALMS SHIT! I'm sorry, but that is stupid af! In Awakening, it's okay, but in Fates... no... just no. It just makes the Fates characters look bad. I mean, what kind of parent would abandon their child during time of war, and only come back once they grow up? Like... WTF!? Sorry, I just need to rage it out. I love the child units as characters (Except Caeldori, Asugi and Rhajet), but they will make no appearance to the story.

- I was originally going to scrapped the curse entirely, but decide to change the curse drastically. Instead of the curse affecting the outsiders who spoke it's name, it would be the locals who are forced to become slaves under Anankos' madness where they can't go out of Valla, and if they die, they become mindless, invisible monsters who can only been seen by the people who either step into Valla or born in it.

- Hoshido and Nohr got into the cycle of hatred because of Sumeragi refusing to help Nohr, which anger Garon greatly and killed him. This causes the Hoshidians to believe Garon is a evil tyrant, while the Nohrians believe the Hoshidians are selfish bastards who wouldn't help others.

- Mikoto doesn't die at the beginning, and Garon isn't possessed. Instead, Mikoto was left unconscious and Corrin thought she died, when in reality, she's still alive. While Garon is more of the callous side, but doesn't threaten his children 24/7, in fact, he's more loving and understands why Corrin decides to leave them, while Mikoto is more forceful, wrathful and felt betrayed by her child. Garon is still a conqueror, but rather than greed, it's for the survival of his people. And Mikoto, while beloved by her people, is hated by foreigners who sees her as a coward and a soft hearted fool.

I was inspired by BlazingKnight50's video called How to improve Fire Emblem Fates story, so a lot of the ideas are from there. I am open to other ideas if you want to.

I wouldn't update this until around 100 views by Wattpad standards. Since I know Dragon Code is an underrated game, so I try to keep an realistic mindset. I hope you guys are okay with the changes, and if you do, leave a comment of any ideas you might had, and I'll take a look if it's possible to fit in, or not.

I hope you guys enjoyed it, and have a good day! Aqua out!

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