20. Prank Call
Review by:Β Tae-s-bear
Author of the book:Β taes_smirk
Title :: 9/10
The title is directly proportional with the story concept as the story begins with a prank call only but I would recommend you to make it more unique and interesting as this name sounds simple.
Cover :: 10/10
The cover is simple yet unique and elegant and the dictum mentioned below the picture is making the cover more engaging. Good job!
Description :: 10/10
The description is perfectly giving the readers a curiosity to open and read the book once and it is completely matching with the plot of the story too. Well-written.
Pace :: 10/10
Each and every sub-stories is related to one another as most of them contain scandals and from the prank call to the female lead as a model, all the chapters are going at a proper pace. I hope you continue this till the end of the story.
Concept and plot :: 19/20
Although the plot of prank calls is very common in Wattpad, the topic which is making this specific book unique is fashion and models. All the information about the fashion topic is making it an exception from other books.
Characters :: 7/10
All the characters here are totally matching with their own role but I think that in the last scandal that is mentioned in the story after Y/N became a model the reader might feel that the expression Y/N is giving after reading the headlines is exaggerated.
Grammar :: 8/10
There are no grammatical mistakes in the whole story as far as I know but there are some typing errors you should correct. For example, wrist watch is written as worst so make sure to proofread the chapters and correct them.
Writing style :: 9/10
Your writing pattern makes the readers read more chapters at once as you make the story unique with your concept. All the chapters come with different sub-stories which are keeping the reader entertained but I would recommend you not to overripe Y/N's expression on the story every time as I said in the last scandal everyone knows at that type of situation everyone feels scared or something like that for getting a bad image in the whole world but at that Y/N was thinking about her bias which is completely opposite from the reality.
Overall impression :: 9/10
All the memes that are used in the story are really funny and the writing pattern for messages is described in a proper way which doesn't even raise a problem for the readers but I would suggest you give enough warnings for using mature words as many readers can get triggered.
Total :: 91/100
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