Author . @shin_ryum

shin_ryumeow
Reviewer. Kittens_Bunny

Title: 7/10 . STRAWBERRY
The title was commonly pretty related to the topic as the  code name of one of the female lead . . Honestly the title didn't have any uniqueness to itself that it made the readers gasp. In short it could have been better if the title had a bit of creativity. I liked the name , did not imagined it would turn out to be a code name.

Cover: 7 / 10.
The cover is good  . The theme of the cover was soft and fluffy .  The font  and the diagonally setting of the text seems lovely . All the mini letters and strawberries looked really cute.

Description: 4/10
It could have been longer and a bit more detailed . A bit of detailing and more words were needed . It didn't even seem like a summary and more of a small passage . This won't attract the readers as readers mostly read the book after reading the blurb.

Pace: 7/10
It was slow and steady . The descriptions in each chapter were good but could have been better  .  The last chapter related to the kissing scene had invoked an interest in me as it was like a cliffhanger to know what she would do next after witnessing it . The author should make small paragraphs instead of lines . It looks boring to scroll and read lines .

Concept and plot: 6/ 10
As 4 chapters  along with prologues didn't give an exact idea about the upcoming plot or concept but after reading the last chapter I have a hope that it would turn into a good romance and angst book. The concept of code names is a good one though .

Characters: 8/ 10
Well 4 chapters aren't enough to judge the characters . But i liked  Cherry's character more than any other . All the characters were lovely . Yuna's protective nature towards Cherry matched so well . (Sorry i dont know TWICE much so cant say much about the characters ) but overall the characters are really good .

Grammar and Vocabulary : 10/10
No grammatical errors were noticed.  Purely perfect grammar as well as the vocabulary skills of the writer's good . I appreciate the author's attention towards the editing . Also while using french sentences dont use much the first chapter was filled with french sentences making me lose interest.

Writing style: 6 /10

Make use of different words to make the chapters look professional . And try to make the chapters in paragraphs rather than in lines . Paragraphs give the book vibes . And the placing of one event to another was a bit confusing .

Overall impression: 7/10

I liked the book and was looking forward to the development of the characters . I hope when more chapters are published the wishes are fulfilled . But yea i loved it alot .

Rating of the book: 6/10
Please don't get discouraged . The book is good but the silly mistakes are the main reason for the given score .

Total:61 /100

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