Author : Darcyfiles

Reviewer : iamjenlisasuperior

Title :: 10/10

The title is very intriguing, it catches the attention of readers from one glance.

Cover :: 9/10

The cover is quite nice but I think the background picture can get some improvement, like make it dark because it's related to traumas of the children.

Description :: 10/10

I must say the description is very well written with cliffhanger that makes the reader want to know more about it.

Pace :: 10/10

The pace the author chose was quite nice, it was neither too fast nor too slow, it was perfect to keep the hook on reader's mind.

Concept and plot :: 10/10

The concept and plot is just amazing, I loved it a lot, it's very unique and the way the author portraits it is way beyond perfection.

Characters Development :: 10/10

I loved every character, especially Sunghoon, I do think that the author shouldn't have killed Ari in the first chapter though, you should have let the reader's and Ari have some connections, it would make the killing of Ari have some effect on the reader's, but it's just my opinion, just keep that in mind for your next story, since this one is finished already.

Grammar and Spelling :: 6/10

There are not much grammatical errors or spelling mistakes just a few but they are repeatedly going on in almost every chapter, but not for oh so extreme as to get the reader off the hook. I will mention some mistakes that has been done in the story.

Firstly, the author didn't leave space after comma or full stops sometimes.
Secondly, the upper case hasn't been in used in some words like 'i" and "jay".

Thirdly, there should be a comma or full stop after a dialogue ends, for example, "Let's play hide and seek.".
Wraps am arm, I don't know what it was supposed to be, maybe an?
Lastly, there have been changes of POV without any mention, if you are doing the POV of Melody, at least mention it in the start.

Spelling mistakes were not frequent to say the least, like minor mistakes, writing first instead of fist. Go instead of got, is instead of it, using a instead of an, using the instead of they.

"You are you going to be kill me," you can recreate it by writing, "You are going to kill me."
Pat instead of 'pay', that used when there should be then.

Writing style :: 9/10

The writing style is very good, it keeps the suspension and makes the story even more mysterious.

Overall impression :: 10/10

I usually don't read 'straight' stories but this one got my attention, like literally I can proudly say this that it's the best story I have ever read in the 'straight' section, and I have loved every aspect of it, the characters, the plot and how the author provided alternate endings for reader's of different interests, the epilogue was just fine for me though but I liked the alternative ones too.

Rating of the book :: 9/10
This story is very nice I must admit, so I will be rating this story on the scale of 10 - 9, the spellings could get some improvement apart from it, it's just amazing and all.

Total: 93/100

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