Author of the book: ArdenTownsend

Reviewer: Sugaga777

Title: 8/10

The title of this book is good and unique but it's big for a book… The title mentions the whole concept though. Add a subtitle, it would be good.

Cover: 7/10

The cover seems well-edited and neat. It certainly describes the story's concept, but it is not eye-catching.

Blurb: 9.5/10

The blurb was in quick length and to the point. Use of quote is good, you can add some dialogues if you like. It was perfect.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 8/10

The use of grammar is fine, I found some grammatical errors and some misstructured sentences. The vocabulary was casual yet satisfying accordingly but I suggest you to use more complex words to make a nice atmosphere.

Pace: 10/10

The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read, everything is becoming more interesting. Many things were disclosed in the story.

Characters Development: 9.5/10

Characters have a good personality, according to their behaviour, they have some good emotional intelligence.

Concept and Plot: 10/10

The concept of the story is really great, it's very unique and bold to mention and write a story on a topic like this with different beings and not just humans.

Writing style: 9.5/10

Your writing style is good and decent like a novel. I have nothing much to say, it's really perfect.

Overall Presentation: 8.5/10

This book is a really good, unique concept with a thrilling and perfect amount of other emotions… You just need a more amazing cover, a subtitle… Other than that it's all good!

Rating of the book: 8.5/10

I enjoyed this book so much. Just a little more improvement.

Total: 88.5/100

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