Topic 1: Tell me about your family

 Chào các bạn ! 

Các bạn cùng vi ết ch ủ  đề "Tell me about your family" này nhé.

 Trong ch ủ  đề này các b ạn hãy kể v ề gia  đ ình mình: g ồm m ấy ng ười ,tu ổi tác ,ngh ề nghiệp

,tính tình …c ủ a từ ng người ,các bài vi ết cũ ng có độ dài nh ư  l ầ n tr ứ oc .Chú ý tránh những

lỗi t ừ  v ự ng và ng ữ  pháp mà mình  đ ã nh ắc nh ở  

 Có thể b ắt  đầu là :There are (four) people in my family…..

Một s ố t ừ  v ự ng để các b ạn tham khảo :

QUAN H Ệ  GIA  ĐÌNH 

Grand mother : Bà n ội ,ngo ại 

Grand father : ông nội, ngo ại 

Grand parents : ông bà 

Parents : cha m ẹ 

Grand son : cháu n ội ,ngo ại trai

Grand daughter  : cháu n ội ,ngo ại gái 

father in- law  : cha ch ồng ,vợ

mother in- law : m ẹ ch ồng ,vợ

Daughter : con gái 

Son  : con trai

Daughter in-law  : con dâu

Son in - law : con rể

Mother in- law : m ẹ ch ồ ng , vợ 

Younger sister : em gái 

Younger brother : em trai

Elder sister  : ch ị  

Elder brother  : anh trai

Brother in-law : anh ,em r ể  

Sister in - law  : ch ị  ,em dâu 

cousin  : anh em h ọ ( con củ a cô, dì ,mợ ,thím

..)

Nephew :cháu trai ( con c ủ a anh,ch ị , em )

Niece :cháu gái ( con củ a anh ,ch ị  ,em )

aunt : cô ,dì ,mợ, thím 

uncle : chú ,bác ,cậu 

step mother : m ẹ k ế  

step son  : con riêng (trai)

step daughter  : con riêng (gái)

Half brother : anh em cùng cha khác m ẹ,

cùng mẹ khác cha 

Half sister :ch ị  em cùng cha khác m ẹ ,cùng mẹ khác cha 

M ỘT SỐ  NGH Ề  :

Engineer : kỹ s ư

Architect  : ki ến trúc sư nurse : y tá 

pilot  : phi công 

plumber  : th ợ s ửa  ống n ước 

carpenter : th ợ mộc 

Electrician  : th ợ  đ i ện

Director : giám đốc 

Vice director : phó giám đốc 

barber  : th ợ h ớt tóc 

Hair dresser : th ợ u ốn tóc

Manicurist : th ợ làm móng 

policeman : công an (nam)

butcher : ng ười bán th ị t 

house wife : n ội tr ợ 

house maid  : ng ười giúp vi ệc nhà 

Journalist : nhà báo 

singer  : ca sĩ  

Farmer : nông dân

Tailor : th ợ may

Goldsmith : th ợ b ạc 

Draper : ng ười bán qu ầ n áo 

Musician  : nh ạc sĩ 

Watchman : b ảo vệ 

Saleman (woman)  : ng ười buôn bán (n ữ)

M ỘT SỐ  MẪU CÂU ÁP DỤNG :

He works as  a doctor in Cho ray hospital: 

ông ta  làm  bác s ĩ  ở BV Chợ R ẩ y

At the age of seventy ,my grand father still

looks hale : ở tuổi  70 ông tôi trông v ẫn còn

tráng ki ện 

My family have four persons, my mother, my father, my brother and me. Both my mother and my father are a teacher. She is teaching in high school. She teach es chemistry. She is a gentle and righteous mother.

She is interested in her children's studying.She always  gives me some useful advice in my life. My father

isn't teach, he work as an officer in the primary school. He is very strict. He always complains when my

brother and me make a mistake.My parents are both the same age, 49 years ọld My brother is a

student.He is 22 years old.He has just left school. Now, he is finding hi s job. His speciality is enviroment

science.He is very friendly and kind .Finally , i am a student. I am 19 years old. I am outgoing and have

my ambition.This is some information about my family.

Bài sửa củ a  wellfrog My family have  has four persons people , my mother, my father, my brother and me. Both  of  my  mother

and my father  parents are  a teacher teachers  

cha m ẹ s ố nhi ều ph ải thêm  s  vào  teacher

 .  She is teaching My mother teaches in a high school. She teaches chemistry.

 Hai câu này nên tóm lại là : 

My mother teaches chemistry in a high school.

 She is a gentle and righteous mother. She is  interested in her children's studying always concerned

about our study 

 be interested in  : thích 

be concerned about : quan tâm, lo l ắng 

 .She always gives me some useful  advice in my life. My father  isn't teach, he work  works as an officer in

the a primary school. He is very strict. He always complains when my brother and  me I  make a mistake.

 ch ủ  t ừ ph ải dùng  I  

 My parents are both the same age, 49 years ọld ;  My brother,who is 22 years old, is a  student  graduate 

.He is 22 years old.He has just left school. Now, he is  finding  looking for  his job. His speciality is

enviro n ment al  science.He is very friendly and kind .Finally , i I  am a student. I am 19 years old. I am

outgoing and  have my ambition  ambitious .This is some information about my family

 Student : là sinh viên còn  đ ang học  đại học ,còn nế u  đ ã ra tr ường r ồi thì dùng :  graduate 

find  : tìm th ấy 

looking for  : tìm kiếm ( chưa th ấy )

 Bài viế t củ a  Mr ZigZag

My family have five members. That are my father, my morther, my younger sister , my younger

brother and me. My familly lives at Phu Hoa town(Long Xuyên city) I am Phuong, I am 14

years old and I am a pupil. . First, My father is a teacher. Character's him is very happy.

However I am very fear father, but I love father. Next, My mother is noise , she has long hair

and black. Before I go to bed, she usually said :"Sleep well". I love my mother very much. Next,

my youger sister , she is 10 years old and she is excellent pupil of my primary school. From 7- 8

p.m, I usually teach her about exercise. Finally, My younger brother is 4 years old. He is very

much alive. I am very love my familly. With me ,family always is the assured support. If I have

one wish . I will wish " My familly aways is happy."

Bài sửa củ a  wellfrog My family have five members. That  They are my father, my morther, my younger sister , my younger

brother and me.  My familly lives at  We live in Phu Hoa town(Long Xuyên city) I am  My name is 

Phuong, I am 14 years old and I am a pupil. . First,  My father is a teacher.  Character's him is very happy 

He is a jovial man  . However, I am ve ry fear father fear him very much  ,but .  I love  my father. Next, My

mother is noise talkative  , she has  long hair and black  long black hair  . Before I go to bed, she usually

said  says :"Sleep well". I love my mother very much.  Next, my youger sister , she  is 10 years old and she

is  an  excellent pupil of in my primary school. From 7 - to 8 p.m, I usually teach her about some

exercises.  Finally,  My younger brother is 4 years old. He is very  much alive. active I  am very love my

familly very much  .  With For me ,family  always is  is always  the assured  a reliable  support. If I have

one wish . I will wish " My familly is aways  is  happy 

Giới t ừ chỉ  n ơi ch ốn em nhớ nh ư sau :

-Các n ơi ch ố n nh ỏ nh ư : sân bay ,tr ường h ọc ,khu mua bán .... thì dùng  AT 

- Các nơi ch ốn lớn từ làng ,xả , qu ận ,thành ph ố ,t ỉ nh ,thị  x ả ,nước ... thì dùng  IN 

I am + tên :  chỉ  đựoc s ử d ụ ng trong văn nói khi gi ới thi ệ u tr ực tiếp ,còn trong v ăn vi ết ,không ph ảo

gi ới thi ệ u tr ực tiếp thì dùng  my name is ...

Không phải di ễn tả s ự việc  theo th ời gian  nên không dùng :  first ,second  .. .Có th ể dùng :  the oldest

person in my family ....,ho ặc : the first person I want to tell you about is .... 

Chữ family  ch ỉ  có m ột ch ữ " L " thôi em nhé ! 

Character's him is very happy  : chà ! câu này sai nghiêm tr ọng đ ây nhé ! 

th ứ nh ất  đại t ừ s ở h ửu không dùng d ấ u"'s " :

the book 's him  (sai) 

his book ( đ úng ) 

the book  of him  (  đ úng )

th ứ hai là " happy " là tính t ừ ch ỉ  trạ ng thái nhấ t th ời c ủ a con ng ừoi chứ không ph ải  để chỉ  tính

tình ,mu ốn nói đến tính tình thì dùng  jovial  ( tánh tình vui vẽ )

Sau  However  ph ải có  dẩ u ph ẩy  

Fear là động t ừ ,không dùng v ới  to be 

alive : còn s ố ng !

active : hi ếu  động 

l ike very much  : rất thích 

không  đựoc dùng  very like  ,vì like  là  động t ừ mà  very  chỉ  đứng trước tính từ và tr ạng t ừ thôi 

Các trạng t ừ n ăng diễn nh ư :  always ,often  ...  đặt tr ứoc động t ừ thừ ong ,sau  to be

 Bài viế t củ a  peden

"There are 7 people in my famil ỵ  My father is a good photoghrapher. He is very gentle and

boon. My mother is a home-maker.She cooks very well and she is always caring to everybody in

my family.I have an elder sister ,an elder brother and a younger sister. My younger sister is a

pupil in class 9A1.My brother is a student ,he is studying in HB university.My sister graduated a

pedagogic college last year and now she is applying for a post.Another people is my

grandmother,she is very old but she is still strong-minded. The last one is me. I am in the

eleventh grade and i am not good at English. I feel happy because i have a good home. I love my

family so much".

 Bài sửa củ a  thatsmygoal

"There are 7  seven people in my famil ỵ  My father is a good photoghrapher. He is verygentle

and boon. My mother is a home-maker.She cooks very well and she is always caring to  about

(We use CARE TO to talk about caring to do sth) everybody in my family.I have an elder

sister ,an elder brother and a younger sister. My younger sister is a  pupilstudent  in class

9A1.My brother is a student ,he is studying  in  at  HB => Don't use short form in Writing

university.My sister graduated a pedagogic college last year and now . Now  she is applying for a

post.Another people  person/ member  is my grandmother,she is very old but she is still strong-minded. The last one is me. I am in the eleventh grade and i am not good at English. I feel happy

because i have a  good home  =>Câu này ko ổn cho l ắm. Bạn nên sủ a là  Happy family . I love

my family so much".

Comment:

Bài viết c ủ a bạn khá ok. Như ng có 1 s ố điể m cần lu ư ý:

1. Không đượ c vi ết t ắt trong đ oạn văn

2. Không đượ c vi ết s ố, mà phải vi ết ch ữ 

3. ANOTHER + Singular Countable Noun(EG: another person)

4. Không nên dùng ngôn ng ữ  chat (VD: u =>you)

Bài sửa bổ sung c ủ a  wellfrog

My sister graduated a pedagogic college => My sister graduated from pedagogic college  

I am in the eleventh grade and i am not good at English.

=>Although I am in the eleventh grade ,I am not good at English.

ho ặ c : I am in the eleventh grade ;however,I am not good at English.

Bài sử a củ a  wellfrog

 Bài viế t củ a  Lê Như  Nguy ện

There are four people in my family:my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.My family

lives in Nhatrang city.My family has a establis hment which makes dry squid and beef.Both my

father and my mother work there.My father is very  strict.He likes to talk with his friends in his

free time.My mother is gentle and kind.She cooks very well.She likes listen to classcial

musis.She usually gives us some useful advices when we have problems.My father and my

mother always help the poor people and the oldster.My younger brother is studying at high

school.He is a smart pupil in class.At home,he is a taciturnity people.He likes listen to rock

music and plays games on computer.And the last one is me.I have just graduated from university

for 5 months.I am finding the job now.I feel very happy when I lives in my family.I loves my

family so much.

 There are four people in my family:my father,my mother,my younger brother and me.My family

lives in Nhatrang city.My family has a n  establishment which makes dry squid and beef.Both  of

my father and my mother work there.My father is very strict.He likes to talk with his friends in

his free time.My mother is gentle and kind.She cooks very well.She likes listen ing  to  classcial

musis  classical music .She usually gives us some useful advices when we have problems.My

father and my mother always help the poor  people  and the old ster .My younger brother is

studying at high school.He is a smart  pupil  student in class.At home,he is a  taciturnity people.

taciturn man  .He likes listening  to rock music and plays games on computer.And the last one is

me.I have just graduated from university for 5 months.I am  finding  looking for  thea job now.I

feel very happy when I live s  in my family.I love s  my family so much

 find  : tìm th ấy

look for : tìm ki ếm ( chư a th ấy )

Chủ  t ừ là  I  thì  động t ừ  không thêm  s nhé 

he is a taciturnity people : câu này có hai l ỗ i sai:

1.  a là s ố ít trong khi  people là s ố nhi ều 

taciturnity  là  danh t ừ ph ải  đổi thành  tính từ (  tacitur )  để đặt tr ước danh t ừ 

Học sinh cấp 2 trở lên dùng student Bài sử a củ a thatsmygoal 

Bài sử a bổ sung c ủ a Wellfrog

Bài viế t củ a  heo con lun  

there are six persons in my family,those are parents,three old brothers and me.although they live

in a house but everybody have a different personalit ỵ 

both father and mother are quiet,the oldest bother is very hot tempered,i always fear him when

he is angry,the orther and me are joill ỵ ,i love my family,they are friendly with people,we live in

a poor village but we always love together,now i  live sofar my family but i have never fogotten

day which i lived beside familỵ   

T here are six  persons people  in my family ,those  .Those =>nên chấm are parents  : three old brothers and

me. Although they live in a house but everybody  have  has  a different  personalitỵ (=>Ý bạn nói v ề tính

cách đ úng ko? Mình ngh ĩ  b ạn nên dùng chữ CHARACTER.) . Both father and mother are  quiet

reserved   .The . The  (=> nên ch ấm)oldest bother is very hot tempered,i  .I  always fear him when he is

angry  .The orther  other  and  me I I are [s][b] joill ỵ  jolly  .I  love my family,they are friendly with people

. We live  in at  a poor village but we always love  together  each other  .Now i  I ive  sofar far  my family

but  I  have never fogotten  never forget the days which i  I lived beside famil ỵ 

Comment:

1. Sau khi hết 1 ý, b ạn nên ch ấm. Câu v ăn bạn hơi dài.

2. Chữ "I"(tôi) luôn luôn vi ết hoa

3. Chữ đầu câu luôn viế t hoa

=> Đ ây là ý ki ến củ a mình v ề các lỗi c ủ a bạn.  

Although they we live in a house  but , everybody has a different personalit ỵ

Đ ã dùng although  thì không dùng  but n ữ a 

Gia  đ ình  đươ ng bao g ồm mình trong đ ó nên không thể dùng  THEY  mà ph ải dùng  WE 

the orther and me are joillỵ: câu này sai kinh kh ủ ng quá :l ỗi spelling :

orther->  other

joill ỵ ->  joll ỵ 

lỗi c ấu trúc :

Đ ã dùng the others là ý nói t ất cã nh ữ ng người còn l ại(trong đ ó có tôi ) ,nên không th ể

thêm : and me n ữ a ,cho nên câu s ử a thành :

the others are jolly 

those are parents,three old brothers  : câu này đổi thành :

They are my parents ,my three elder brothers  

Anh chị ,cha mẹ .... khi dùng ph ải dùng s ở  h ửu phía tr ước ,còn ch ữ  elder sao b ạn không

tham kh ảo gợi ý c ủ a mình ở  đề bài topic ?  

Bài sử a củ a metooyou 

Bài sử a bổ sung c ủ a  wellfrog

Bài viế t củ a  cadpig17   

My family is a normal one with four members: my parents, my younger brother and me. We live

in a small house in Hanoi. My father is a mechanical engineer. He's tough, but he loves us. Some

times he was unfair and made my mother angry.  Honestly, I don't like my father very much. I

love my mother. She's gentle and kind. She always solves every trouble in my family without

argueing. Particularly, she's so well at cooking  that I wonder how I can learn that from her. The

third member is my little brother. He's twelve years old. He likes only Pokemon games. And the

last one is me. I'm an undergraduate in NEU. My dream is getting a good job and earn a lot of

money. My family is my life, although sometimes I disagree with my father and argue him. And

I know we love each others.

My family is a normal one with four members: my parents, my younger brother and me. We live in a

small house in Hanoi. My father is a mechanical  engineer. He's tough, but he loves us. Some times 

Sometimes he was unfair and made my mother angry. Hone stly, I don't like my father very much. I love

my mother. She's gentle and kind. She always solves every trouble in my family without argueing 

arguing. Particularly, she's so well  good at cooking that I wonder how I can learn that from her. The third

member is my little brother. He's twelve years old. He likes only Pokemon games. And the last one is me.

I'm an undergraduate in NEU. My dream is getting a good job and earn a lot of money. My family is my

life, although sometimes I disagree with my father and argue him. And I know we love each others.

- Câu này: "Sometimes he was unf air and made my mother angry"  đúng nh ư ng nên sửa l ại là:

"Sometimes he is  unfair and  make my mother angry." Câu này nên  để  ở  thì hi ệ n tạ i vì miêu tả s ự thật,

hành động v ẫ n di ễ n ra th ường xuyên.

- Nên tránh vi ết t ắt trong v ă n vi ết, nên viết "He is tough", không nên "He's tough"

-  good at something: gi ỏi về cái gì  đó

Ex: He is good at math.

-  to be well at  thờ i  đi ể m nào đ ó

Ex: She is well at this time.

My dream is getting a good job and earn a lot of money

câu này liên từ and  phải nố i hai lo ại t ừ giống nhau :  getting  thì ph ải  đi  đ ôi v ớ i  earning 

=> My dream is getting a good job and earning a lot of money

argue him => argue with  him

we love each others. => we love one another .

không có  each others  mà ch ỉ  có  each other ,nh ưng mà ch ữ này dùng cho hai  đố i t ượng mà thôi,còn ba đố i

t ượng tr ở  lên thì dùng  one another 

Trên đây là nhữ ng l ỗi ng ữ pháp ,còn v ề cách k ế t hợ p các câu của bạ n vẫ n ch ưa có sự  k ế t nối liền lạ c ,lần

sau nh ớ  viế t cho li ề n lạ c hơ n nhé  

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  ourfamily 

I have a small family with three members, my husband, my son and I. The first one, my husband

is thirty-one years old, and he is one year older than I am. He is a construction engineer. He likes

his job and tries my best to work. Besides, he also loves our family, so he often helps me do

housework. He is a bright example for my son to follow.

The second one, my son is four years old, and he  is learning at a kingdergarten. He is really

stubborn, but he is so lovely, too. He can do some things to take care himself and help us. He

draws quite well, and he likes reading picture books.

Finally, I want to say that I love our family so much. I'm really happy to live with my husband

and my son.

I have a small family with three members, my husband, my son and I. The first one, my

husband, is thirty-one years old, and he is one year older than I am. He is a construction

engineer. He likes his job and tries  my  his best to work. Besides, he also loves our family, so he

often helps me do the housework. He is a bright example for my son to follow.

The second one, my son  ,is four years old , and he.He  is learning at a  kingdergarten 

kindergarten . He is really stubborn, but he is  also  so lovely , too . He can do some things to take

care  of  himself and help us. He draws quite  well, and he likes reading picture books.

Finally, I want to say that I love our family so much. I'm really happy to live with my husband

and my son.

Chủ  t ừ nào thì dùng s ở h ửu củ a ng ười  đ ó tr ước ch ữ  best  nhé

I  try  my best

She tries  her best

Take care of : ch ăm sóc 

Trong câu The first one, my husband is thirty-one years old  

The first one là ch ủ  t ừ  c ủ a  is , còn my husbandlà đồng cách danh từ  (cùng là ch ủ  t ừ) nên

nhất thi ết ph ải có  2 dấu ph ẩy phân cách 

C ần phân biệt gi ữ a  too  và  also  

Too : là c ũ ng (vậy) => giống như  ý tr ước  đ ó 

Also  : c ũ ng (thêm ý khác ngoài ý trước )

ex:He is nine : anh ta 9 tu ổi 

I am nine , too : tôi c ũ ng 9 tu ổi ( gi ố ng như  anh ta : 9 tu ổi )

He eats a cake 

He also  drinks milk (anh ta cũ ng u ống s ửa : ngoài  ăn bánh còn uống thêm sử a )

- Bài viết khá t ốt ,ch ỉ có m ột s ố  l ỗi nh ỏ nêu trên

Bài sử a củ a Tsuki 

Bài viết của  thanhkha 

There are four members in my family: my father, my mother, my sister, my brother and me. I am youngest sister, so

I am happy. My father is 49 years olad.He is a shoesm(th ợ  giày)…..He is a self-opinionated man but he love them.

My mother is 50years old.she is a house wife . At home my mother takes care of family carefully. All of working

she does. She cooks a meal very delicious. My sister is 28 years old and last year, she have married.She is a

personal assistant. My brother works as a doctor in General hospital.he is very young when he is 25 years old. And I

study grade 11 in Phan Chau Trinh high school. This is the my small family

-  I am the  youngest sister, so I am  ( happy )/   I am always spoiled by the others  

So sánh nhấ t ph ả i  đ i cùng v ớ i  the :  the + short Adj- est/  the + most + long Adj. 

Vì b ạ n là người nh ỏ  nh ấ t nên bạ n hạnh phúc; chỗ  này mình gợ i ý thêm  động t ừ  spoil;  be

spoiled by the others = b ạ n  đượ c nuông chìu b ở i nh ững người còn l ạ i trong gia  đ ình hehe 

- My father is 49 years ol dad .He is a shoe smmaker(thợ  giày)…..

- He is a self-opinionated man but he love s  themhis family/(all of) us. 

Đại t ừ nhân x ưng làm túc từ  them  ở   đ ây không rõ nghĩa, n ế u bạ n muố n nói chúng tôi ,vì trong

đ ó có b ạ n, thì bạ n ph ả i dùng us ho ặ c  all of us; ho ặ c bạ n cũ ng có th ể  nói là ông  ấ y yêu gia đ ình

củ a mình: loves his family, nhớ  chia  động t ừ cho ngôi thứ 3 s ố  ít.

- . sS he is a house - wife.

Nhớ  sau d ấ u ch ấ m phả i vi ế t hoa nha;  housewife = homemaker  là M Ộ T danh t ừ  đơn, nó đượ c

vi ế t dính liề n nhau chứ không tách ra. 

- At home my mother takes care of  the/herfamily carefully

Danh t ừ s ố  ít không đứng riêng lẻ  1 mình, b ạ n nên thêm mạ o từ  hoặ c tính từ s ở  h ữu  vào nha. 

-  All of working she does. <-- 

Câu này mình không rõ bạ n muố n nói gì, nế u nh ư b ạ n muố n di ễ n  đạt ý là mẹ  mình  đ ã làm hết

công việ c nhà bạ n có thể  vi ế t:  She does all the domestic chores (by herself). (nh ưng v ậ y thì

buồ n wa', ph ả i có ng ười share việ c nhà ch ứ ha) 

- She cooks  a meal very delicious meals/ cooks very well

Mẹ  n ấ u nh ữ ng b ữa  ă n rấ t ngon  ch ứ mẹ  n ấ u có 1 b ữa thôi sao? 

- My sister is 28 years old and last year, she  have married.

Hành động k ế t hôn  đã  x ả y ra &  đ ã kế t thúc   trong quá khứ  nên b ạ n dùng Simple Past, không

dùng Present Perfect; tr ạ ng t ừ  last year  nên đặt  ở  phía sau  động t ừ: she married/ got married

last year 

- My brother works as a doctor in  the  General hospital.

General hospital ở   đ ây có nghĩa xác  đị nh, dùng mạ o từ xác đị nh the  đ i kèm. 

-  hH e is very young when he is 25 years old.

Nhớ  viế t hoa sau d ấ u ch ấ m câu. Câu này mình hiể u là anh củ a bạ n rấ t trẻ  khi anh í 25 tu ổ i,

còn bi gi ờ  thì ... (r ấ t già) Nế u  đ ó không ph ả i ý c ủ a bạ n thì b ạn có thể  viế t là  He is 25 (years old)

and he is very young/ He is very young, just/only 25 

-  And I  studyam in eleventh/11th grade  11 in Phan Chau Trinh high school. 

Không b ắ t  đầu 1 câu bằ ng liên từ  and . Cái này mình sửa rấ t nhi ề u lầ n rồ i mà c ũ ng có bạ n bị

sai hoài, be in + ordinal number (số  thứ t ự) + grade

-  This is the my small family  -->  That is all about my small family.

Nhìn chung b ạ n còn hay sai nhiề u lỗ i l ặ t vặ t, lầ n sau nh ớ  reread l ạ i bài tr ước khi g ửi nha. B ạ n

cũ ng nên h ọ c thêm t ừ v ựng & c ấ u trúc câu  để có th ể  diễ n  đạt ý d ễ  dàng h ơn. Chúc nhanh tiế n

b ộ .

 Bài sử a củ a Tsuki 

Bài viết củ a  yencuong1981 

I have get married for two years . As a result, there are many people in my familly. I have

special respect for my parents. My father is often quick-tempered because he has high blood

pressure over the year. My mother is very beautiful and douce. They have just retired for four

months. My younger brother has just graduated National Economic University. He work as a

accountant of Viettel company. At the same time, he is preparing economical master exams. He

considers as a dynamic person. My parents in law are farmers. Inspite of extremly hard working,

they had brought up their offspring become the learned persons. I’m trying to get on well with

them. My husband is the youngest in his siblings. He is a manufacture director in pharmaceutical

company. He’s good at using tools to fix things or make things. At last, we hope that we will

welcome a new member in the near future.

- I have  getgot married for two years

Pre Perfect: have/has+ Past Part

-  (As a result ), there are many people in my familly. 

As a result  đượ c dùng để ch ỉ  h ệ  qu ả  c ủ a hành động x ả y ra tr ước  đ ó; nhưng hành  động trước

đ ó là  get married v ậ y là ch ỉ thêm có 1  ng ười & không nói rõ là s ố ng chung v ớ i  gia  đ ình chung

hay số ng riêng mà hệ  qu ả  là gia  đ ình  đông người thì không thuy ế t ph ụ c cho l ắ m. Mình nghĩ

b ạ n có thể nói là  I got married 2 years ago and since then we have lived with my parents .

As a result, ...

- My father is ( often) quick-tempered because he has high blood pressure over the year s

quick-tempered  là tính t ừ thể  hiệ n 1 ph ầ n tính cách không mang tính tạ m th ời, cho nên mình

quả  thậ t ch ưa từng thấ y ng ười ta dùng v ớ i các  tr ạ ng t ừ ch ỉ t ầ n su ấ t (often, frequently,

usually...). N ế u bạ n muố n di ễ n tả  việ c  đ ó là  t ạ m th ời do bệ nh gây ra thì có thể  nói: My father

gets angry easily because...

- My younger brother has just graduated from National Economic University.

- He works as a accountant of Viettel company.

- At the same time, he is preparing  for  his/theeconomical master exams 

Nế u bạ n muố n nói đến  thi  đầu vào thì có th ể  dùng  entrance exam; tra từ  đ iể n từ  economical

lạ i  đ i nhé   

-He  is  considersed as a dynamic person.

-  Inspite  In spite  of  beingextremly hard- working, they had brought  up their offspring  up to be

become the learned persons  well-educated people.

hard-working  là tính t ừ nên ph ả i có  động t ừ TO BE  đ i kèm nha. 

- My husband is the youngest  in  among  his siblings.

- He is a manufacture director in  a  pharmaceutical company.

- He’s good at using tools to fix things or mak e ing  things.

or là 1 coordinator n ố i 2  phrase/clause t ương đươ ng nhau nên khi đ ã dùng V-ing sau Prep at

cho  động t ừ  use , bạ n cũ ng phả i làm t ương t ự v ớ i  động t ừ  make  ở  v ế  sau.

-  At last, we hope that we will welcome a new member in the near future. 

Phía trên b ạ n không dùng t ừ liên k ế t câu, cu ố i cùng dùng thì quá  đột ng ộ t & c ũ ng chẳ ng mang

lạ i hi ệ u qu ả  gì trong vi ệ c hệ  thố ng ý tưởng.

Bài bạ n vi ế t khá k ỹ, các l ỗ i sai không đ áng kể  ch ỉ c ầ n cẩ n th ậ n hơ n là  đượ c. B ạ n nắ m khá

vững ngữ pháp &  đ ã sử  d ụ ng đượ c 1 số  t ừ v ựng đ áng kể   để diễ n  đạt ý, mình ngh ĩ b ạ n  đ ã vượt

trên trình  độ  beginner  r ồ i Th ờ i gian t ới bạ n nên họ c thêm các c ấ u trúc câu & viế t nhi ề u câu

ghép/câu phức hơ n --> higher level. Best wishes. 

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog và  B ổ sung c ủ a Conan Doyle 

Bài viết củ a  nangmai8 

My family is very happy, glad and have much smile.My family have five people.:my parents,

my oldest sister and my younger brothẹr .My father is sixty-five years old and my mother is fìty-

f ỉve years old this years. My father was a doctor.He was good doctor . He worked at 103

hospital.Beside, he is a wonderful father. He is working at home now. And my mother was a

teacher. She's at home now. Every day, she cooks, read a newspaper about the health. And they

retired five years ago. I fell proud of them .On free time, they always visit their friends.They

have a lot of the same like.For example, they like poem, to go to the cinema.very a lot of . About

my oldest sister, she is working ThanhSen's chemist. She is a chemist.She is twenty three years

old. She is a beautyful girl,she is a single. we have a lot of the same like. we like to go shoping,

to listen to music, and to sleep.

My younger sister is eighteen years old. He is a pupil at Phan Đ inh Phung school. although we

grew but we still occasionally hit

Bài viết củ a bạn có quá nhiều lỗi sai ngữ  pháp l ẫn cấu trúc ,ngữ  ngh ĩa ,n ếu  để v ậy mà s ử a

t ừ ng câu thì "nát" h ết .B ạn ph ải gi ớ i thi ệu theo thú t ự  : tu ổi ,ngh ề nghiệp .Còn các sự  kiện

thì ph ải theo quá trình th ờ i gian ,ch ứ  không t ự  nhiên vi ết cha đ ã làm bác s ĩ ,gi ờ  ở  nhà ,r ồi

nhãy qua nói là  đ ã về h ư u .Mà  đ áng lẽ ph ải vi ết là : đ ã về h ưu ,tr ứ oc đ ây làm bác sĩ ,gi ờ ở 

nhà .Chỉ có m ột ng ười ch ị thì không cần ph ải nói là chị l ớ n nh ất .câu kết lu ận về gia  đ ình

b ạn là m ột gia đ ính hạnh phúc nên đặt  ở cuố i bài vi ết thay cho l ờii k ết. Đ ã dùng although 

thì không dùng  but n ữa .Trong th ơpì gian r ảnh dùng : in s ỡ  h ửu  free time  

Glad : ch ỉ một tr ạng thái vui m ừng t ạm th ời ,không th ể dùng tả v ề tính chất củ a m ột gia

đ ình  đượ c 

D ưới  đ ây là bài tham khảo sau khi đ ã sử a lỗ i và sắp xếp lạ i ý 

My family has five people.:my parents, my elder sister and my younger brothẹr and

me.My father is sixty-five years old and my mother is fìfty- fỉve years old .Both of them

retired five years ago. My father used to work as a doctor in 103 hospital. He is not only a

good doctor but also a wonderful father .My mother used to be a teacher .Every day, she

cooks, reads a newspaper about health.In their free time ,my parents often visit their

friends.They have the same interests such as reading poems and going to the cinema .I feel

proud of my parents.My elder sister is twenty- three years old.She works as a chemist in

Thanh Sen Company.She is still single though she is a beautiful girl.I and she both like

listening to music,going shopping and ..sleeping ! My younger broth ẹr is eighteen years

old.He is a student of Phan  Đ inh Phung high school.Although we are grown-ups , we still

occasionally fight each other.In spite of that , my family is a very happy one.

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  LOVELYCATVT

In my family,there are six people:my father,my mother,old sister and two young

sisters.Myfather is very fun and good.He sometimes makes many funnies for us and give us

advices.He is a fisher.My father has two ships.How about my mother?She is very strick and

parental but she loves us very much.She often cooks meals very well and I admire parents.My

old sister is twenty-six year old.She is very fun,good and gentle.She often gives me money when

I go away.My young sister is a student.One is six year old,she begins to go to school and she is

very intelligent,the other is studying at the high school.Whenever my family gathers,we are very

happy.It is also the place when I am sad,tired and disappointed and return home. 

In my family,there are six people:my father,my mother,old sister and two young sisters  ,my

elder sister and my two younger sisters 

ch ị gái dùng :  elder sister 

em gái dùng :  younger sister

.Myfather is very fun  jolly  and good.He sometimes makes many funnies for us  tells us funny

stories  and give s us advices

không hi ểu ý bạn dùng make funnies  vớ i nghĩa gì ,advice  là danh từ  không đếm đượ c nên

không thêm s 

.He is a fisher man .My father has two ships.How about my mother?She.My mother is very

strick strict and parental but she loves us very much.She  often cooks  meals very well and . I

admire parents.

không nên tự  h ỏi nh ư  thế này : How about my mother?

cook well là chỉ b ản ch ất củ a con ng ư òi không th ể dùng  often đượ c  

My old  elder sister is twenty-six year s old.She is very  fun  jolly  ,good and gentle.She often gives

me money when I go away.My young sister is a student .One is six year old,.One of my

younger sisters is six year old  .She begins to go to school and she is very intelligent,the other is

studying at the   a high school student  .Whenever my family gather s ,we are very happy.It is also

the place  when I am sad,tired and disappointed and return home   I return to when I feel

sad,tired and disappointed

Family  v ừ a có th ể là s ố ít v ừ a có th ể là s ố nhi ề u tùy theo ý ngh ĩa .N ếu xem nh ư  một  đơn vị

thì dùng số ít ,còn xem nh ư  một t ậpthể thì dùng s ố nhi ều 

My family is  rich -> xem nh ư  một  đơn vị 

My family are eating -> xem nh ư  một t ập th ể

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  76076447

I ware very lazy writing ago. So I don't understand anything when I try to learn English. Tsuki said that: " I haven't

base of grammar". I thing that you told correct about me. But now, I know that writing is very important in learning

English. I try my best to write anything that I can do by English. I hope I can more study than I am.

My family have five members. My family is composed of my father, my mother, two my elder brothers and the last

one is me. The first person that I tell is my father, he was a surgeon (I have found "surgeon" in my e-dictionary), but

now he stays at home for relaxing with his wife. My mother was a doctor, too. She is younger than her husband.

She is a obstetric doctor.

My eldest brother is a obstetric doctor (like that his mother). He is thirty-seven years old. He was married in two

thousands years, his wife is a doctor, too. He is a teacher of Hanoi university of medicine. His family has a girl. She

is very active and beautiful She is seven years old and she is a student at primary Trung Tu school.

My elder brother is a constructor. He graduated for three years ago. He have just married, his wife is a constructor,

too.

Finally, I want to produce something about myself.

I have become an electric engineer, I graduated from HUT(Hanoi university of technology). I'm looking for a new

job. But I haven't found it. Two months ago, I worked for a mechanical and automatical company. But I don't like it

so much. So now I'm staying at home to learn English online and waiting for a new job.

I

ware  used to be very lazy writing ago  to write . So  ,so I did not  understand anything when I tried to learn English. Tsuki said that:

" I haven't base of grammar".

used to :  đã từ ng ( chỉ  hành  động trước  đây mà bây giờ  không còn nữ a)-> bây gi ờ  h ết l ười r ồ i -> vi ế t m ột bài dài ngo ằ ng

làm W s ử a muố n xỉ u luôn 

I  thing  think  that you told correct about me  What she told me is true .

Bạ n dùng  told correct  là sai vì  correct là tính t ừ  còn  told  là  động t ừ  thường 

But now, I know that writing is very important in learning English. I try my best to write anything that I can do  by  in  English.

Bằ ng ngôn ngữ  gì thì dùng  IN không dùng  BY nhé  

I hope I can more study than I am. 

chà câu này tối ngh ĩ a quá ,lạ i sai ng ữ  pháp n ữ a ,không biết ý bạ n là gì .

Cấ u trúc so sánh more...than là  ở  giữ a phải là tính từ  ho ặ c tr ạng t ừ  ,còn bạ n dùng  động t ừ  là sai r ồi .Mu ốn nói học nhiề u

hơ n thì dùng : study more than  

chắ c là ý bạn muốn nói học nhiều hơ n khã nă ng của mình ,như  v ậ y thì nên viết là :

I hope I will study more than I can

My family have  has  five members.  My family is composed of  They are my father, my mother, two my my two elder brothers and the

last one is  me. The first person that I  want to  tell  about  is my father, he was  he used to be a surgeon (I have found "surgeon" in

my e-dictionary), but now he stays at home for relaxing with his wife. My mother was is  a doctor, too. She is younger than her

husband. She is a obstetric doctor.

Nói về  ai dùng :  tell about  

Tránh s ự  l ập lạ i không c ầ n thiế t khi dùng :  gia  đ ình tôi g ồm...,gia đình tôi có  ...

dùng  used to + inf.  để ch ỉ  s ự  việc  ở  quá kh ứ  mà bây gi ờ  không còn  

My eldest brother is an obstetric doctor (like  that  his mother). He is thirty-seven years old. He was married in two thousands years 

got married two years ago, his wife is a doctor, too. He is a teacher of Hanoi university of medicine.  His family has a girlThey

have a daughter  . She is very active and beautiful. She is seven years old and she is a  student  pupil at primary Trung Tu school.

thousands years  ??? anh bạ n là ngừ oi hay thầ n thánh nhỉ  !? cưới vợ   2 ngàn nă m r ồi cơ  à ! 

phân biệ t gi ữ a : be married và  get married  

get married  ; là ngày c ưới vợ  còn  be married là tình trạng đ ã lập gia  đình 

I am married  : tôi  đ ã lậ p gia  đình ( ch ỉ  tình trạ ng của tôi hiệ n nay là không còn độc thân)

I got married in 2000 : tôi c ưới vợ  n ă m 2000 (năm mà tôi đám cưới ) 

My  The other elder brother is a constructor. He graduated  for three years ago. He have just  got married, his wife is a constructor,

too.

Finally, I want to p roduce  introduce  something about myself.

I  have become  am an electric engineer, I graduated from HUT(Hanoi university of technology). I'm looking for a new job . But  ,but  I

haven't found it. Two months ago, I worked for a mechanical and automatical  company .  But ,but  I  don't like it so much.  So now I'm

staying at home to learn English online and waiting for a new job

Đã dùng ago  thì không dùng  for  n ữ a 

tr ước  but  dùng d ấu phẩ y không dùng dấ u chấ m 

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  dreamlike_river

I have a happy familỵ  There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, my elder brother and me.We live

in Hanoi together.

My parent were soldier. My father is 66 years old. My mother is 60 years old. Now, they retire. My father met my

mother in the war at Truong Son forest. At that time, she was a volunteer and he was a her capital. They fell in love.

Three years laster, they got married. My father is a gentle, close-mouthed but very stern . My brother and me is also

afraid of him. My mother is a funny, good-natured and an asiduity. I proud on when everybody say that: I look like

my mothẹr

My elder brother is 35 years old. He is a programmer. He  is marriage. He is handsome and funny . When I was a

child, I followed him everywhere and he bought many cakes to me. I love him very much.

The last person in my family is me. I am a programmer. I am 25 years old. In my family, I'm always a little prince. I

love my famil ỵ

I have a happy familỵ  There are four people in my family: my  father, my mother, my elder brother and

me.We live in Hanoi together.

My parent were soldier. My father is 66 years old. My mother is 60 years old.  Now, they retired  soldiers.

My parent ph ải dùng s ố nhi ề u ->  My parents

Đã từng là quân nhân thì dùng cấu trúc  used to + inf. nh ưng nên tóm gọn câu l ại thành  retired

soldiers  : nh ững quân nhân đ ã về h ưu 

My father met my mother in the war at  Truong Son forest  during the war. At that time, she was a

volunteer and he was  a her capital  her commander . They fell in love. Three years la ster, they got

married. My father is a gentle, close-mouthed but very stern . My brother and me  is also are both  afraid

of him. My mother is  a  funny  jolly , good-natured and an asiduity assiduous . I  feel  proud  on  when

everybody say s that: I look like my mothẹr

không dùng a, an trước tính từ nhé

He is a gentle (sai )

He is gentle (đ úng)

He is a gentle man (đ úng)

proud  là tính t ừ trứ oc phải có  to be ho ặ c  linking verb (look, feel ..)

My elder brother is 35 years old. He is a programmer. He is marriage married. He is handsome and

funny  jolly . When I was a child, I followed him everywhere and he bought many cakes  to  for me. I love

him very much.

The last person in my family is me. I am a programmer. I am 25 years old. In my family, I'm always a

little prince  to the others  . I love my famil ỵ 

funny  : bu ồn cười -> có tính chê 

jolly  : vui nh ộn 

hoặc có th ể dùng : have a sense of humour / to be humorous  có tính hài hước  

Bài viết  ấ n tượng ,l ư u ý cách dùng tính t ừ -danh từ ,a ,an .N ế u cố g ắ ng tìm cách nối các câu cho suông s ẽ

hơ n thì tốt 

Bài sử a củ a Tsuki 

Bài viết củ a  ducanh2003 

My family

There are seven people in my family. We live in a suburb of a small city. I have two elder

brothers, a sister in law( she is my eldest brother's wife, her name Thinh), a lovely niece (a one-month baby). My parents retired however my mother still earns money as a sale woman in a

small market near our house. My first brother works in a tea company, he is a high level

electrician. His wife works for a foreign company in garment field, she is a worker. My second

brother is a engineer, he has an own workshop. He also sells electrical instrument, his business is

rather good and makes quite much money. One of my friends said that I am really happy when

having a such family. I love my family, my family always play an important role in my heart

and my life.

My family

There are seven people in my family. We live in a suburb of a small city. I have two elder

brothers, a sister in law( she is my eldest brother's wife, her name is  Thinh), a lovely niece (a

one-month baby). 

My parents retired, however , my mother still earns money as a sale s -woman in a small market

near our house

My first brother works in a tea company, he is a high level electrician. His wife works for a

foreign company in garment field, she  is a worker. My second brother is an engineer, he has /  an 

own  a workshop. He also sells electrical instruments , his business is rather good and makes quite

much money. One of my friends said that I am/was  really happy when having  a such  a  family. 

Dùng has r ồi thì không dùng  own  n ữ a, 2 t ừ  đó  đề u ch ỉ s ở h ữ u .

Bạn lư u ý l ạ i cách dùng  Reported Speech.  Ở  đây mình không biế t là b ạn  vô tình  hay  cố ý  dùng

present tense  cho  độ ng t ừ  trong  reported clause :  One of my friend said that I am... vì thông

th ường c ả  reporting verb (say) và  the verb in the reported clause s ẽ dùng  ở past tense. Tuy

nhiên, mình gi ả đị nh tr ường h ợp này b ạn muố n  nhấn m ạnh s ự  việc  đó vẫn còn th ật  trong  hi ện

t ại nên  đ ã dùng  present tense nên không th ể nói là b ạn sai 

I love my family, my family always play s an important role in my heart and my life.

Nhìn chung bài b ạn vi ế t t ốt, mình chẳng phải s ử a gì nhiều ngoài vài l ỗ i l ặ t vặ t mà mình tin là

nếu bạn xem kỹ  bài l ại thì sẽ không b ị sai. Gi ữ  v ữ ng phong  độ  nhe 

Bài sử a củ a thatsmygoal 

Bài viết củ a  LOVELYCATVT

In my family,there are six people:my father,my mother,old sister and two young sisters. My

father is very fun and  good. He sometimes makes  many funnies  for us and give us  advices =>

ADVICE. B/c ADVICE is an uncountable Noun)  Câu này nên sử a thành :  He somtimes

makes us laugh and give us some advice.hoặc  He sometimes tells jokes . He is a fisher.My

father has two ships.How about my mother?She is very  strick  strict  and  parental ???but she

loves us very much.She often cooks meals very well and I admire parents.My old sister is

twenty-six years old.She is very  fun  humorous too ,good helpful and gentle.She often gives me

money when I go away.My young sisters is  are students.One is six year old. She begins to go to

school and she is very intelligent. The other is studying at the high school.Whenever my family

gathers,we are very happy.It is also the place when I am sad,tired and disappointed and return

home.

Comment:

Bài viết c ủ a bạn còn mắc l ỗi nh ư:

1. Khi nói v ề ai  đ ó có khiếu hài h ước, ta dùng:

+sense of humor

EG: She has the sense of humor

+ ho ặc là: humorous (adj)

EG: She is very humorous.

*Tuyệt  đối ko  đ c dùng “ FUN” hay “FUNNY”  để diễn tả tính hài h ước. Chỉ dùng 2 t ừ  này

khi  đ i chung v ớ i câu chuy ện.

EG: a  funny  story.

2. Khi nh ắc  đến 2, 3…..tu ổ i tr ở  lên thì chữ  “ YEAR ” ph ải thêm “ S ” (Vì là s ố nhi ều)

EG: I’m 13 year s old

3. Trong bài viết bạn có câu:  He/ she is good . Qu ả thật mình ko hiểu bạn muốn nói đến  đức

tính nào. Nhưng n ếu bạn  đề c ập  đế n sự  có ích thì ph ải dùng ch ữ  “ Helpful”

EG: She/ he is very helpful.

4. Khi bạn nh ắc  đến các câu nói  đùa phả i dùng “ TELL JOKES”. 

*Note: Để d ễ s ửa bài cho các bạn hơ n, mình đề ngh ị, khi vi ết, các bạn có th ể ghi ti ếng việt

k ế bên t ừ  ti ếng Anh mà mình dùng. 

That’s all

Bài sửa củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a  nguyendieuthuy

my family have four person.They are my parent,brother and me.my morther and my father are

both tercher.My eder borther is a student in university'hochiminh citỵ And I am elearning in

economy university in Danang.My family are happy and funy.Now,my family have only two

person because I and my eder brother are living away from my familỵ But in the furter,we will

get to gather.We are happy and happy forever

my family have four personpeople .They are my parent parents , my brother and me.my

morthermother  and my father are both tercher   teachers.My eder elder  borther is a student in

[s]university'hochiminh cit ỵ [/S](có ph ải ý b ạn  đị nh viết "university in Ho chi minh city ") And I

am elearning learning in economy   Economic university in Danang.My family are happy and

funy [color="red"]funny[/COLOR ]( Ở  đ ây b ạn không nên dùng t ừ  "funny"vì t ừ này mang s ăc thái

ý nghĩa chê, ch ế giễu ).Now,my family have only two person people  because I and my eder elder 

brother are living away from my familỵ But in the furterfuture ,we will get to gather.We are

happy and happy forever

comment:

1. B ạn còn sai nhiều lỗ i chính t ả quá 

2. Câu "my mother and my father are both teacher "

Cách dùng t ừ  " both "

both  sth and sth 

both of whích /them

" them , which "  đạ i di ện cho hai vật

nên  ở đây b ạn ph ải vi ết là 

Both my mother and my father are teachers

Both my parents are teachers

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a  mtvn

Talk about your family 

There are five people in my family. I have a father, a mother, a sister, and a younger sister. The

first one is my father. He looks fastidious and  bad tempered. When I was young, I used to fear

him very much whenever I met him. But I love him now. My mother is a gentle and careful.

Although she is a woman, she isn’t good at cooking. Both of my parents are fastidious. We often

talk to my mother much than my father. My sister and younger sister look beautiful and lovely.

They’re shy when they meet the stranger. People say that I look like my father thanner.

However, some people say I look like my mother. And that make me happy

Talk about your family 

There are five people in my family. I have a father, a mother, a sister, and a younger sister. The

first one is my father. He looks fastidious and bad tempered. When I was young, I used to fear

him very much whenever I met him. But I love him now. My mother is a gentle and careful.

Although she is a woman, she isn’t good at cooking. Both of my parents are fastidious. We often

talk to my mother much  more than my father. My sister and younger sister look beautiful and

lovely. They’re shy when they meet the  stranger (  ở đ ây b ạn không nên dùng mạo từ  " the" vì

ng ười l ạ  ở đ ây không xác  đị nh. Bạn có th ể dùng m ạ o từ  " a" ho ặ c  để  " stranger"  ở d ạng s ố nhi ều

" strangers " . People say that I look like my father thanner . However, some people say I look like

my mother. And that make  makes me happy

comment 

1, Câu "  the first one is my father " bạn nên viết thành 

The first one I want to talk to you about is my father 

nếu bạn ch ỉ viế t " the first one  " câu s ẽ không  đủ  ngh ĩa 

2, Mình ngh ĩ ở câu "  Both of my parents are fastidious. We often talk to my mother much more

than my father ." b ạn có th ể thêm t ừ  n ối  để  câu hay hơn 

" Actually,both of my parents are fastidious.However,we often talk to my mother much more

than my father."

3, "  than" chỉ là mộ t liên t ừ  để  diễn tả  s ự  so sánh h ơn ho ặc  đứng sau các tính từ  so sánh h ơn 

Bạn có th ể viế t l ại thành

Some people say that I look like father more , while others say that I look like mother more ,

which makes me very happy

Bài bạn vi ết hay thật 

chúc b ạn thành công nhé 

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài sửa củ a wellfrog

Bài viết củ a  MChuc

My family

There are six members in my family. The first person is my grandmother. She is seventy five years old.

At that age, she still works all day. She says that if she doesn’t do something she will be ill. The next

ones are my parents. My father is older than my mother two years old. They are farmers. I’m proud of

their job. My father loves his daughter rather than hi s son. I think so because he never punished me when

I made mistake, but when my bother makes mistake, he is always punished. My elder brother is older

than I two years old and I’m older than my younger br other 2 years old. I’m the only girl in my family.

So I am always spoiled by the others. I like my elder brother very much, because he seems to be the best

friend of mine. He is always beside me when I am sad, always listens to me and shares with me

everything. 

That is my family. It is little but I love it all my life.

My family

There are six members in my family. The first person is my grandmother. She is seventy five years old.

At that age, she still works all day. She says that if she doesn’t do something she will be ill. The next

ones are my parents. My father is older than my mother two years old. They are farmers. I’m proud of

their job. My father loves his daughter rather than his son. I think so because he never punished me

when I made mistake, but when my bother makes mistake, he is always punished . My elder brother is

older than I two years old and I’m older than my younger brother 2 years old. I’m the only girl in my

family. So I am always spoiled  by the others. I like my elder brother very much, because he seems to be

the best friend of mine. He is always beside me when I am sad, always listens to me and shares with me

everything. 

That is my family. It is little but I love it all my life.all my famil ỵ

1,  câu " The first person is my grandmother" bạn nên thêm thành "The first person I want to talk to you is

my grandmother" 

t ương t ự nh ư thế b ạn có thể thêm thành ph ần  đị ng ngữ cho các câu sau 

2, từ "spoil " có ý ngh ĩa là làm hư  đứa trẻ b ằ ng việc nuông chiều chúng quá m ứ c

Cả gia  đình bạn  đều làm bạn hư  à 

nếu bạnn nói mang ý nuông chi ều bạ n có thể dùng từ "i ndulge","baby" hay"pamper"

so sánh hơ n có s ố l ượng thì số l ượng để  ở tr ước so sánh:

My father is older than my mother two years old 

=> My father is  two years old  older than my mother 

My elder brother is older than I two years old 

=> My elder brother is  two years old older than I

and I’m older than my younger brother 2 years old .

=> and I’m 2 years old  older than my younger brother 

Bình thường so sánh h ơ n dùng more ...than ,ch ỉ  khi nào có would  phía tr ước m ớ i dùng  rather than  

My father loves his daughter rather than  his son.

=> My father loves his daughter more than his son.

hoặc : =>My father  would love his daughter rather than  his son.

khi diễn tả thói quen không dùng thì quá kh ứ  đơn mà ph ải dùng thì hiện tại  đơn 

he never punished me when I made mistake,

he never punishes  me when I make a mistake,

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a  whitecat

Ther're four people in my family:my father,my mother,my elder brother and me.My father is

fifty years old,he's a director.He's handsome,good-natured,he can dances or plays guitar and

tennis.My morther is forty-seven years old,she's a B.O.M(Board Of Managerment).I'm very

admire my mother.Because she's very beautiful,gifted,she's teaches me a lot of good things.She's

the best in my eyes!My elder brother is nineteen ,he's a student.He's study at Inustry Infomation

Itermediate.He likes Game Online and plays it well.He swims very good.I'm thirdteen years

old,i'm a pupil.I can swim and love ocean so much!

I love my family so much!Because it always makes me in security and happy!

Ther're four people in my family:my father,my mother,my elder brother and me.My father is

fifty years old,he's a director.He's handsome,good-natured,he can dancesdance  or plays play the

guitar and tennis.My morther is forty-seven years old,she's a B.O.M(Board Of

Managerment).I'm very admire my mother.Because she's very beautiful,gifted. Sheshe's  teaches

me a lot of good things.She's the best in my eyes!My elder brother is nineteen,he's a

student.He's He study at Inustry Infomation Itermediate.He likes Game Online and plays it

well.He swims very good.wellI'm thirdteen years old,and  i'm a pupil.I can swim and love ocean

so much!

I love my family so much!Because it always makes me in security  safe/ secure  and happy!

Comment

1can +V_inf 

2, ch ơi nh ạ c cụ _ nh ạc cụu ph ải  đ i kèm v ớ i m ạo từ  " the"

play  the  piano 

play  the violin

3, "admire " là  độ ng t ừ  nên câu "I'm very admire my mother."

bạn sử a thành I admire she so much

chú ý các lỗi spelling :

mor ther => mother 

thir dteen =>  thirteen

Inustry =>  Industry 

Infomation => Information 

Itermediate => Intermediate

Manager ment => Management

admire she =>  admire her

Góp ý củ a thatsmygoal 

Mộ t s ố  l ỗ i th ừơng g ặ p 

Có một s ố  l ỗi mà mình th ấy các b ạn hay mắc  đ ó là: 

1. Câu v ăn dài dòng. Ở các trg h ợ p này ph ải có d ấu  ch ấm (.) khi h ết 1 ý.

2.  Đầu câu hay dùng ch ữ  "BUT ". "BUT "  đượ c dùng trong câu ghép. Còn đối với câu mà ý

nói ng ược là với câu trước, ta dùng"  IN CONTRAST " ho ặc "HOWEVER", etc

3. Tính t ừ  luôn  đứng trước Danh t ừ . Tr ạng t ừ  đứng trước ho ặc sau Động T ừ .

VD: a  beautiful  girl

I  hungrily  eat the hamburger.

I  eat the hamburger  hungrily. 

4. Dang câu:  Cô/ anh ấy là 1 trong nhữ ng ng......nh ất  thì ph ải chia hi ện tại  đơn và danh t ừ 

ở  d ạng s ố nhi ều.

VD: He was one of the busiest  person  in the world. (Sai)

=> He  is  one of the busiest  people  in the world.( Đ úng) 

That's all

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  Rikanee  

My family ,the happiest place I have . There are 4 people :my mother ,father,brother ,me and a

special member - my chubby pussy.My mother is house wife,she always cares of family and

teaches us how to be useful people .She is not  a strict woman but she willing yelles me if I'm

lazy or sleeping to much . On the other hand ,my father is a trict police man ,sometimes he

makes my brother and me feel fear but we still take mistakes some times . After that he shouts at

us and beats us if we're still stubborn .My brother and me are still students .He is a good man

and always cares of me like looking after a stubb orn child ,I hate that .When he has girlfriend I

always tease them while they are doing something like kissing or something like that in front of

me .It makes me feel funny because they are always angry after my teasing.Finally,the last

member I want to say is my pussy.It eats so much more than me so I often hide my food away .I

like playing and sleeping with it .To me,my happiness is my family and I love them so much.

My family ,the happiest place I have . There are  , has  4 people :my mother ,my father, my

brother ,me and a special member - my chubby pussy.

My family ,the happiest place I have . ch ư a ph ải là mộ t câu mà ch ỉ mớ i là mộ t c ụ m từ nên b ạn

ch ấ m như v ậy là sai  

My mother is a house wife,she always cares  of for the  family and teaches us how to be useful

people .

care for /about = take care of  :  trông nom ,ch ă m sóc 

She is not a strict woman but she willing yelles will yell at me if I'm lazy or sleeping  to o much .

On the other hand ,my father is a s trict  police man policeman ,sometimes he makes my brother

and me feel  fear  frightened  , but we still  take  make mistakes some times   sometimes.

Tr ước  but ph ải dùng d ấ u ph ẩy ,sau  feel  là tính t ừ  mà bạn dùng fear  là sai 

After that he shouts at us and beats us if we're still stubborn .My brother and me  I  are still

students .He is a good man and always cares of  for me like  looking after  a stubborn child  ;

however  ,I hate that .When he has a  girlfriend I always tease them while they are  doing

something like  kissing or something like that in front of me .It makes me feel funny because

they are always angry after my teasing.Finally,the last member I want to say tell about is my

pussy.It eats so much more than   me  I do ,so I often hide my food away .I like playing and

sleeping with it .To me,my happiness is my family and I love them so much

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a   Hong thi Bong

There are four people in my family. My parents, my sister and me. My parents are workers. My

sister is a staff and I'm too. My father is difficult but he is very intelligent and he knows a lot of

in the world, he always teaches me and sister how to live and become a good person when we

was a child. with my mother he is a good husband. And we always proud up about him

And my mother, my mother is a good wife and mother. She always worries and take care of us.

She is very friendly, she always helps us when we have problems. 

And my sister, she is very nice, she usually help me to cook, and go shopping with me. We have

a bed room, when we go to bed we usually chat each other until we don't know anything to talk.

and then we begin to sleep. I feel very happy when I have a happy family.

There are four people in my family. My parents, my sister and me. My parents are workers. My

sister is a staff and I'm too. My father is difficult, but he is very intelligent and  he knows a lot of

in the world, knowledgeable 

knowledgeable : có kiến th ứ c rộng ,hiểu bi ết

he always teaches used to teach me and sister how to live  usefully and become  a good  person 

people  when we was a child  were children . 

chú ý s ố ít s ố nhi ều nhé ,khi còn nh ỏ  phải dùng thì quá kh ứ   

with To my mother , he is a good husband . And; so  we  are always proud  up about of  him

proud  là tính từ  ph ải có  to be  đứng tr ước  

And my mother, my mother is a good wife and mother. She always worries and takes  care of us.

She is very friendly ,;  she always helps us when we have problems.  hai câu rời dùng d ấ u ch ấ m

ph ẩy ch ứ  không d ấu ph ẩ y  

And my sister, she is very nice, my sister is very nice;  she usually help s  me to cook ,  and go

shopping with me. We have a bed room ,. when we go to bed , we usually chat  with each other

until we don't know anything to talk. and then we be gin to sleep. I feel very happy when I have a

happy family

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a bé d ừ a 

My family has 4 people: dad, mom, elder brother and me. i used to be very proud of my family

because we were really happy, but it wasn't as welfare as i think. At that time, i was too young to

realize many serious problem inside. The reason  was just the misunderstanding of my parents.

Now my dad doesn't live with us anymore but i know he still love us very much. 

i want to send you a massage: let's treasure  what you are having because you are more lucky

than many people including me.

My family has 4 people: dad, mom,   my parents,my elder brother and me. i used to be very

proud of my family because we were really happy, but it wasn't as  welfare happy  as  i think I

thought  . At that time, i was too young to realize many serious problem inside. The reason was

just the misunderstanding  of between my parents. Now my dad doesn't live with us anymore but

i know he still love s  us very much. 

i want to send you a massage: let's treasure what you  are having have because you are  more

lucky than lucker than many people including me

độ ng t ừ  s ở h ử u ( have ,own ,belong to  )không dùng ti ếp di ễn 

tính từ dài tậ n cùng là  y  thì dùng công th ứ c nh ư  tính t ừ  ng ắn

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a kent_7590 

There are 5 people in my family . I am elder sister . I am older than my younger sister 2 years

.We used to fight each other because of many things . I don’t understand what exactly it was. But

now my younger sister and me are very social  . May be growing changes us . I realize that my

family is very important to me . I have a younger brother . he is a naughty boy . Although he is 7

years but sometimes he proves a man. Heeeeeee. It is very funny ! . I proud of my mother .She

always take care about me because I am now a eithteen girl .My parents always worry about my

learning ,and sometimes they ask me whether I have boy friend . Oh my god ! I sometimes have

a joke with them : “ you will see Mr right of me in the future”I always try my best to please

them.

I have read your article ,Bé Dừa . may be you are too young to understand your parents . Be

calm down and confide your parents ,take care of them ,you will understand their feeling .

There are 5 people in my family . (  phải kể ra : ai ,ai ..)  I am elder sister . I am older than my

younger sister 2 years I am 2 years older than my younger sister . 

elder sister  ch ỉ dùng  để  nói là ch ị c ủ a ai ,không nói chung chung , s ố l ượng  trong so sánh  để 

tr ước so sánh  

We used to fight each other because of many things . I don’t understand what exactly it was

remember exactly what it was . But now my younger sister and  me I  are very social .  May be

growing  Maybe the maturity changes us .

Maybe phải  đứng li ền thì m ới có nghĩ a là  có l ẽ

I realize that my family is very important to me . I have a younger brother . he is a naughty boy .

Although he is 7 years old but, sometimes he proves  a man. 

Dùng Although thì không dùng but n ữa ,tu ổi là years old (ph ải có old ) 

to be older than he is 

Heeeeeee . It is very funny ! . I proud of my mother .She always take s care about  of  me because I

am now a eithteen an eighteen -year-old girl .My parents always worry about my learning ,and 

;so sometimes they ask me whether I have  a  boy friend . Oh my god ! I sometimes have a joke

with them : “ you will see Mr right of me  him  in the future”I always try my best to please them .

eighteen -year-old là tính t ừ ghép 

danh từ  s ố ít đế m đượ c ph ải có  a

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a numeo87   

I PROUD OF MY FAMILY!

I will tell you something about my family.I won't introduce about my family such as age,

name,...of members in my family.I will tell you why I proud of my family.

My parents are like close friends of me.I can share everything with them.Everynight, we usually

go for a walk together for an hour.For me, this is a wonderful time.Because I feel relax after the

day of studied hard and my parents ,too.And my brother, he live far away from my family

because of his work.He is not only a trict man but also a funny man.He is my hero.He advice me

what I should do in my life.He always worry about my future.I realy want to thank him about

that.All of these things, I only want to say that I proud of my family.

I will tell you something about my family. I won't introduce about my family such as age,

name,...of members in my family.I won't tell you details such as ages, names,...of members in

my family ho ặ c : I won't introduce details about my family such as ages, names,.

độ ng t ừ   introduce  không có gi ớ i t ừ  theo sau nhé

dùng such as phải c ẫn th ận ,nó phải liệ t kê nh ữ ng thứ n ằ m trong danh t ừ tr ước nó :

subjects such as math,physics  ...những môn h ọc nh ư là toán ,lý ...( toán, lý n ằ m trong môn h ọc )

I will tell you why I proud of my family.

My parents are like close friends of me mine .I can share everything with them.Every night, we

usually go for a walk together for an hour.For me, this is a wonderful time .B b ecause I feel

relax ed  after  the a  day of studied  studying  hard, and my parents  do ,too.And my brother, he My

brother live s far away from my family because of his work.He is not only a  s trict man but also

a funny man.He is my hero  idol .He  advice  advises me what I should do in my life.He always 

worry worries about my future.I rea lly want to thank him about that. All of Because of all these

things, I only want to say that I  am proud of my family

because n ối 2 câu không có d ấu ch ấm nhé 

relax  là độ ng t ừ  ,n ếu  đứng sau  feel  nó ph ải  đổ i thành tính từ  -> relaxed

sau giới t ừ  of  thì  độ ng t ừ  ph ải thêm  ing 

dùng c ấu trúc viết ng ắn (too ) thì trước ph ải có tr ợ  độ ng t ừ ho ặc  độ ng t ừ  đặ c bi ệ t :

I am tall ,and he  is  ,too

I go out ,and he  does  ,too

advice  là danh t ừ ,còn động t ừ  là :  advise 

chú ý l ổ i ch ủ t ừ  ngôi thứ ba s ố ít động t ừ  thêm  s 

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a hoangk48  

There are 17 people in my family. The first person I want to tell you about is my father. He is 70 years old now. He

was a Russian-teacher 15 year ago. He lives on his salary. He has diabetes 14 ago, so he is not strong now. The

second person I want to tell you about is my mother. She is also 70 years old. She retired 17 years ago. Before she

worked for a trade company. Now she is stronger than my father. The next person I want to tell you is my eldest

brother. He is 42 years old. He is an officer. He now is studying a master program in China. His wife is also 42

years old. She is a teacher. She teachs the literature. Their daughter is 16. She is a pupil in Trung Hoa high school.

Their son is 7 years old. He is a pupil in Trung Hoa primary school. 

The second brother is 37 years old. He is now a teacher. He teachs in Xuan Truong high school in Namdinh

province. His wife is also a teacher. She teachs in Xuantien secondary school in Namdinh province. She is pregnant

now. She is going to give birth in around 1 to 2 months. They have a daughter. She is 10 years old.

The third brother is 35 years old. He is an engineer. He graduated from Bach Khoa university in Hanoi. His wife 31.

Their son is more than one year old.

My younger brother is 27 years old. He is a pharmacist. He is now single.

Now I am married. I am 32 years old. I is a pharmacist, too. My wife is 30 years old. She is a journalist. We have a

son. He is more than 4 months old. We love our son so much.

There are 17 people in my family. The first person I want to tell you about is my father. He is 70

years old now. He was a Russian- teacher 15 year ago. He lives on his salary. He has  suffered

from diabetes for 14   ago  years , so he is not  strong  well now.

Bạn dùng ago  thì ch ỉ s ự  việ c  đ ã dứ t  điể m ,nên dùng thì hiện tạ i hoàn thành để  chỉ s ự  việc còn

kéo dài đế n hi ện tại 

strong  đễ  chỉ s ứ c m ạnh ,còn well chỉ  v ề s ứ c kh ỏe  

The second person  I want to tell you about is my mother. She is also 70 years old.  She retired 17

years ago. Before she worked for a trade company Before retiring 17 years ago ,she had

worked for a trade company. 

kết hợp 2 câu x ảy ra trước sau dùng quá khứ đơn và quá kh ứ  hoàn thành  

Now she is stronger than my father. The next person I want to tell you is my eldest brother. He

is 42 years old. He is an officer. He  now is  is now  studying a master program in China. His wife

is also 42 years old. She is a teacher. She teach es  the  literature. Their daughter is 16. She is a

pupil student  in Trung Hoa high school. Their son is 7 years old. He is a pupil in Trung Hoa

primary school. 

môn học không dùng  the,h ọ c sinh l ớn dùng student  

ch ữ  t ận cùng là ch thì thêm  es  chứ không thêm  s  

The second brother is 37 years old. He is now a teacher. He teach es  in at Xuan Truong high

school in Namdinh province. His wife is also a teacher. She teaches  in at  Xuantien secondary

school in Namdinh province. She is pregnant now. She is going to give birth in around 1 to 2

months. They have a daughter. She is 10 years old.

The third brother is 35 years old. He is an engineer. He graduated from Bach Khoa university in

Hanoi. His wife is  31. Their son is  more than over  one year old.

My younger brother is 27 years old. He is a pharmacist. He is now still  single.

Now  I am married. I am 32 years old. I  is am a pharmacist, too. My wife is 30 years old. She is a

journalist. We have a son. He is more than 4 months old. We love our son so much

Bài viết khá ,chú ý m ộ t s ố l ỗi nh ỏ c ơ b ản ,n ếu bi ế t dùng các liên t ừ ,m ệ nh đề  tính t ừ  để  n ối các

câu thì sẽ hay h ơn

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  vic zhou 

Hello everybody,I will tell you about my family. My family has 4 people: my father, my mother,

my younger sister and me.My father is a worker. he has to work hard everyday but he usually

smiles. My mother is a teacher in a high school so sometime she helps me with my homework.

my younger sister is a funny and lovely girl. sh e is 7 years old and goes to primary school. my

name's bich and I am a student in high school. Members in my family alway happy and love

each other. Every sunday, my family goes to a park or go camping. my family are very happy. I

loves my family.

Hello everybody,I will tell you about my family. My family has 4 people: my father, my mother,

my younger sister and me.My father is a worker. he has to work hard everyday, but he usually

smiles.

dùng  smile ( m ĩ m cười ) h ơi t ối nghĩa ,nên dùng  optimistic (l ạ c quan )

My mother is a teacher in at  a high school  ,so sometimes she helps me with my homework. my

younger sister is a funny jolly  and lovely girl. she is 7 years old and goes to primary school. my

name's bich and I am a student in high school. Members in my family are alway s  happy and

love each other. Every sunday  Sunday, my family go es  to a park or go camping. my family are

very happy. I loves my family

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog  và  Bổ sung tí c ủ a  kawaiami 

Bài viết củ a  BeUrSeLf 

My family has four members : my mother,my father,my younger brother and I.My mother is 50

years old.My father is 51 years old.My parents is business person.Their work time begin at 9:30

a.m and end at 8:30 p.m.Because my house is in the street so my parents can work at home.My

younger brother is 13 years old.He is studying in Giang Vo secondary school.He is not only

smart but also handsome and good child.My parents and I love my litter brother so much.I'm a

student.I've just graduated from KL high school 6 moths ago.Now,I'm studying IELTS &

English prepare for my plan.I want to study in the UK.And I'm trying my best to make my

dreame come true.

My family has four members : my mother,my father,my younger brother and I  me.My mother is

50 years old.My father is 51 years old.My parents is  are business  person   people .

parents là sô nhi ều bạn nhé 

Their work time begin s  at 9:30 a.m and end s  at 8:30 p.m.Because my house is in the street  so ,

my parents can work at home (* câu này người  đọ c sẽ không hi ểu ý b ạn nói gì ). My younger

brother is 13 years old.

2 câu n ối vớ i nhau ch ỉ đượ c dùng 1 liên t ừ mà thôi : đ ã dùng  because thì không dùng  so  n ữ a (

tương t ự  nh ư  but và  although  ) 

He is studying in Giang Vo secondary school.He is not only smart but also handsome and good

child   các liên t ừ và d ấu ph ẩy ph ải nối các chữ  cùng t ừ  loạ i .My parents and I love my litttle

brother so much.I'm a student.I've just graduated from KL high school 6 months ago(  ago  không

th ể dùng thì hi ện tại hoàn thành mà ph ải dúng quá kh ứ  đơn  ).Now,I'm studying IELTS &

English prepare attending an IELTS course to prepare for my plan .I want to study in the

UK.And I'm trying my best to make my dreame  come true.

Bài sửa củ a kawaiami 

Bài viết củ a  MomMi

There are 3 people in my family: my husband, my daughter and me. He is a lecturer of

University. He likes to read financial books, history books, etc. So, he has a deep understanding

of finance and political histor ỵ 

My daughter is 3 years old. She is very active in spite of the girl. She has started nursery school

for 2 months. It took her one week to familiarize her self with teacher and friends. And now, she

know some songs, some poems and some things by heart. 

I love my family very much and I wish "My family is always happy"

There are 3 people in my family: my husband, my daughter and me. He is a lecturer of  a

University. He likes to read financial books, history books, etc. So, he has a deep understanding

of finance and political histor ỵ 

My daughter is 3 years old. She is very active in spite of although she is a   (Ch ỗ này em th ấy

dùng in spite of the girl nó có vẻ không ổn , mà ko chắc  đ úng sai) girl. She has started  started 

nursery school for 2 months ago ( động t ừ started, begin không bao gi ờ  chia  ở hiện tại hoàn

thành ) . It took her one week to familiarize her self with  her new teacher and friends. And now,

she know s  some songs, some poems and some things by heart. 

I love my family very much and I wish  hope that " My family will be  is  always happy" (Wish

dùng để ước 1 đ iều  ước ch ắc ch ắn sẽ không x ảy ra ho ặc  đ ã không xảy ra, còn hope dùng  để 

ước 1 đ iều  ước có th ể x ảy ra hoặc có th ể đ ã xảy ra)

Your family is so happy. And your daughter is really cute. I hope that your hope will come true 

Bài sử a củ a kawaiami 

Bài viết củ a  vn360do

My family have therty persons, my mother, my siter and my. My morther is house wife, she is

61 year odl. My siter is a tailor at home, she is 37 year old, I’m a enngineer, I’m 32 year old. I’m

not married, but I will married next year, I’m working Computer Center.

My family has therty   three persons  people ( s ố nhi ều củ a person là people) , my mother, my

si s ter and  my me . My mo r ther is  a house wife  (trước 1 danh từ  s ố ít thì c ần có a,an hoặc the) ,

she is 61 year s  odl old. My si s ter is a tailor at home, she is 37 year s old, I’m an enngineer, I’m

32 year s  old. I’m not married, but I will  get married next year, I’m working at a Computer

Center.

Bác còn viế t sai chính t ả khá nhi ều  ạ, và bác nên chú ý 1 số l ỗ i nh ỏ nh ư  sau:  

To work at  ____  = làm vi ệ c t ạ i  ____

Để nói tu ổ i, n ếu 1 tuổ i thì year không c ần thêm s, nh ư ng n ếu từ  2 tu ổ i trở lên thì year phải có s

VD: 

My son is 1 year old.

My daughter is 3 years  old.

I'm 32 year s old.

Bài sử a củ a kawaiami 

Bài viết củ a thanhndk

There are eight people in my family : my parents, my aunt, my brother, my older sister, two

younger sister and I. It is really my big family. My father is a truck driver, he usually go away to

another places for work. So, he know many places in our country. My mother and my aunt are

sale women, they sell things of our variety stor e. They also take care of us and do housework.

My brother is a marketing agent and he loves his job. Both my older and one younger sister are

accountants. They usually discuss with each ot her about their job and the older sister always

helps the younger sister so much in her work. My youngest sister is a students at the Economic

University. Finally, I am an engineer and I love my family so much.

There are eight people in my family : my parents, my aunt, my brother, my older sister, two

younger sister s  and  I   me.  (It is really my big family)  My family is really big . My father is a

truck driver, he usually goes  away to  an other places for work  (another + 1 danh từ  s ố ít mà

nhỉ).  So, he know s many places in our country. My mother and my aunt are sale women, they

sell things of our variety store. They also take care of us and do housework. My brother is a

marketing agent and he loves his job. Both my older and one younger sister are accountants.

They usually discuss with each other about their job and the older sister always helps the

younger sister so much in her work. My youngest sister is a student s at the Economic

University. Finally, I am an engineer and I love my family so much.

Bạn còn sai  ở chỗ thi ếu s và dư s nhiều  

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  Thắng

My family have 5 people:my mother,my father, my young brother,my young sister and I.We live

in Xuan Hoa town in Vinh Phu.My father is a sale man and mother is a sale woman,too.My

sister,my brother and me are pupils.My grand parents doesn't live with wee.They live in Thai

Binh

My family have  has 5 people:my mother,my father, my young brother,my young sister and  I 

me.We live in Xuan Hoa town in, Vinh Phu  province .My father is a sale man and  my mother is

a sale woman,too.My sister,my brother and me are pupils.My grand parents do es n't live with

wee us .They live in Thai Binh

My family xem như mộ t  đơn vị nên dùng s ố  ít 

province : t ỉ nh 

My grand parents : dùng s ố nhi ều nhé

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  V ũ ThịLanHương  

Welcome to my house! We live in a small house in Thanh Tri district, suburb of Ha Noi city.

There four people in my family, my grandmother, my mother, my younger sister and me. We are

not rich but we are always friendly. My grandmothe r is seventy-two with a white long hair. She

usually tell us the same story. My mother is fifty three. She is a worker and works in the

electricity company. My mother loves me and my younger sister a lot. I always proud of my

mother, because she is very hard. She earns money but spend a litte and save it to pay our

school fee and subsistence expense. My younger  sister is twenty two and now she is student in

HAU. In free time she and me help our neighbours to care their domestic animal because we are

Vets. And last member is me. I am twenty five, and single. Now I am a DVM. I graduated from

HAU last week. I hope I will find a good job soon.

Welcome to my house! We live in a small house in Thanh Tri district, suburb of Ha Noi city. 

There are  four people in my family, my grandmother, my mother, my younger sister and me.

We are not rich, but we are always friendly. My grandmother is seventy-two with  a  white long

hair.

hair  có hai cách dùng : n ếu là danh từ  không  đế m đượ c thì không bao giờ có a  phía tr ước vớ i

nghĩa là  mái tóc  

còn nếu là danh từ  đế m đựoc ,có thể  dùng  a  phía tr ứ oc thì có nghĩa là  s ợ i tóc  .Do  đó nếu bạn  để 

a như  trên thì câu s ẽ có ngh ĩa là bà củ a bạn có m ộ t c ọng tóc bạ c dài !  

She usually tells  us the same story. My mother is fifty-  three. She is a worker and works in  the

an electricity company. My mother loves me and my younger sister a lot. I am  always proud of

my mother, because she is very hard. She earns  much money but spends a little and save it to

pay our school fee and subsistence expense. My younger sister is twenty two and now she is  a

student in HAU. In  our  free time she and  me I  help our neighbours to care  of their domestic

animal s because we are Vets. And  the last member is me. I am twenty five, and single. Now I

am a DVM. I graduated from HAU last week. I hope I will find a good job soon.

Công ty điện lự c nào ? không xác  đị nh nên không dùng  the  mà ph ả i dùng  a /an 

proud là tính t ừ  nên ph ả i có  to be  phía tr ước 

Tr ứ oc liên từ  because không dùng d ấu ph ẩy nhé

liên từ  but n ối 2 câu trái ng ựoc ngh ĩa nhau ,phía sau có  little  ( ít ) thì phía trước ph ả i có nhiều (

much )

tr ước  free time  ph ả i dùng sỡ h ử u  

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  nghianam_304  

my name is Tan Anh. there are four people in my  family : My father , my mother , my sister and

me. My father is fifty-five years old ,he is an engineer. My mother is fourty- four years old , she

is a teacher. My sister is fifteen years old ,she  is a student. I'm twelve years old , I am student

,too.

my name is Tan Anh. there are four people in my  family : My father , my mother , my sister and

me. My father is fifty-five years old , ; he is an engineer. My mother is fo urty- four years old ,

she is a teacher. My sister is fifteen years old ,; she is a student. I'm twelve years old ,and  I am

student ,too

Hai câu n ố i nhau bằng d ấu ch ấ m phẩ y  hoặc  dấu ch ấ m ,không dùng  dấu ph ẩy  b ạn nhé

s ố 40  không có u  ở giử a => forty  ( số 4 thì có : four  ) 

12 tuổi mà vi ế t nh ư  v ầy là giỏ i r ồi ! 

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a vane082 

My family is wonderful.They are important to me. My father is always with me, he give useful

advice when I have a problem.My mother is my friend. when I feel sad, I often confide to

her.After that I feel comfortable. My younger brother is pleasant, he usually make me

smile.Everyday is happy when I live with them.I love them , I want to bring pleasure to them.

My family is wonderful.They are important to me. My father is always with me, he givesme 

useful advice when I have a problem.My mother is  also  my friend. when I feel sad, I often

confide to her.After that I feel comfortable. My younger brother is pleasant, he usually makes

me smile. Everyday is I feel happy when I live with them.I love them ,and  I want to bring

pleasure to them

không dùng ch ủ t ừ everyday  mà là  happy đựoc 

chú ý chủ t ừ  s ố ìt thì  độ ng t ừ  ph ải thêm  s  nhé 

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  Nguyễn Kh ắ c Tr ấn 

We live in Hai Phong , phoenix red flower city. My family have four members : My father, my

mother, my sister and me. My father looks severe, but he's good heated. He works at technology

bureau of Hai Phong port. My mother's at home  now. She's gentle and kind.  She never flogs her

children. She 's an excellent cook. I love my mother very much. My sister is 30 years old. She 's a

contract worker at Vietnam maritime university. At  last, my name's Tran. I work at vocational

school. It's in Hai Phong port too . I'm very athletic. I usually play badminton at free time . I

pride on my family.

We live in Hai Phong ,the phoenix red flower city. My family  have  has four members : My

father, my mother, my sister and me. My father looks severe, but he's  good heated. He works at

the technology bureau of Hai Phong port.

xác  đị nh nên ph ải có  the

My mother's at home now. She's gentle and kind. She never flogs  beats her children. She 's an

excellent cook. I love my mother very much. My si ster is 30 years old. She 's a contract worker

at Vietnam maritime university. At last,  my name's Tran. I work at vocational school. It's in Hai

Phong port too . I'm very athletic. I usually play badminton  at  free time . I pride on my family

At last : ch ỉ ti ến trình về thờ i gian 

dùng in my free time  

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài  sử a bổ sung c ủ a kawaiami 

Bài viết củ a  lequidon tanan 

My family have four persons in my family. my father works at home. he is very strict but he is a loving

father. My mother is gentle and loves me very much . She usually makes a breakfast for me early in the

morning. so i always try to get good marks as many as possible to make my parents satisfied.

My sister has been working in a certain company. but that is only one of my cousins. but my parents had

been supporting her since she was a kid because of the dieing of her parents. the other person is me. i am

a LeQuiDon school's pupil. and i am trying to study well to pass the next exams. 

We are very happy when we live together. i love my family so much. 

My family have four personspeople  in my family.  my father works at home. he is very strict but

he is a  loving father. My mother is gentle and loves me very much. She usually makes a

breakfast for me early in the morning. so i always try to get good marks as many as possible to

make my parents satisfied.satisfy My sister has been working in a certain company. but that is

only one of my cousins. but my parents had been supporting her since she was a kid because of

the dieing  death of her parents. the other person is me. i am a LeQuiDon school's pupil pupil in

lequidon school . and i am trying to study well to pass the next exam [COLOR="Lime"(ý b ạn là

" the entrance exam" kì thi đạ i họ c [/color]. 

We are very happy when we live together. i love my family so much

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1 ,sau câu "my family have four people " b ạn nên viế t chi ti ế t thêm ra trong gia  đ ình bạn có

nh ữ ng ai

Và chủ ng ữ trong câu đã là "my family" nên ở đằ ng sau bạn không c ần vi ết " in my family"

2. các t ừ  chỉ b ữa  ăn không  đi kèm v ới m ạ o từ ( a , an , the)

3 , Câu"My sister has been working in a certain company. but that is only one of my cousins. but

my parents had been supporting her since she was a kid because of the dieing of her parents."

bạn nên viết m ột cách ng ắn gọn thôi

và b ạn không nên dùng t ừ  "but " trong hai câu li ề n kề nhau 

bạn có th ể dùng thay th ế  b ằng các từ  khác nh ư " however"... 

Câu này bạn có th ể s ử a thành :

The next person I want to tell you is one of my female cousins . After the death of her parents ,

my parents has supported her . so , we live together .However, I always considered her as my 

siblings .female cousins  : ch ị em họ   

siblings: chị em ru ộ t

Chú ý viết hoa  đầu câu, sau dấu ch ấm, chữ  I không bao gi ờ  viết th ường, khi thi viết tiếng

anh thì mấ y lỗ i nh ỏ nh ặt này có khi l ại bị trừ  đ i ểm đấy bạn à ^^~

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a vmbpe

I lived in a small town before got married. There are 5 peoples in my family: my father, mother,

sister, brother and I. 

My mother is retirement but my father is still at work. He will retire in next year. When I was a

pupil, I lived with my parent in Thai Binh town. 

When I was at the age of fifteen, my sister was admitted into financial university. Her major is

an accountant and then she lives in Ha noi city. Now she has successed in her job as a chief

accountant in a pure water company. She got married 5 years ago , but now she has just been

pregnant. So all peoples are very glad to her. 

My brother has get married for 2 years , now he had a nice daughter. He is a veterinarian. But

He works in a pet food manufactory company.

Now I got married 2.5 years and have a daughter and live in Ha noi

My small family have 3 members: my husband , daughter and I. Because of having baby so my

mother in law lives with us to take care my daughter ...

I lived in a small town before gotgetting married. There are 5 peoples in my family: my father,

my mother, my  sister,  my brother and I. 

My mother is retirementretiree  but my father is still at work. He will retire in next year. When I

was a pupil, I lived with my parent s  in Thai Binh town. 

When I was at the age of fifteen, my sister was admitted into financial university. Her major is

an accountant and then she lives in Ha noi city. Now she has successed in her job as a chief

accountant in a pure water company. She got married 5 years ago , but now she has just been

pregnant. So all peoples are very glad to her. 

My brother has get  got married for 2 years , now he had a nice daughter. He is a veterinarian.

But He works in a pet food manufactory company.

Now I got married 2.5 years and have a daughter and live in Ha noi

My small family have 3 members: my husband ,my daughter and I. Because of having baby so

my mother in law lives with us to take care my daughter ...

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1 các danh t ừ  đế m đượ c không thể đứng mộ t mình ph ải có  a , an, t he hay  đứng ở d ạng s ố nhi ều

ho ặ c cótinhs từ s ở h ữ u 

vì v ậy bạn nên viết  đầ y  đủ  " my brother" "my mother "...

1  retirement  : s ự ngh ỉ h ư u 

retiree : ng ười về h ư u

bài c ủ a bạn rất t ố t 

làm mình ch ẳng có gì để  chữ a cả

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a  traduongbl 

I live in a Citỵ  There are 4 persons in my familỵ  My sister, my cousin, my nephew and me. My

sister is a student at a computer centre. My cousin is a student at a College in Citỵ  My sister is

twenty-four years old. My cousin is the same her. My nephew is thirdteen months old. And I am

twent-eight years old. We are borned at a countryside. Our parents are living at that. They are

over fifty years old. I always hope that the best things to my family and everyone. I am happy

when joint this class.

I live in a Citỵ  There are 4 personspeople  in my famil ỵ : My sister, my cousin, my nephew and

me.I  My sister is a student at a computer centre. My cousin is a student at a College in Cit ỵ  My

sister is twenty-four years old.  my cousin (ý b ạn  đị nh nói là "the age of my cousin is the same

hers" ) is the same her. My nephew is thirdteen months old. And I am twent-eight years old. We

[s]are[/S] borned was born at in a countryside. Our parents are living at that .there They are over

fifty years old. I always hope that the best things to my family and everyone  will happen(  hope

that  phải  đ i kèm v ới c ả mọ t m ệ nh đề  đủ  c ả chủ ngữ  và v ị ng ữ  ). I am happy when joint  joining 

this class.

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a Nguyễn Nh ật Minh 

My family has five people. There are my father, my mother, two elder sister and I. My father is

64 years old. He is an engineer. Last time, he is  a director, but now, he retired from business. My

mother is an engineer, and she have just retired, too. She is 10 years younger than my father. My

eldest sister is teaching in Forest Universit ỵ  She is 29 years old but she hasn't married. She is a

Master of IT. My elder sister is an IT engineer, too. She is 25 years old. She is working for

HITTC. I love all of members in my famil ỵ  My father is a jovial man and he is a real man. He

earn most money in my family, he always make us funny and happy. My mother is a charming

woman, she is very good at cooking. She like clearning house every day. Two sister of mine are

the mirors for me to study and they help me much  in IT. I am a student. I am studying in College

of Technology like two sister. My parents want me to have IELTS 6.5 in a year later, but I think

is so difficult for me to do.

In general, I love my family so much!

My family has  have five people. There are my father, my mother, two elder sister and I. My

father is 64 years old. He is an engineer. Last timeIn the past , he is used to be( bạn không nên

dùng "is"  ở đây vì đây là vi ệ c xảy ra trong quá kh ứ  nên b ạn hãy dùng t ừ  "used to "  đã t ừng) a

director, but now, he retired from business. My mother is an engineer, and she  have  has just

retired, too. She is 10 years younger than my father. My eldest sister is teaching in Forest

Universitỵ  She is 29 years old but she hasn't is not  married. She is a Master of IT My elder sister

is an IT engineer, too. She is 25 years old. She is working for HITTC. I love all  of   members in

my familỵ  My father is a jovial man and he is a real man. He earns most money in my family, he

always makes us funny and happy. My mother is a charming woman, she is very good at

cooking. She like s clearning cleaning house every day. Two sister s of mine are the  mirors

example  for me to study follow  and they help me much in IT. I am a student. I am studying in

College of Technology like two sisters. My parents want me to have IELTS 6.5  in a year later 

next year , but I think  it  is so difficult for me to do.

In general, I love my family so much!

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1 từ  "family " ở câu  đầ u mang tính tập th ể nên b ạ n ph ải chia s ố nhi ều

Bài sử a củ a bluewatergal 

Bài viết củ a  ^FLY^

There are four people in my family : my father, my mother and my brother. My father worked as

employee in the factory in few years ago. He is so gentle and so kind to everybody, especially

his family. My mother works as house wife. She is so beautiful and funny, but strict, especially

to me. My brother is 27 year old. He is so poor because he is disable man. 

Though many problems in my life with my family, i love them very much

There are four people in my family : my father, my mother and my brother.and I(  four people  c ơ

mà b ạn )My father worked as  an  employee in  the factory in  a few years ago. He is so gentle and

so kind to everybody, especially his family. My mother works as a  house wife. She is so

beautiful and  funny  jolly , but strict, especially to me. My brother is 27 years  old. He is so poor

because he is  a disable man. 

Though In spite of  many problems in my life with my family,i love them very much. :x

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1. khi dùng từ  "  ago " rồi bạn không  đượ c dùng các giới tù nh ư "in " "for "... đi cùng với th ời

gian nữ a 

2. bạn nên chú ý hơn trong vi ệ c sử  d ụng mạo từ b ạn hay thi ếu lắ m nha !

nh ư ng dù sao bài viết c ủ a bạn cũng r ất t ốt

few  là ít  : có ý chê

a few : m ộ t vài 

In spite of :  đi vớ i c ụ m từ 

Though:  đi với m ệ nh đề 

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a tamitc 

I'm living with my family in the country. Here,  there are my mother, my father and my younger

brother. Our family are happy verymuch. My father is a farmer, he is funny and he pride of me.

Everyday, he take care trees in the garden carefully. My mother is a good teacher. She cooks

very well. I like dishes to be cooked by her hand. My yournger brother is small but he is

intelligent and active. For me, my family is the  most precious thing that I hav. I love them more

than anything in my life

I'm living with my family in the countryside . Here, there are my mother, my father and my

younger brother. Our family are very  happy  verymuch . My father is a farmer, he is  funny  jolly 

and he  pr ide is pride of me. Everyday, he take s care of the trees in the garden carefully. My

mother is a good teacher. She cooks very well. I like dishes  to be  cooked by her hand . My

your nger brother is small young  but he is intelligent and active. For me, my family is the most

precious thing that I hav e. I love them more than anything in my life

happy là tính t ừ  nên ph ả i  đặ t  very  tr ước nó 

take care of  : ch ă m sóc

còn nh ỏ tuổ i dùng  young không dùng  small vì s ẽ có ý là nhỏ con  

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  chenkaka  

do you know that , i' m student and i must live far along time home. this is unlucky. now, it is

autumn and very cold, wind sometime make up that is what do you think not good. i miss my

family but i have't ring for home because i afreind that i have not listen anything my mother

speak. but next week , i can come back home and get support from my family. it's true. now, i

have not examination need overcome. i attempt to work hard to my family happy.

do you know that , i'I' m  a student and  i  I must live far  along time from home. this is unlucky.

now, it is autumn and  it is  very cold,  wind sometime make up that is what do you think not

good (  câu không có nghĩa l ẫn ng ữ  pháp  ).  i  I  miss my family but  i have't ring I do not ring them

for home because i afreind that i  have not listen anything because I am afraid that I can not

hear  my mother speak. but next week , i can come back home and get support from my family.

it's true.  now, i have not examination need overcome. i  attempt I try to work hard in oder to

make my family happy.

far phải  đ i với  from 

Bài viết quá kém v ề ngữ pháp l ẫn ý t ửong ,bạn cần luyện tập từ  nhữ ng ý ,câu  đơn gi ản

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

 Bài vi ết củ a  gaivigiac  

hi everybody

My family is both my woel and my pridẹ We have 4 people: my parents, my younger sister and

me My father_ a truckdriver, my mom_ sale person, my sister is in 7 grade. She is so delicacy,

lovely, pretty and iam in 12 grade in famous highscho ọl , normal person. My father is so str ịck,

a losing temper person but i also love him than my father because he give me lots money and

give his children all his lov ẹ He behaves rude, and sometimes hits me when i was sm ạll My

mother is so cool. Iam a normal gịrl My great passion in my life is studying English, german

and some foreinglanguages and going on atour. But I think i love money b ẹst> I wanna have a

job to give me lots money in the future like"contruction engineer or doctor. I really like human

physiology but iam afraid of physịc I love germany so much It is a exciting destination with

lavish show room., german goods so high quality, with an acient architect build ịng, Berlin _ the

fascinate metropolis, Bònn the hometown of beethoven. , and many boomtown.. My father want

me to be an exchange student in germanỵ I hate many things: as well as: Blog, some peson call

my age is "teen", the "lion" hair. stupid new fashion but i love dermocacy....

hi everybody

My family is both my woel and my pridẹ We haveThere are 4 people: my parents, my younger

sister and me My father_ a truckdriver, my mom_ a sale person, my sister is in 7 grade  seven.

She is so delicacy, lovely, pretty and  iam I am  in  12 grade twelve  in a  famous  highscho ọl high

scho ọl , normal person. My father  ,a losing temper person ,  is so  str ị ck   strict , a losing temper

person but i  . I  also love him than my father mother( dùng but thì không dùng because )  because

he give s me lots  of money and gives  his children all his lovẹ He behaves rude ly , and sometimes

hits me when i was  smạll  young  . My mother is so cool. Iam a normal g ịrl . My great passion in

my life is studying English, german   German and some foreigng languages and going on atour.

But  I think i love money b ẹst> I wanna  want to ( v ăn vi ế t không dùng wanna  )have a job  as a

construction engineer or doctor to  give me lots  earn lots of (  lots ph ải  đ i vớ i of  )money in the

future  like"contruction engineer or doctor. I really like human physiology but iam afraid of

phys ịc I love germany so much It is a n  exciting destination with lavish show room., german

goods  are  so high quality, with  an  acient architect build ịng s, Berlin _ the fascinate metropolis,

Bònn the hometown of beethoven. , and many boomtown.. My father want s  me to be an

exchange student in germanỵ  I hate many things : as well as:   like  Blog, some peson people  call

my age is "teen", the "lion" hair. stupid new fashion but i love democracy.

Trình độ  cón y ếu nên b ạ n ph ải t ập vi ết t ừ  nh ữ ng c ấu trúc  đơn gi ản không nên vi ế t nh ữ ng câu

khó sẽ không ti ến bộ đượ c

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  nguyen xuan

my names xuan. i was born in Thai Binh town.Now, my fimily is in Lam Dong. My fimily has

six people.My mother is a farmer, she is forty-six years old.I love my mother a lot.She does hard

working and she allway has to worry for her family.My father is a farmer, too. He is fifty years

old, he loves his children and we love him very much. he does hardworking to earn momey for

our sturdying.

My older sister is a master of gadernschool. she is twenty-seven years old. She doesn't get

merried. She usually gives us money when we study far home. Now, i live in HCM city. I am a

new officer. i have just graduated at collect of forgein economic relation school and i apply my

CV in my company last month and i work for two weeks. i do accounting works. about two

months i come back home one time. I miss my fimily and i want to live in Lam Dong with my

family but i can't because i have to continue to study hight level. i like studying english so i join

in this web. i wish that all person in this web help each orther. my younger sister is a student. she

is studying a training teaching school in Da Lat. she is very excellent and she likes a teacher. i

and she usually contact together by phone.My youngest sister is a pupil. she is studying in grade

four.

I love my family very much and i think my family is a happy family

my name's xuan.  i  I  was born in Thai Binh town.Now, my  fimily   family  is in Lam Dong.

Myfimily  family  has six people.My mother is a farmer,  ;  she is forty-six years old.I love my

mother a lot.She does hard working and she allway  always  has to  worry for  take care of  her

family.My father is a farmer, too. He is fifty ye ars old, he loves his children and we love him

very much. he  does hardworking works hard  to earn  momey  money for our  sturdying  studying 

.

My older sister is a master of  gadernschool kindergarten  . she is twenty-seven years old. She

doesn't get merried  is not  married. She usually gives us money when we study far  from home.

Now, i  I live in HCM city. I am a new officer. i  I have just graduated at  from collect of  forgein 

foreign economic relation school and i  I apply 

applied my CV in my company last month and  i  I have work ed  for two weeks. i  I  do

accounting works work as an accountant . about two months  i  I come back home onc e  time . I

miss my fimily  family  and  i  Iwant to live in Lam Dong with my family but i  I can't because i  I 

have to continue to study hight at high  level.  i  I like studying  english  English so  i  I join in this

web.  i  I  wish  that all person  all members in this web help each  orther other. my younger sister

is a student. she is studying at  a training teaching school in Da Lat. she is very excellent and she

likes to become a teacher. i  I  and she usually contact  together  each other  by phone.My

youngest sister is a pupil. she is  studying  in grade four.

I love my family very much and i  I  think my family is a happy family

Chữ  I  luôn viế t hoa nhé 

lo l ắng  v ới nghĩa là ch ă m lo thì dùng : take care of  không dùng  worry ( lo âu chuy ện gì )

bài c ủ a bạn nhiều lỗi quá ,c ần cố g ắ ng nhi ều hơ n nhé

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog  và b ổ sung tí c ủ a kawaiami 

Bài viết củ a  phitruong  

There are six people in my family, my parent, my wife, my daughter, my sister and me.

My father is a policeman. His work is very busy, when everybody go out, he has to work. My

mother retired two year ago. Now, she is a housewif e, her main work is to go the market, to buy

food and to prepare meal for my family. She is a very good mother. 

My sister is less than me two year old, she lives in Ha Noi city, she is a insurance agent.

Sometime, she goes to the Hai Phong city to meet us. 

My wife is a public servant, she works for duty office of Hai Phong city.I am a civil engineer, I

work for Bach Dang Construction Corporation. We have a daughter, her name is Phuong Uyen,

and she is one year old. 

We usually are interested together, we are a happy family.

Cám ơn wellfrog r ất nhi ề u!

There are six people in my family, my parents , my wife, my daughter, my sister and me.

My father is a policeman. His work is very busy, when everybody goes  out, he has to work. My

mother retired two years ago. 

Now, she is a housewife, her main work is to go to  the market, to  buy food and  to  prepare meal

for my family. She is a very good mother. My sister is  less than me two year old  two years

youger than me  , she lives in Ha Noi city, she is a n  insurance agent. Sometimes, she goes to the

Hai Phong city to meet us. 

My wife is a public servant, she works for a duty office of Hai Phong city.I am a civil engineer,

I work for Bach Dang Construction Corporation. We have a daughter, her name is Phuong

Uyen, and she is one year old. 

We usually are interested together   care for one another  (  ch ă m sóc ,quan tâm nhau  ), we are

have a happy family.

so sánh có s ố l ượng  dùng : số l ượng tr ước so sánh nhé

Bài sử a củ a  kawaiami

Bài viết củ a  BeUrSeLf

My family has four members:my parents,my little brother and me.My mother is 50 years old.My father is

51 years old.They are business people.My house is on  a noisy street.Thus,my pare nts made a decision to

open a shop inthe first floor.They sell the product of many company such as fridge,vaccum cleaner, air-conditioner,washing machine.Their work time begins at 9:00 a.m and ends at 8:30 p.m .My little brother

is 13 years old.His name is Thai.He is studying at  Giang Vo secondary/middle school.He is not only a

smart pupil but also handsome and good-child.He always make my family feels proud of him.My parents

and me love him so much.I am 18 years old.I just graduted from KL high school 6 moths ago.I have just

got my IELTS result.It's so bad,my band score is  5.0.Therefore,I resgisted in  IELTS course in British

coucil in order to improve my score.I will go to UK to study as soon as possible.Studying

aboard,especially in UK is my dream.And I am trying  my best to make my dream comes true.My mother

oftens takes my younger brother and me go to the supermarket to buy food for all week in weekend.

Sometimes,when we have free time she takes us go out and eat traditional food of Hanoi.It is so

interesting and unforgetable memories for me and my brother.In the evening,my mother and me always

watching TV together.Perhaps,I am going to leave my  family,I think I love my family so much and I will

do the best things to make them feel proud of me .I hope my family member always be happy ,healthy

and success.

My family has four members:my parents,my little brother and me.My mother is 50 years

old.My father is 51 years old.They are business people.My house is on a noisy

street.Thus,my parents made a decision to open a shop inthe first floor.They sell the

product of many company such as fridge,vaccum cleaner, air-conditioner,washing

machine.Their work time begins at 9:00 a.m and ends at 8:30 p.m .My little brother is 13

years old.His name is Thai.He is studying at  Giang Vo secondary/middle school.He is not

only a  smart  pupil but also handsome and good - child.He always makes  my family feel s 

proud of him.My parents and  me I  ( Ở đ ây là chủ  ng ữ  nên không dùng me  đượ c)  love him

so much. I am 18 years old.I just gradu ated from KL high school 6 mo nths ago.I have just

got my IELTS result. It's so bad,my band score is 5.0.Therefore, I resgistere d in  an IELTS

course in British coucil in order to improve my score. I will go to UK to study as soon as

possible.Studying aboard,especially in UK , is my dream.And I am tr ying my best to make

my dream comes  true.My mother often s  takes my younger brother and me go to the

supermarket to buy food for all the whole  week in  at weekend. Sometimes,when we have

free time , she takes us  go out and eat traditional food of Hanoi.It is so interesting and

unforgetable memories for me and my brother.In the evening,my mother and me I  always

watching  TV together.  Perhaps,I am going to leave my family  (be going to là diễn tả 1 d ự 

đị nh chắc ch ắn rồi mà sao dùng perhaps n ữ a ^^) ,I think I love my family so much and I

will do the best things to make them feel proud of me.I hope my family member always be

happy ,healthy and successful.

Make someone do  something 

^^ Try not to make any mistake ! Good luck!

Bài sử a củ a wellfrog 

Bài viết củ a  bongnguyet2001  

My family have six persons. They are my father, my morther, one older sister, one older brother,

one younger brother and me. My father born in Ninh binh , my mother was born in Sai gon, In

1976, my father met mother and they get married. Now, my family is happy because my sister

was married. She is have two children. They are active. My mother is who I love the best. she is

very love me too. I don't have any thing but I prove that I have mother.

Last year, My older brother get married, I ' m happy because he have a good wife.This year in

November, he'll a baby. It is a boy. I hope that it is handsome as my older borther. I loce my

family very much. I wish everyone is happy and good health.

My family have six persons  has six members . They are my father, my morther,  one my older

sister,  one  my older brother,  one my younger brother and me. My father  was born in Ninh binh ,

my mother was born in Sai gon, In 1976, my father met mother and they get got married. Now,

my family is happy because my sister was is  married.( dùng hiện tại vì là tình tr ạng hiệ n tạ i ) She

is have has two children. They are active. My mother is the person  who I love the best. she is

very  love me very  much , too. I don't have any thing but I prove that I have mother.(  very  không

dùng tr ước  độ ng t ừ )

Last year, My older brother get got  married, I ' m happy because he  have  has  a good wife(  s ố ít

dùng has nhé  ).This  year in  November, he'll  has a baby. It is a boy. I hope that it is handsome as

my older borther. I  loce   love  my family very much. I wish everyone is happy  happiness  and

good health