Its Here Everyone, Its Time I redo the story and it will get Finished, I only own my OC So Enjoy.

Heavy breathing is heard as everything was black, the sound of ringing in the ears doesn't help the slightest of anyone's mind, something must of happened to have such a beating headache. But the lower half of the body doesn't feel like its there at all, I mean sure, we look down and see your feet all, and yes they dont have a feeling in your body, but there's that moment (in war movies, and in war it self) when all of a sudden your feet don't feel like their there anymore (maybe because they were blown off, or you have shrapnel in your thigh and your entire body is holding in all that pain, inside of you just so that you don't scream in agony. Not in this case.

"charlie." A voice was heard it was barley hear able but I swear I heard a name.

"Charlie." Now the voice was a little louder than before and alot more hear able, it was a female voice, strange whats a female voice doing here, then as if a controller has been plugged everything becomes very clear, very red, and very hot, "Charlie Come On Bro We Need To Get You Outta Here!!!" The voice came from a dog, a Dalmatian, she was slender, teenage, had very long ears (one looked like it was cut with a knife) she had black like stockings on her feet that reached above her paws to her ankles, and had three spots right under her eyes, but she was also covered with soot, and cuts all along her body, "come on Bro Get Up." She yelled as the intense heat was felt, having trouble the Dalmatian named Dolly swooped underneath him and held him up.

The fire, the smoke its all in his face, then the memory's started to come back, the fight, blood... it was all coming back.

"D-Dolly." The man said very weakly.

"Come on Charlie I'm not Giving up on you." Dolly said as she kept him on his feet as they moved througj the fire engulfed hallway.

"Did... Did everyone make it... make it out?" He asked her.

"Everyone got out, Da-Vinci didn't want to leave you behind so I told her I'll get you." Dolly explained as they room tilted just a bit causing Charlie to slid into the wall with a large thud.

"Ow." He winced in pain as he grabbed the side of his body only to reveal his hands to be covered with blood, "Oh shit thats blood, thats alot of my blood." He said as he looked down at Dolly who was having trouble holding him up.

"Come on big guy lets get you outta here." She grunted as she pushed the weaken Charlie to move forward. As they reached the end of the hallway, a large opening was revealed along with a leaning car that was smashed up it looked old, like a 60's car.

"I knew the old girl could do it." Charlie joked as Dolly grabbed the two ropes that hanged in front of them and started to tie it around him.

"DYLAN YOU SET?!" She yelled up to the opening.

"We're set Doll, Alright Everyone PuLL!" The voice echos down to Charlie and Dollys ears. Charlie smiled as he hears his new family,

[Charlie's thoughts]
'This family... this amazing family I never want to trade for anything else... they will risk everything to have me with them.'

"Hold on to the rope Charlie, the sooner we get out of here the better." Dolly said as she grabbed her rope and and started to climb up. Charlie tries to climb as well but his weaken body wasn't much help to him as he gave way to the pain. He closes his eye thinking of everything... the loving warmth of home, the hot meal he'll, the love of his girlfriend, the sound of the rope splitting, the laughter... wait rope?

Charlie looked up to witness that his rope had snapped, and started to plummet down to the firey depth of hell but before he went far, his rope was snatched up. Dolly grabbed his rope and was now holding him by a thread. Charlie looked up to see her struggling to hold onto bothe hers, and Charlie, since Charlie was alot more heavier than anyone else in the family.

"I'm not letting you go that easy." Dolly grunted as she held onto the ropes but her grip was starting to give way... Dolly and Charlie looked on at each other with dire looks as Charlie looked around.

Now your probably wondering who is that, and why is a Dalmatian risking her life for me, well you better have a good seat cause I got a story to tell you... Im Charlie... Charlie Osborne, and this is my story.

8 Months Earlier, May

A young man came walking out of the Airport he has on a pair of black combat boots, baggy blue jeans, a white tank top underneath a camo flak jacket with all kinds strips and badges, he has grayish green eyes, along with a small stubble, his hair in the front was spiked up but the back was smooth out which was covered by a black hat with sunglasses on top of the. He had two suitcases both looked very heavy. As he waited on something his eyes wonder off at the beauty of London, such a rich and vast amount of history in this place, his thoughts were interrupted by the sound of a horn of a black taxi. Charlie waved the driver and sure enough he pulled in.

"Where you heading mate?" He asked.

"Camden Town sir and step on it." He said as he put his things in the back of the trunk, when his phone started to ring.

"Hello... oh dad hey... huh oh yeah the trip was smooth sailing... huh the Dogs..? Haha I'll take care of them I promise..." Charlie started to lean in, when he fell flat on his butt, the driver took off without him, "HEY WAIT... Oh forget it... look dad I'll call you back... alright love you bye." He ended the call he sighed as he look at the sky, "guess I'll be sight seeing for awhile." Charlie joked as he started to walk in the direction of his new house.

Camden Park

Ahh the Camden park, such a beautiful place to have good relaxing day, a gorgeous fountain, green grass as far as the eyes could see, peace and quiet.

*CRASH*

"PARK!"
"PARK!"
"PARK!"

Well almost quiet... a tsunami of black and white puppies bursted through the gates, like a rocket they ran into the grass, two dogs however came behind, one was Dolly, and the other another Dalmatian, he was slender, with a very noticeable pattern on his right ear, it looked like the Canis Major (a Consolation) he had on a red dog collar with a silver Star on it.

"Oh come on Dolly you said you were gonna help me with the chores." The Dalmatian whined at Dolly who just rolled her eyes at him.

"Oh come on Dylan, I did help."

"Blowing up the Vacuum and letting all the dust out isn't helping."

"Oh well my bad." Dolly laughed while Dylan groan at her foolishness, "oh come on Dylan, that Devil woman is behind bars, will never see her again, just relax trust me its better if you do... see ya." She said as she took off on her skateboard to the skaing area.

"Relax huh, maybe thats what I need." Dylan said to himself as he walked to a certain spot and laid down.

"YO D-Dawg whats with the long face?" A fox asked as he sat next to him, he look like an ordinary fox, but he has a gold tooth.

"Hey Fergus I'm just trying to relax." Dylan explained to the fox who pondered.

"This about Dolly?"

"Wait how you know?"

"I can tell by your expression look just take a breather and chill, go with the flow..."

"Go with the flow... yeah I can do that." Dylan smiled as he laid there.

"There ya go, now if you don't mind I'm off to see Dolly have fun." Fergus took off to where Dolly was hanging out, to leave Dylan in peace.

Couple Hours Later

It was no use Dylan couldn't relax as he fumble and tossed himself around, but couldn't get comfortable.

"Sigh why does everything have to be so hard on me... I just wish that for one day... one day only, where someone else cares about the chores." As Dylan started to lay down a whistle tune was picked up by his ears as he looked around, there a man was whistling whiling looking around.

"Oh... man...look at all those puppies." Charlie said as she looked over a fence so many puppies for as far as the eyes could see, "man whoever has that many puppies is probably very tired." Charlie noticed a dog was staring at him, presumably curious of him, "oh hey there little guy." Charlie said with a soft voice as he crouch down to pet him, only for the dog to back away slowly, "oh no no im not gonna hurt you see." He put his hand out slowly with his palm facing up to let the dog sniff his hand which he did. As the dog sniffed his hand he lifted his hand over the dogs ears and started to scratch them, the dog went from alert face, to a very calm and relax look as his ears were being scratched.
As Charlie petted the dog he laughed as the dog started to pant, "well aren't you a good dog, I womder if you have a name." He said which the dog barked softly and pointed to his collar, "Oh your tags?" Charlie asked which the dog nodded, "may I?" He asked and was given the go ahead to look at it. Charlie flipped the star medallion over to reveal a echted name, "Dylan huh... well a handsome name for a handsome dog... Oh speaking of tags, I have tags too." Charlie showed his dog tags to Dylan who seemed surprised, "see... the names Charlie "Bullseye" Osborne... listen I'd love to stay but I have to get my stuff into my new house." Charlie explains but Dylan whimpered sadly knowing the he had to go, "awww don't be sad listen I'll make a deal with you, if I ever see you again here, I'll play with you okay?" This made Dylan alot more happy as he barked, "Alright alright Dylan I'll see you around seeya." Charlie waved as he ran to his house.

"What a nice Human." Dylan said as he turned around, only to be met with eyes, lots of eyes, especially Dolly who seems to be trying her best to hold herself together, "what?" Dylan asked which broke Dolly completely as she burst into a ball of laughter.

"A Handsome name For a Handsome dog oh what a riot." She laughed while Dylan groaned.

"Oh come on Dolly he didn't seem so bad, just wish we had a human like that..." Dylan said which Dolly pouted.

"Dylan we don't need a human, we are fine on our own." She said.

"Oh I dont know Dolly."
"It be really nice to have one." Two pups remarked they were the typical pups but had interesting patterns, one had a marking going from the tip of her nose to the topic her head almost like a exclamation point, the other had a bandit-like mask, there names are Dizzy and DeeDee.

"Oh come on you two sigh...whatever we gotta get home anyway, DINNER!!" Dolly yelled as the tsunami of puppies wizzed past them to the house.

"Sigh." Dylan sighed as he ran after his large family, still wishing that a human who could follow directions could be with them.

With Charlie

Charlie was amazed by the house, not only was rather small, but it was painted with multiple colors, like a painter couldn't make up his or her mind of what the house should be.

"Welp if this is the outside, I hate to see whats it like inside." Charlie said to himself as he headed up to the front door, and noticed that there was a pad with a paw print on, "huh interesting a bio pad lock..? Interesting..." he said as he searched for the envelope that had the key in it and started to unlock the door.
As Charlie entered the house with his suitcases and was amazed of how it was, it wasn't a bad house, in fact it was very clean, which is very strange... as Charlie looked around the house and noticed there was alot of dog bowls, and toys, "huh whoever own this house had a alot of dogs." Charlie said to himself as he looked around the house more, "I think I'd better check upstairs." He said to himself as he started to head up stairs.
As he head upstairs he noticed that there was alot of paw prints everywhere.

"Man there's alot of dog prints everywhere... how many dogs did they have." Charlie asked himself and noticed a door that doesn't seem touched, he was close to the door when he overheard the front door closing...

Curiosity took over as Charlie started to head downstair.

"Hello..? Who's there..?." He asked as he got a clear vision of who is at the front door, which turned out to be... Dylan... the dog looked more confused than Charlie did, "wait Dylan...what are you doing here..." Charlie felt something on his foot which was a rope that seemed to be misplaced, "oops almost tripped." He joked as he stepped over the rope, "I'll ask again what are you doing..."

BONG*

Something hit Charlie in the back of his head and down he went, out like a light.

End Chapter

Thank you all so much for enjoying this chapter, Ik its a little different than the original, but I'm calling the original a rough draft and alot of people liked it, so consider this the final draft... thank you so much for reading and I hope to see you next time.