Ordered by: rabisworld02

Reviewed by: Keres_69

Cover(8/10): The cover is simple yet elegant but it didn't show off the plot much. 

Title(3/5): I liked the fact it just wasn't any cliche title that could've been used in the story based on the plot but, maybe you can try using a better title as the recent one makes it look like a normal romance theme but since it's an alpha and omega series, It would be better with a title which gives out strong vibes.

Blurb(7/10): The structure of the blurb didn't satisfy me much. Sometimes, the writing seems to overlap when there is no gap in between dialogues and action tags which makes it look messy. I suggest leaving some gaps in between to make it look neat and tidy and help the readers to make out what type of story it is. 

First Impression (3/5): When we actually choose a book to read, we must have a very strong impact which I failed to get. Yes, the overall geist was nice, but it felt like there are many other similar stories out there, so why should this book be the one I read. It is advisable, you make your blurb especially as well as the cover a bit more intriguing. 

Readers Interaction(9/10): The book has got quite a good amount of readers as well as comments as it truly deserves. Remember to interact with each one of your readers and work on the lagging points to help it reach out even more people. 

Plot and Concepts(23.5/25): The plot was quite captivating and attractive for me even though I felt there were some small plot holes but I really did feel captivated as it's my first time reading a taekook story.

Characters and Emotions(8/10): I did have some confusion in between while reading the story as new characters kept coming up sometimes. As for the emotions, it was well written.

Writing Style(7/10): The writing style didn't satisfy me much. But, the writing structure and consistency were good.

Grammar and Vocabulary(18/10): The vocabulary was good even though there were some grammatical errors, and the writing style managed to hide them.

Reviewer's Thought/overall: In my opinion as someone who doesn't read any Taekook fanfiction books, I really did enjoy the story a lot and I will start reading them more from now on. The plot was captivating and attractive enough for me and except for some errors here and there, the story is really well written.