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Results of all the romance entries. Again, I think I need to remind you, please don't mind the critics. It's mainly just flocks of suggestions and points out. It's just a preference. Don't let any feedback or comments put you down. A number is just a number. Good job to all authors, who joined this award.

please note that some of these comments and reviews were done the moment they do and it won't matter if you change the name, the content or the cover of your book when the result has already been sent.

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Author:ย Pasifaee
Judge:ย winniephebe
Title: Madness
Genre: Romance
Points: 65/100
Comments: Wasn't too bad of a book. The blurb didn't have any information on what the book was about, just a piece of the book. They didn't use quotation marks which bothered me a bit, and you could never tell who was speaking. It does build up great tension, leaving you wanting to know more. The grammar was kind of choppy, and the words themselves could have flowed better but it's nothing a little editing can't fix. I also think the characters can interact with each other a little more. Overall, it was a pretty okay read, I would like to see what becomes of it.

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Author:ย Lilys_cornerrr
Judge:ย winniephebe
Title: His Queen
Genre: Romance
Points: 75/100
Comments: Grammar and spelling needed work. The characters weren't bad, there was a variety of personalities. The book definitely has potential, just needs some major editing.

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Author:ย prettyboyvy
Judge:ย winniephebe
Title: HIM (Previously: Guys Like You)
Genre: Romance
Points: 78/100
Comments: Overall, it wasn't a bad book. There were a lot of grammar and punctuation errors. The characters hadn't really developed a personality yet.

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Author:ย CheriiesBerries
Judge:ย ThisMissyNameIsGrace
Title: Your Eyes
Genre: Romance
Total: 85/10
Comment: The prologue was a bit too much man! Like why make me cry at the beginning of the story, nooooo! It's fascinating to have werewolf clash with fandom, even though I was not too fond of the abrupt start, I still enjoyed your story.

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Author:ย FrozenShadowC
Judge:ย waterandfire_xox
Title: The Mermaid Project
Genre: Romance
Total: 87/100
Comments: Your title is interesting and unique, it goes perfectly with your cover. However, I think you can make your cover so much better. When it comes to your blurb, there are too many words. You need to summarise. 99% of the readers here on Wattpad don't have the time to sit and read that whole thing. You are also giving away too much information. A blurb is a text that is supposed to give a reader an insight into what the book is about. You have some mistakes to fix, however, no one is a perfect writer so don't worry. Very good opening chapter. A little context of when you introduced Annabeth (I think that's her name. Forgive me it's wrong). Overall, your book has got great potential. You just have to read over it and fix a few little things.

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Author:ย Amelia-Law
Judge:ย ThisMissyNameIsGrace
Title: The Royal Maid
Genre: Romance
Points: 89/100
Comment: Since I hit the blurb, at the start, it excited me, however boops, it was abruptly cut and I was like "Whhattttt...?" Such a wonderful blurb. Now the first chapter was filled with the reluctance of a parting family even though they hid their pain to make the female lead strong, it was still wrong in my opinion. At least, her mother comforted her whilst her brother and father remained somewhat emotionless. Overall, I pretty much enjoy this story, keep it up ;)

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Author:ย dalola_k
Judge:ย winniephebe
Title: He Brings Me Cupcakes
Genre: Romance
Points: 90/100
Comments: I genuinely loved this story and want to continue reading it. They were very few grammatical and spelling issues. I would love to see a little more of the character's personalities though. I love the idea of the story and can't wait to see what happens.

Author:ย JSPRomComs
Judge:ย ThisMissyNameIsGrace
Title: Stolen Heart
Genre: Romance
Total: 90/100
Comment: The female lead had me laughing, she's like a ball of sarcasm and I love it, she's sassy and playful, and I enjoyed her character. "Even though I read your story before." overall good writing!

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Author:ย thunderbird999
Judge:ย ThisMissyNameIsGrace
Title: The Best Friend Equation
Genre: Romance
Points: 94/100
Comment: I admit, I love this story! The chemistry between the leads is cute and interesting, making me grin at my screen, much like an aunty. I love the way you structure your sentences with little to almost no grammatical errors. Which made the story even more enjoyable.

Author:ย Ibirockerchick
Judge:ย waterandfire_xox
Title: His Ugly Heart
Genre: Romance
Total: 94/100
Comments: Beautiful, beautiful cover! I love the way you positioned the phrase "heart," even though the little features in it are amazing. Everything just matches perfectly. With your blurb, I was given a glimpse of everything. I love the tension between the two characters. After reading the opening chapter, I had an overview of what the book was going to be about, which is excellent. However, there are times when you had little mistakes, but they are just some easy fixes. Keep up the good job!

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Author:ย Hjaynee
Judge: waterandfire_xox
Title: ๐”๐๐•๐„๐ˆ๐‹๐ˆ๐๐† ๐ƒ๐€๐๐“๐„ 3.1
Genre: Romance
Total: 97/100
Comments: Your title is perfect. I can already tell what the story is going to be about. The fact that you even put the definition of "UNVEIL" helps the readers to know what that word means. The cover goes perfectly with the blurb and title of your story. Nothing to criticise here. The opening chapters are just great. I gained insight into the relationship between the protagonist and her daughter. The fact that you described their relationship in such a loving way makes me want to continue reading the story. I didn't read the whole book, but I would love to continue when I have time. Due to how good your descriptions of characters, different elements, etc were described, If I was ever to see your book on a shelf, I would buy it!

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Author:ย Chaseison
Judge:ย ThisMissyNameIsGrace
Title: The Dark Road
Genre: Romance
Points: 99/100
Comment: I love this story! Why? Because it was the way the story was told, from the male lead's point of view! I enjoyed it especially since it was usually the female pov it would be in and this made me grin even though the story was about depression, and pain I rocked this story with grins.

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