Here is the entry result of Historical Fiction. Now I want to remind you, as I already did a million times, the number, the critics, the comments, none of it was there to downgrade your work. It's purely one's preference and opinion and just a number. Do not mind it, for a critic is supposed to push you forward, not in an attempt to hurt you in any way. 

please note that some of these comments and reviews were done the moment they do and it won't matter if you change the name, the content or the cover of your book when the result has already been sent.

𝟓𝐭𝐡 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: dwarkaratna
Judge: -sylver
Title: Yadavi: The Name Of Yearning
Genre: Historical Fiction
Points: 72/100
Comments: I really like your story a lot. I think it's creative, I don't really see a lot of Indian stories around Wattpad. I noticed from the cover and the tags that your story is supposed to be like a script but it doesn't look like that. I feel like you should add more details in your story involving scenery and character appearances as I can't really imagine much of the story. Also, work on your story structure. The italics and the bold just feel weird. I didn't really understand the purpose of using them like that because readers aren't going to be able to tell when something's supposed to be emphasized or not. 

⊱ ──────𝐡𝐨𝐧𝐨𝐫𝐚𝐛𝐥𝐞 𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 ────── ⊰

𝟒𝐭𝐡 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: Bebo-Owens
Judge: Bridget_Boyd
Title: Hollow Promises
Genre: Historical Fiction
Score: 74.5/100
Comments: The main problem with the book was the writing style, the grammar and the spelling. But observing closely, upon reaching chapter 5, all of those three problems seem to improve a bit for the better. Forced dialogue, a few traits that seem unrealistic to me, forced chemistry and desire and resolve were also my critics of the book. I do hope it went more naturally. Tension in the plot needs buildups. It can't just be written into it with no care. But no worries, it's nothing a read-over can't fix. Great job though. It was one interesting read that I think is worth reading.

⊱ ──────𝐰𝐢𝐧𝐧𝐞𝐫𝐬 ────── ⊰

𝟑𝐫𝐝 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: ColorfulWorldOfMine
Judge: -sylver
Title: Donovan Castle Chronicles: Volume 1
Genre: Historical Fiction
Points: 83/100
Comments: I really like the idea of your story. The plot was very interesting and suspenseful. I loved all the details. I usually don't like when people add pictures to their stories but you nail scenery details pretty well so I didn't mind. The characters' relationships with each other were great, you have a nice story.

𝟐𝐧𝐝 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: CrysTravel2019
Judge: -sylver
Title: Land Of The Unknown
Genre: Historical Fiction
Points: 85/100
Comments: The story is a beautiful work of historical fiction. I loved the idea of it. Your details were well written. I feel like you should work on how you tell the story. You have nice wording but you do a lot of telling instead of showing. You should work on letting character actions and emotions flow together. Other than that amazing story. 

𝟏𝐬𝐭 𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞

Author: BellOfSilence
Judge: -sylver
Title: Lost Boys Of London
Genre: Historical Fiction
Points: 93/100
Comments: Your story is so beautifully written I was disappointed that it's a short story. I loved it a lot. The details were amazing, the plot was so captivating. It was a great story, something that I could read over and over again. 

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Congrats to all!