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Winner - Taehyungsworld77

Runner Up - DreamyM74

Dead Silence by Taehyungsworld77

Title : 5/5

the title is great and very attractive. It easily catches the attention of readers.

Cover : 5/5

The cover is beautiful and fits the story.

Description : 8/10

the description is good and well written.

Plot : 13/15

The plot is very well written but it can be improved.

Vocabulary : 10/10

The vocabulary is very nice.

Grammar and Punctuation : 15/15

The grammar and punctuation of the story is very good.

Pace : 4/5

The pace of the story is okay.

Character Introduction and Development : 10/10

I loved the characters Introduction and their development.

Writing style : 15/15

the writing style is very interesting, and I loved it.

Overall evaluation : 8/10

Total : 93/100

Whispers of Heart by DreamyM74

Title : 5/5

The title is very interesting, Loved it.

Cover : 5/5

the cover looks very good and matches perfectly with the story.

Description : 6/10

the description is a bit confusing at first but if you read the story you’ll understand it.

Plot : 10/15

the plot is okay.

Vocabulary : 10/10

the vocabulary is very great and it fits perfectly the theme of the story

Grammar and Punctuation : 15/15

The story has good grammar and punctuation.

Pace : 5/5

The pace of the story is perfect.

Character introduction and Development :
8/10

The characters are introduced very well and their emotions are so relatable.

Writing style : 15/15

I personally loved the writing style of the story.

Overall evaluation : 9/10

Total : 89/100Β 

Promise Me Captain Kim by BlueRosyxx

Title : 5/5

I love the title, it perfectly matches with the story.

Cover : 5/5

The cover is very well made and looks beautiful !

Description : 10/10

The description is very well written and it explains the plot of the story very well and it gives a great insight of the story.

Plot : 8/15

The plot is okay, but it is really slow.

Vocabulary : 10/10

The vocabulary is good and it feels like a poem.

Grammar and punctuation : 15/15

The grammar and punctuation is very good. Not any error I found.

Pace : 3/5

The chapters are very short, so sometime it's disrupts the flow of the story.

Character Introduction and Development :Β  9/10

The character are introduced well and they are easy to understand.

Writing style : 15/15

Reading the story, felt like reading a poem, it was really unique style of writing.

Overall evaluation : 8/10

Total : 88/100

Bubble by 4everSherlocked

Title : 3/5

The title is very intriguing but it doesn't immediately convey the concept of the story.

Cover : 5/5

The cover is very well made and it’s very original and looks unique.

Description : 10/10

The story's description is impressive, it provides the good amount of information about the story theme and plot.

Plot : 14/15

The plot was very well written and its as really impressive.

Vocabulary : 10/10

Vocabulary is just perfect and up to the mark.

Grammar and punctuation : 15/15

The grammar and punctuation is very good. I didn't find any error.

Pace : 5/5

The pace is very good in this story, it's neither too fast nor too slow.

Character Introduction and development : 8/10

All the characters are very introduced and developed.

Writing style : 15/15

The writing style is very unique, but it really suits the story.

Overall evaluation : 8/10

Overall, the story is really good and I liked it.

Total : 85/100

The Cage by HJ_Fiction

Title : 5/5

the title matches with the story.

Cover : 5/5

The cover is very well made.

Description : 3/10

The description is very short and doesn't really provide the good amount of spoiler about the story.

Plot : 10/15

The plot is okay but it can be improved.

Vocabulary : 10/10

the vocabulary is very good.

Grammar and Punctuation : 15/15

the grammar and punctuation is very well and there are not really any errors.

Pace : 5/5

the pace is perfect.

Character Introduction and Development : 7/10

The chapters are very short, so the developed is not really well.

Writing style : 15/15

the writing style is really original.

Overall evaluation : 9/10

The story is great.

Total : 70/100

Taehyungsworld77





DreamyM74


Judge - ARMYSHi20

Thank you so much for judging so fast and providing the participants with such detailed reviews.

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