013 Dark Desires
By -jennieverse-

TITLE- 2/5
The title is pretty common in Wattpad. Choose something interesting.

BLURB- 3/5
The blurb was well written but you need to frame it a bit more.

BEGINNING- 4/5
I liked the setting of the story. Good start.

GRAMMAR- 12/15
The grammar is good.  The usage of vocabulary is good too. Punctuations were also correctly added. All over it was nice.

WRITING STYLE- 8/10
Your writing style is unique...and I could see your efforts in writing. Well done.

PLOT- 10/20
Plot is pretty common in Wattpad, but you need to execute it in your own way to make it different.

SURROUNDINGS- 5/10
The description of the surroundings and other background objects was insufficient.

CONTENT INSIDE- 7/10
The length of the chapters is a bit short. The content has the full potential to attract readers. Otherwise, it's pretty nice.

PACE- 5/5
The pace is good.

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT-5/5
Yes. Perfectly.

TOTAL- 61/90
All the best.

014 Love beyond the stage light
By TaeTaeGinger

TITLE- 4/5

BLURB- 4.5/5

BEGINNING- 4/5

GRAMMAR- 13/15

WRITING STYLE- 8/10

PLOT- 18/20

SURROUNDINGS- 8/10

CONTENT INSIDE- 8.5/10

PACE- 5/5

ENJOYMENT AND ENGAGEMENT- 4/5

TOTAL- 68/90
This masterpiece plunges the readers into the fractured mind of a person. The narrative explores vulnerabilities, fears, and the weight of isolation, pulling readers into emotional turmoil. The story's intensity and depth make it a gripping journey of weakness, resilience, and self-discovery.

015 Nepenthe
By Twix345

Title: 5/5

Blurb: 5/5

Beginning: 3.5/5

Grammar: 15/15

Writing Style: 7.5/10

Plot: 15/20

Surroundings: 10/10

Content Inside: 7.5/10

Pace: 5/5

Enjoyment and Engagement: 5/5

Total: 78.5/90

Review:

The title and blurb called to me as I read through the information, and I really loved the information the blurb gave. It left enough for me to guess some stuff while still being surprised. The beginning seemed a little clique, but it was still okay. I love the banter between Leo and Maria. It was funny. Your writing style was good but sometimes you pointed out somethings several times, an example would be in the beginning when you explained what happened to Leo, you mention the abuse several times and the swollen cheek. I've read things similar to this plot but the novel is still great since I can see the differences as well. Your surroundings were great, I could visualize it and the breakrooms were cold which made the experience better! I found that your chapters were long. I read Nepenthe on my lunch break and it took the entire hour to get the required chapters, that's a little long. I thought you're pace was doing fine, I found it didn't go too fast or too slow, it went just right in my opinion. I did enjoy reading this despite it taking me the entire lunch break, but I do plan to continue reading this since I'm curious to see who the stalker is, but I have my ideas.

015 A Night With No Stars
By MercuryEff

Title: 5/5

Blurb: 3.5/5

Beginning: 3.5/5

Grammar: 15/15

Writing Style: 10/10

Plot: 20/20

Surroundings: 5/10

Content Inside: 7.5/10

Pace: 3/5

Enjoyment and Engagement: 3/5

Total: 75.5/90

Review:

I think you have a good novel but I feel there are some things that could be adjusted to make it better. The beginning chapter didn't get my attention, and I felt that even the first half of it didn't benefit the story. I feel that you could do better with the surroundings using more of the five senses, to be able to give us better pictures. I thought the pace was going a tad slow at least to me. The content inside the story is good, I just feel that without the description we'd get using the five senses it makes it harder to picture and place ourselves into the story.

016 Vote The Bitch For Prom Queen
By IskippU

Title: 5/5

Blurb: 3.5/5

Beginning: 3.5/5

Grammar: 15/15

Writing Style: 10/10

Plot: 15/20

Surroundings: 10/10

Content Inside: 10/10

Pace: 5/5

Enjoyment and Engagement: 5/5

Total: 82/90

Review:

The title popped out and smacked me in the face. I loved it. The blurb did have emojis, I wouldn't recommend that however, I think the trigger warnings should be able to have their own page because not everyone reads the blurb. The beginning seemed a little clique however, I did enjoy it regardless. As far as I saw your grammar was spot on and so was your writing style! The plot has somewhat been done before but I do love the twists to the book to make it more original. The surroundings are pretty realistic, however I think they can be a little more detailed to them especially with the five scenes since those make it more realistic and easier to picture. The pace seems to be going well and I can keep up easily, and I loved reading the book and I plan to continue to read!

017 Merry Christmas (I hate you?)
By relreal

Title: 4/5

Blurb: 5/5

Beginning: 5/5

Grammar: 11/15

Writing Style: 9/10

Plot: 19/20

Surroundings: 7.5/10

Content Inside: 10/10

Pace: 5/5

Enjoyment and Engagement: 3.5/5

Total: 79/90

Review:
Your work is well-plotted and aligns beautifully with your unique writing style. However, I did notice a few grammatical errors that might need a bit of polishing. There were also a few moments where I found myself slightly confused, which could be clarified to make the narrative flow more seamlessly. Adding more sensory details to the scenes could enhance the reader's experience, painting a richer picture and helping us immerse ourselves further into the story. That said, the content is strong, and the pacing feels just right—not too slow, nor too rushed. With a little refinement, it could shine even brighter.