Book Name: My Arrogant Byuntae

Author: 123Lolly_tae

Reviewer: Anika 

Cover: 0/05

The cover is not attractive nor eye-catching at all. The image of idols and the way they are positioned isn't appealing. The size and style of fonts don't suit. The author's name isn't even there to avoid chances of Plagiarism, there are many armys who use the nickname "tete". Covers are the first thing that catch reader's eyes but this is messy and doesn't urge readers to read the book.

Title: 2/05

The title usually gives a glimpse of the story so I advise you to use English words because most of the readers don't know korean words. They won't understand what that means so you can't catch their attention this way. The title is based on the female protagonist's personality rather than plot. It is somehow appropriate for the story.

Synopsis: 3/10

There is an "i" capitalization mistake and usage of punctuations is very less. The summary about the plot is attention-grabbing and intriguing but not the dialogues above it. What the female protagonist said wasn't that shocking to make their jaw drop. There is a spelling mistake too, its "clenching" Everyone judges the story with a description and a catchy description is what pulls the readers into the story, if you fix your writing style with logical dialogues and reaction then it will surely look attractive.

Execution: 3/10

The pace of the story was too rushed. You need to put more effort in every aspect of this book whether it's the title, cover, blurb, writing style and the storyline. Every event and incident connecting the plot should be interesting and logical as well, otherwise the readers will definitely lose their interest. Many of them were interesting but I think the writing style ruined the mood.

Plot: 15/20

The plot is rare, interesting and intriguing. The storyline is still at the exposition phase so there aren't any plot twists, suspense or drama yet.

Writing Style: 5/20

There aren't many descriptions of appearance, emotions, reactions, place etc. Readers feel and imagine everything you write so make sure to write details to create a better imagination of the world or scenario in their mind. The usage of necessary punctuation in your entire book is very less. The paragraphs are very short, most of them are just dialogue with small action tags due to which the pace looks very fast.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 5/20

Punctuation:-

Chapter 1,

(Im) a feminist 

Reviewer: Add Apostrophe between I'm

Chapter 1,

I looked at them wide eyes "you are merging company?" (I said) shocked 

Reviewer: You forgot to add the verb "with" after "them" in the dialogue. Capitalize the first letter of the first word in the action tag.

Correction: I asked

Chapter 2,

Now tell me why were you shouting" I said and saw him gulping 

Reviewer: add question mark (?) In interrogation dialogue and replace "said" with "asked"

Chapter 2,

He pouted and held his ears. "Im sorry." 

Reviewer: Same mistake

Chapter 2,

(Ill) again apologize to her whole heartedly

Reviewer: Use Apostrophe in I'll

Chapter 2,

Why didn't like my hello.

Reviewer: You forgot to add a question mark here.

Chapter 2,

"your so funny"

Reviewer: There is difference between "your" and "you're"

Chapter 2,

Ill definitely marry them sorry their son. 

Reviewer: Same mistake of Apostrophe. Also use minus next to "them" or something else like she dramatically paused before she corrects herself. The point is, I had a problem understanding this sentence because she didn't react at all and it made me rethink many times about what happened.

Chapter 3,

"Where are we going" I asked looking at him.

Reviewer: It's a question so a question mark at the end of sentence is necessary. Add comma after "asked"

Chapter 2,

I was stopped by a voice "hey you (were) are you going first register here."

Reviewer: First letter of first word at the beginning of the sentence after quotation marks should be capital. Add exclamation mark after "hey you" and question mark after "going" 

Correction: Hey you! Where are you going? First register here.

Spelling mistakes:-

Chapter 2,

I scoffed and stood properly (maintaing) my high profile aura

Correction: Maintaining 

Chapter 3,

They (flinced) lightly and looked at us smiling sheepishly 

Correction: flinched

Chapter 5,

Our parents moved to (isde) talking with the guest

Correction: Side

Chapter 5,

she was not waking and (whinned) lightly

Correction: Whined

Chapter 6,

I heard (there) giggle.

Correction: Their

Ellipsis:- 

Chapter 2,

I smirked feeling proud of myself..

Reviewer: Use three dots to indicate trailing off or something. Add comma after "smirked"

Vocabulary:- 

Chapter 2,

Saying that and leaving him with his dumbfounded 

Correction: leaving him dumbfounded.

Chapter 2,

This is what you get for shouting (on a) girl and making her afraid" I said crossing my hands on my chest.

Reviewer: Correct preposition is "at her" and we cross our arms, not hands. Add comma after "said"

Chapter 2,

"Hey Tessa." (said) the women

Corrected: Greeted. Use different synonyms instead of only one.

Chapter 3,

Btw we are ready to marry eachother.

Reviewer: Don't use short forms like btw or cuz. They are talking, more like pronouncing words out loud, not text messaging.

Chapter 3,

I flinched (listening) my phone ring

Correction: Hearing

Chapter 4,

Tessa pov

Reviewer: Make sure to use bold for headings like these. Capitalize "pov"

Chapter 6,

He gulped and took my hands removing my hands and got up from the bed.

Correction: He gulped amd push my hands away 

Characters & Development: 4/10

Tessa doesn't act like a feminist at all. You made her badass and you portrayed that as feminist, when in reality Introvert, extravert, cold, soft; any women can be feminist if they just strongly stand for their rights besides Tessa always simp over Taehyung meanwhile he doesn't even show slight interest except when we are reading from his point of view. Also I must say her sassy and flirty remarks were really interesting and quite hilarious. There is no chemistry between any characters, I only felt it when Tessa's family cried on wedding day.

Total: 37/100

Final Note: The plot is really great and rare so I advise you to edit and improve your writing skills. It would be really sad if you write a book with a creative idea but don't get recognition because of such basic mistakes.