Aw what, no V3? Oh well. Um, possible spoilers.

Dr1: who sayaka attempts to lure into Makoto's room to kill. Seriously why did she think that she would succeed in killing Leon? Anyways, it would have been cool to see her execution play out and see Leon survive a little longer.

Sdr2: I actually like a lot of this game, and though my mind is telling me to say that I should change chapter four my heart is saying it's perfect the way it is also your obedient servant just came on frick kaiajavshksksksja
I don't think I'd change anything here.