Warning- ww2,blood,gore, and death don't read if you are squeamish about blood

Title: Is this good?
Vienna was on trials for being a leader that she didn't wanted to but the Allies stared at the brown haired girl.

They stares at her before making descion " the Allies and I are going to be killed by the gas chambers if you don't die by that then you will be beaten to death by Ivan" Alfred spoke to the two siblings. Roderich eyes widened before being taking away from his baby sister. Vienna burst into tears from the punishment. ~That night~

America lay in her bed. She was going to be treated what she needed. ~The next morning~ Francis open the cell door and grabs the woman.  He stare at her before calling England to deal with her. He dragged her to the car. Throwing her into the car before getting her brother.

Ivan stares at her smirking softly touching her skin "You going to be a good beating object." He said before chuckling and hit her in the eye. Leaving a black eye, in her left eye America groans before blacking out.

That gas chambers.......America stares the past before bursting into tears. Ivan gripped her arms harshly before bashing her head in the cement wall. Blood dropped off of her head. He to her and whisper in her ear.

"That a good girl now obey to Mother Russia or you get it more~" he dragged her in the chambers. Roderich was in the shower area nothing on. His hair was shaved off he was nearly beaten by England. He was on the floor breathing heavily from how much pain.

Russia grabs cutters and cut it into pieces before pushing America down on four. Russia grabs his pipe of pain. Then beaten her until she budge to move or even move at all. America was dragged in the chamber, he smirks and threw her into a wall making her head bled so much that then smell it.

Through the door, England open the seal and pour in stuff into a tube then pulled a lever. Releasing the gas in the thing. Both siblings didnt move being fake dead. Russia hit his fist on the door and growled darkly he put the mask on and told everyone "Put the mask on!" He told the others before open the door and dragged the two outside and grabs the pipe. He beaten them until they dissolved blood splashes around them Russia licks the blood off his lips.

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The blood dripped down the shower drain. The body of Vienna was sickening. Russia, frowns softly before looking at dead body. He dragged the body and threw her in the car trunk. Taking to chopping block that chopped the innocent lives of her. Vienna was now gone. There was a pool of blood. Her pale skin was so nice plushed. That she can doll or a drag doll.

When Russia got to the chopping block he dragged her to the back. To being to rip her apart blood went everywhere. It was dreadful that she was pronounce dead gone from this world. If she could only it but couldn't do it anymore. Her soul was in pain everywhere from chop up. Her head pushed and black and blue abuses on her body.

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"You murdered the woman I love!!!" The voice said it was scared and shook up. "Russia you killed her and now that my children won't have a mother to look up!" It spoken with tears running down their face. Russia chuckles darkly and grabbed the doll like Vienna and gave it to her living lover. The doll was pale and looks at the new owner.