•Title: 3.5/5
»The title "Broken Promises" effectively conveys the central themes of the story.
»It suggests the focus on themes of trust and betrayal, which is actually very very relevant to the story.
»But, while it is evocative and relevant, it’s somewhat generic and might not stand out among similar titles in this genre.
»I would suggest adding a suitable subtitle to it, like "Broken Promises: A journey from hurting to healing" OR "Broken Promises: Beyond betrayal"

•Cover: 3/5
»The cover of "Broken Promises" effectively sets the is appealing and sets the tone for the book.
»But it could have been more refined in terms of font, typography, styling and aesthetic.
»Though I quite like the choice of artwork/picture used by the author in it and it aligns well with the story setting.

•Blurb: 4/5
»The blurb for "Broken Promise" intrigues readers with the promise of secrets to be unravelled about Prithvi and Priya and their broken friendship.
»A well-crafted blurb is crucial for drawing readers in, and in that sense the blurb provided is perfect with appropriate details.
Good job, dear author ✨

•Characters: 7/10
»The story revolves around the main characters Priya and Prithvi who were once-close friends but now the friendship has been marred by a broken promise.
»Priya's struggle with disappointment and the decision to seek reconciliation or move on is a common and compelling scenario.
»Since the book is about characters who were once friends but changed there are many emotions that can be showcased. The plot itself provides the author, a strong foundation for exploring character development and relationships.
»I expected a lot of emotional depth from the characters but I could not feel that in the story. It felt very monotonous, so I would suggest the author to work on that.

•Plot: 8/10
»The plot, as described, centres around the emotional aftermath of broken promises.
» The story centres around the complex relationship between Priya and Prithvi. Prithvi, once Priya’s best friend, becomes the source of her emotional turmoil due to a misunderstanding which later turns into a broken promise.
»Priya, deeply hurt by Prithvi's actions, must navigate her feelings of disappointment and betrayal while deciding whether to seek reconciliation or move on.
»The narrative delves into themes of trust and forgiveness, portraying Priya’s struggle to overcome the emotional impact of Prithvi's betrayal and reclaim her sense of self.
»Prithvi’s character adds depth to the story, reflecting the complexities of regret and guilt.
»Overall, the plot is very relatable yet unique at the same time.

•Grammar and Vocabulary: 3/5
»Overall, the grammar and vocabulary are adequate but could use improvement for a more refined reading experience.

•Enjoyment: 3/5
»The story’s premise, dealing with the emotional aftermath of broken promises and the complexities of friendship, is inherently engaging.
»However, that enjoyment factor is affected by the lack of emotional depth in the characters. The readers might not connect deeply with the characters. The themes of trust, betrayal, and reconciliation are relatable and executed well.
» You should follow the rule of "Just Show, Don’t Tell", this means that instead of explicitly stating emotions or character traits, slowly show these elements through actions, dialogue, and internal monologue. For example, showing Priya's struggle through her decisions and interactions, rather than just telling the reader about her feelings, makes for a more engaging narrative.

•Overall: 3/5
» Overall, "Broken Promises" is a beautiful story, showcasing the author's real life story.
»Talking about the book, the tone of the book remains consistent throughout, which is lovely.
»Secondly, the author’s voice is distinct and adds to the overall atmosphere of the narrative.
»The pacing of the story is also generally well-managed, balancing moments of reflection with action but some times, I felt a sudden jump and couldn't quite understand what you tried to portray.
»I personally really like the dialogues used in the book, it actually feels really natural, which is a great thing.

•Personal Note:
Dear Author, do keep writing more, you can improve a lot. Yes, the story did feel a bit devoid of emotions, but I've read your other book as well and I was basically the first one to support it, so I know your potential. I can see through your work that you've grown a bit better than before and I know you can get even better so keep trying. ✨

Reviewer: DazzlingVee_
Author: wordenchanter

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